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Interesting the pictures are a nice touch and the plot isn't so cliche like other stories with humans. Will follow this story hopefully you update soon
Dude I dig this. I would like some more fine fellow
This is getting interesting I want more please
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Yay, first fanfic I've found with something from spacex. Although please tell me the guy in the suite isnt elon. That would be kinda weird for what this fic has going.
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Prrety interesting, waiting for more, keep up the good work :D.
This is an interesting start, honestly.
Great story start!
Delta Vee has some seriouse issues plus...
Fucking really? Knocking a already injured alien out?
Did she try to cause a war? Because thats how you start it
Fuck... I expected this to happen in reverse... How Ironic
Somehow i think there will be hell to pay for Delta Vee ones everything is over.
-Assault
-Treat of murder
-Extortion
-Treason
-Bad language
-To be cotinued
Well Orion... Welcome to the dumb of Equestria
How do they understand eatch others? Even if they speak for some reason the same language there is a different mouth form to consider ( accent at least should be present ).
I hope for some universal translation spell etc.
Its realistic since Equestria has many different species. ( Griffons chirp and meow, D-Dogs
lick there ballsgrowl and bark, Ponys talk like sailors, Changelings click and chirp etc. )---
Edit: Training? Isnt that like military processes like: Name,Rank,Organisation, Reason of being there?
Delta Vee... First Alien bordel of Equestria
Lets be fair... American and other main power probably wouldnt excluded that option
There is nowere to run... For all Orion knows he landed on the property of the nicest being of Equestria...
To be fair... Hes American... On the other hand...
Hes a Astronaut and there for not mad as political leaders often are...
How he ended up Equestria? Is his Ship/Crew coming back for him?
How long will his water and food supplys hold out?
Hope he didnt substained critical injuries...
-Crashland on Equestria
-Delta dropped his Escapepod from a few meter high
-Delta knocked him out with a blunt object to the head
-Mental Stress thanks to a sociopaths and general distress in Orions place...
Can Orion breath & consume what Equestria has to offer?
Fuck... Discord will have fun watching this mess build up...
How long until Delta Vees familie get wind of it...
This will be hard to cover up... Later ones his existance is known Delta Vee will have to answer many questions
Btw... What happend that he needed a escape pod in the first place?
Will Orion boop the snoot? Find out next update gentlebronys and pegasisters
Pretty sure a visor can handle a double facepalm with full strength. I guess it was the feard 'facepalm of death'. Space also weakens muscle strength... Yeah i know... I take it to seriously
Ironic... He could have stayed on the space station and have more stuff to work with but... Yeah... Panic is never a thing you want take reason away...
Mach three? Pretty sure even than i wouldnt try
So... Behind every 'Black hole in space' is Equestrias universe... NEAT
Discord rules
Pretty sure this story is our future...
Because Pluto is a dog 
Our planet is in decline already... Terraforming will be needed. I vote for Mercury
Hes fucked... He get trough a black hole without his space station. Hes signaled last massage might come trough but they write him off as casualy of 'space bitchslaped him out of existance'.
Perhaps he can gain magic powers? I always wondered how
)...
booping pastel ponys mussle feels likeadditional abilitys manifest and what they would be? Examples:-Increase in Body performance
Strengh, speed, health, reaction time, fertility& stuff.
- New features? Literally every magic you can think of or perhaps Marvel universe abilitys start to spawn.
I would like healing/restoration magic or perhaps my touch can make stuff happen
( 'The Boopening' for instance. Great story for Sci Fi cuddle fans
But seriously that would be awesome
I wonder if his Space station is stil intact or it crashlanded on Equestria... Perhaps his plans survive, they evolve, than they begin to search and eventualy find there caretaker
▪Plants be like (^.~)/) gimme that hug!
▪Orion be like [°-°] ... O...K...
O man... I just realised that Orion cant get Delta Vee as a romantic option
She get screwed over by a stallion via getting pregnant in the hight of her potencial. Now with this option ( genius by stealing human ideas ) of become famous and rich via tech Improvements, the possibly to boop the pony into a friendly desposition will not work
Boop the pony, pet the pony, or make some hybrids is out of the question. So no Centaiers like Tirek (pony x heeuuuman, no Sphinx ( griffon x chirpmaaan ), no D sizes bitches ( D-Dog x woof man ), no Antro catgirls ( Abisinian x Purrrman ). Someone else want to see a Naga make love with Orion and basicly create X-Com 2 Vipers? That would be neat~ ... ... ...
Anyway since he cant get sweet on her its going to be tough. Especially since he lost his Spaceship full of entertainment. His daily life might be literally more colorful but a cold pony jailor is making that enjoyment a problem
This story is 3 Chapters long and already gold worth... The hell is that story not featured yet?
Did he just pull a buzz lightyear?
Well route 'A' just passed 'if' and become just a 'when'.
By then he might be more than a slave with ideas
Got around to reading this story, and I'll be keeping an eye on it. I do like how he looked to the optimistic side of things rather than sit around and mope for days on end, way too many fics I've read with that cliche. Perhaps he is simply a man that wants to get things done? Anyway, good job so far. :)
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I was!?
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Yep. I click on Fimfiction and than i see your Story. Click 'popular now' than check the first two lists and you find it.
Edit:
Do 'popular now' work universal or is it user designt via cookies?
Anyway this story got featured on the list when i comment on it.
Wow. This story is very interesting! I cant wait to read more!
Nice work so far.
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But a like? Do comments count
Drones... Nice. I would probably go for beer boxes with integrated opener or for computer coding from the escape pod.
Great chapter.
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Lol! Yup just like that. XD
MRE are great in general to store. To bad his supplys will probably be used up in a month or so...
Already scraping his Capsule
That tough. Well... Lets see how the next chapter will progress.
Great chapter, nice twist in the end
Wow Delta is a thoroughly unlikable bitch and Orion... also a bitch, funny how word meanings change with context.
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Why Orion?
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How long was he awake before he thoroughly rolled over and agreed to what you could easily be call indentured servitude?
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Orion is boned anyway... Best chances he has is a mutual benefishal relationship. Hes useful and occupied and dont get cut open by the gavourment. Win-win
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Ok one, Orion doesn't know that he's boned because he was only awake for 30 seconds before he prostrate himself. Two I don't think you understand what the phrase 'mutual benefishal relationship' means because this is extortion at very best. Lastly three there's nothing win-win about this, giving your technology to an alien that without reason attacked and restrained you against your will is not only stupid but cowardly especially after they already threatens you with death and worse. Also the whole "the government's going to cut me up because I'm an alien" is honestly a dumb trope that would cause way more harm to your species then anything you would learn from examining a corpse especially if that species is more technologically advanced than yours.
Can’t wait for the next chapter
i'm enjoying this! keep up the good work!
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I think Humans would be stupid enough to pull that anyway... If he resist her or even becomes a treat i doubt Delta would take any chances. Survivel is not just the strongest instinct but the only one that counts. For all Delta know the 'human' is the equivalent of a 'Xenomorph from the alien saga' or a 'zerg from starcraft universe'. She is a Civilian without anything to contain him if he really would he hostile. Better to play hard at the start and soften over time than risking anything. She is basicly play a high reward high risk gamble. She has only Orions word that hes a 'nice peaceful alien'. We readers now it, she so not.
For instance take the movie 'District 9'.
Humans have cut open and experimented on living 'subjects' to unlock there tech.
Yes i know its not the beat example because his tech isnt DNA locked or there are 'spare aliens' but i read story were 'moral' were a luxury at best and totaly different from ours.
I can name 2 story were Equestria would prety mutch act like i suspect americans do in movies were researchers get there hands on alien tech and crew.
It was a pretty rough read.
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I would probably behave like Delta just more polite and less aggressiv. Than again... There are human cultures that would consider polite behavior a sign of fear and weakness. Its literally all theory anyway...
Possible exampel what happens if the gavourment get to him:
Can’t wait for the next chapter
Is this going to continue
I hope you finish it :)
it's a great story
It's a good story so far, I hope it continues.
Damn is wish you would continue this story I was really hoping to see it get an update soon
I hope this story continue
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I like this story.
Also, How in God's name did Orion not know about sex!?!?
Update
Finally 
Waaaiiit... Is he kinda retarded? Not in a insulting way but via religion or other reasons decline him access to sex educational material and lessons. Hm... Odd
It's good
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You'll have to wait and see.
That's not a bad theory, considering that Star Wars: Rebels already featured time travel, which is actually an important part in Ahsoka's story.
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......seriously? I just made that up for fun XD
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Seriously. If those rumors about the sequel trilogy being non-canon are true, then I'm willing to bet that the explanation as to why the sequels occurred is because of a timeline split that was caused in Rebels.
Though that's just my opinion.