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8996095
Jeez, at least tell me what I did wrong...
8996114
Before you start bitching at me essentially, know that this is my first fanfiction, so don't get mad if everything isn't perfect...
8996125
You're just a ray of sunshine, aren't you?
8996140
If it really matters that much to you, would it make you feel any better if I went back and edited it to perfection?
8996182
So being new to writing a fanfiction gives you the right to doubt my writing skills?
8996201
If my story is that bad, why did you waste your Time reading it?
8996222
Also, that other part... It's just another way of saying, "actions speak louder than words".
8996223
Meerkats!
8996368
What exactly does that mean?
8996373
Idk.
8996376
Really? Hm, looks like I'll have to look it up... Anyway, do you like the story or not? Br honest, please...
8996409
Hmm.... I have a lot of editing to do....
Hey, Cy. If you want some help with the editing, I'd be happy to help.
8996473
Really? Okay! You can help me if you want!
Also, I want your honest opinion when I ask this: what do you think of the new story I posted?
Hey Crye I seen you started the story all over again. What happened?
8996479
It got negative reviews, they were pretty bad ones too. So I decided to do a rewrite of it.
Well at least you getting a little bit good at it. I been reading it and it more different compare to your old story.
8996492
Well, I wanted to at least have a chance to get to season eight this time, the prime reason I started at season six, rather than season one.
Plus, I wanted to improve on my of writing abilities for an original character.
Oh? So this will not take place in season one by but six. Is Xion will come back?
8996476
The introduction went a bit more smoothly than last time. Just don't use Kaiokenx50 this time. The highest Goku has ever gone was 20
But I can't wait to see your next chapter Crye.
8996517
The only reason I did that was that Cyre is much stronger than Goku and Vegeta. His kaio-ken will be higher than Goku's, but it won't be x50 like last time
8996512
I don't think so, no.
Awesome start!
8997334
Really? Thank you! I hardly ever hear anything good...
8997357
You're welcome. Don't let others discourage you. Heck, I don't even care about the grammar, self-insert, ect. It's still readable, so it's fine. The only thing I really care about is keeping it realistic. Celestia, for instance, might have a power level of 5,000, while your DBZ character is probably over 1,000,000,000 (one billion). As long as you don't overpower the MLP characters and as long as I can read it, I'm happy. ^_^
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Cyre was born after the tournament of power, so it's WAY higher than that.
Base form: 3,250,050,000
Ozaro: 32,500,500,000
Base form (max strength): 81,251,250,000
SSJ1: 4,062,562,500,000
SSJ1 (second grade): 4,875,075,000,000
SSJ1 ( third grade): 7,312,612,500,000
SSJ2: 8,125,125,000,000
SSJ3: 32,500,500,000,000
SSJ4: 48,750,750,000,000
Base form (god essence): 81,251,250,000,000
SSG: 2,742,229,687,500,000
SSB: 4,875,075,000,000,000
SSB (Kaio-Ken x35): 170,627,625,000,000,000
8997377
HELL YES!!! I've now gone from excited to really psyched for the next chapter!
8997392
Yeah, although half the time he's fighting, he'd probably be suppressing his power... But he will use SSB's full potential at one point... I can tell you that...
8997394
Awesome! ^_^ I would say Just don't have him suppress his power too much. Even if suppressed, he should still be able to curbstomp his opponents with ease, unless he suppresses himself so much that his power level is around equal to his opponents. However, I still wouldn't recommend having him suppress it that much. Curbstomping weaker opponents that others thought to be a threat is more fun to read about.
Great story, Crye! Really loved the story! 😀😀😀 I can't wait for the next one. Oh Crye are you gonna make the oringal dragon ball characters come to Equestria. Because that will be super duper awasome. Sorry just curious.
8997427
Like the first story, they will.... And like before, I'll tell you when later...
8997456
I totally agree. That's definitely reasonable, if not perfect. Though with all the magic absorbed, I'd classify Tirek at about 15,000. I think that Equestria is just the name of the continent, and Tirek is stated to be able to blow up Equestria in the comics.
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My reasoning behind it is that ki and magic are meant for different purposes. Magic can be used for offensive purposes, but is relatively used for other types of things.
Ki on the other hand, was based sorely for offensive and defensive intense combat scenarios, meaning it would give the user a lot more power and skill then magic would.
8997461
Unfortunately, tirek was season 4. I'm starting at season 6, all the way to season 8, including the MLP movie.
8997477
That's fine with me. How about adding Grogar in as one of the villains, as well?
8997494
You want me to add a G1 character? Huh, I'll have to think about that...
8997499
Yeah, it'd be original, and it would be another villain that Cyre could curbstomp.
8997507
Yep, I'll add him as a villain for cyre to toy with, he tends to act like Vegeta a lot when he's fighting, but he still has a great deal of compassion, much like Goku.
8997513
Awesome! Thanks! Also, thanks for uploading the 2nd chapter so soon after the 1st! :)