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Oh so I'm Asian so I must know karate... well do you... yeah I'm a third degree black belt
Ok, let go!!!!
Curious on how things will go.
Edit: Please don't delete this. Just read it entirely, then react.
You gotta be shitting me!?
A original story; "Where Spike gets unrealistically bullied by brutalized OOC versions of everypony ( Even the Mane Seven that are not only massive hypocrites, but DOESN'T deserve the elements for their heartless and racist/xenophobic behavior to him), just because he is "weak/powerless" in their eyes, and it won't come back to bite them all in the flank/ass very, very hard!"
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This is just as bad and mess up as your Ultimate Enemy storyline. At least in that one, it was from a dark timeline like Danny Phantom's Special. And we still have our lovable canon Mane Six not treating Spike as horribly bad as Dark Spike. Still.
Or any other overly cliche bullied story of either Spike, Naruto, Harry Potter, Deku, Issei, or any other OC Male Character bullied by highly OOC and total asshole/bitch versions of literally everybody fictional for some revenge plot.
I don't like to criticize here. But considering I'm a Spike fan, AND I seen this old plot trope from Wattpad or Fanfiction.net, over 30 times.
I can't help it but to complain.
BUT, their is one good praise I like to say in all of this.
And that being it's a MORTAL KOMBAT Crossover. And both Scorpion and Sub-Zero will man up Spike as a OP Badass Dragon Fighter. And I really want them to make everypony regret and give them literal Hell/Netherrealm.
And have him call out the Rainbooms hypocrisy, comparing them just as bad, or no better than the villains they faced. And being not worthy of their elements because of their heartless mistreatment of him, and he easily kick their pathetic weak asses hard!!!!!
And he won't ever forgive them for a long time ( And not forgiving them so easy in this case. Unless you planned to want them to have a very, very long, but hard earned "redemption arc", and somehow put them in his harem? Though I feel mixed with that. Because it's hard to "forgive" them after everything. ).
And please promise me, I like to see many karmic Punishment's of Brutality, and FATALITY!!!!!!!
P.S. Only Big Mac and possibly Starlight is on my good list, so far.
While the Princess/Principals are probably gonna be joining the rest of them in my severely brutized/death list. Because they SUCK at their job on not helping Spike out in the first place!?
Not gonna lie you got me Interested.
Fire and ice abilitys
Hell be like
GET OVER HERE
If you need any OCs, let me know via PM
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I have to warn you, you will not like what you are going to see in this first chapter. And if you read my long rant comment. You know why.
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Dude. It has the AU tag for a reason. And in case you forgot, racism has been a part of FIM since the beginning. Hasbro never beat us over the head with it as this story does. But still.
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I can clearly see the AU, I ain't blind.
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If you don't like alternate universe its not for you...
This fiction is good so far with no problems what so ever. And im a huge fan of mortal kombat. Bullied characters are sad at times... but you must know that anime had many cliché... the nose bleed or the girl kick the guy or hurt them... it's natual... Even that you just hate life.
The only thing for story is if there is such a cliché... saying like I 30 times in a row in the beginning of a sentence... now that is a different cliché... which this story has no grammar cliché other than the first beep scene. Which he used that word 5 times.
The only problem I may have with this story is that he used youtube to explain a fight which pauses the story and pictures...
Sub-Zero abilities + Spike +Scorpion abilities =
why do I here DOOM music
OC offer is still on the table.
Hold on a minute!!!??? Wasn't in last chapter, Flash was the one that got suspended ( And possible expulsion hopefully. But sadly it's not!? ), and the main cause of this mess with the Crystal Prep, with the vandalism!? I remember he was yelled at and lose his "rank/position" and club title.
Soarin and Cheese Sandwich were just his lackeys, why do they get punished severely instead of this blue-haired jerk that clearly orchestrated it as leader!?
So, why the hell is Celestia changing her damn mind already!?
Either you probably forgot, and this is a very inconsistent and plothole!.
Or, you deliberately show us that something is very fishy going on here, and that this ISN'T the real Celestia speaking here?
Please tell me I ain't the only one that sees this as sus?
Uuhhhh! These versions of the Mane Seven/Rainbooms are such pathetic "Flash's boot lickers" and are insufferable.
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That's just sad.
How can Big Mac of all people lose to this a-hole!? I bet Flash played dirty!!!! Still can't believe Applejack still sides with this lousy jerk. Along with the other Rainbooms.
Oh, you gonna be a whole lot more powerful than they ever wished to be.
Oh yeah!
👍 😎
Crystal Prep CHAMPIONS:
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I would have spike just watch Flash get his ass kicked then step in
This amount of arrogance that anyone(such as this AU's Flash) would have is gonna get someone killed
so what shouldexpect fatality or frienship
This is really interesting, can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the amazing work. I honestly like when people put videos in their stories so the reader could get a picture of what's going on.
I am loving this story more and more, can't wait for the next chapter.
this last image is very meme still with a baby dragon head
Does this story have any badass little girls in it?
Um? Did I just hear you right? I mean, what the heck, dude!? This is Flash we are talking about!
Training music!
Hmmm Good
It wasn't a two-on-two fight, where's the second CHS fighter?
Illegal fighting, how did Celestia and Luna accept this? Is it saying you want to lose, and I accept 3 against 1?
Tired of teaching bullshit student?
damn the guy killed a student from another school for free, it was for everyone to be traumatized..... Does this school teach psychopaths?
Seriously, do you like to be spanked?
Enough of Spike very nice, he just killed a guy!!!!!
Nobody called the police to arrest him?
cool to have mortal kombat and fatality plus compassion the two grandmasters taught him created a psychopath
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The kill Rover thing will be explained next chapter.
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When’s the next chapter?
I only have one thing to say to that *ahem*
Okay I have to admit spike has balls of steel
Oh shit.
And on that note can’t wait for the next chapter which is when?
I got a strong idea we're getting the story from but I kind of don't care I like spikes response to Twilight
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After to how he was very poorly treated, that naive and gullible purple bitch had it coming long overdue. And she and her friends are supposed to be "heroes" in this!?
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The greatest vengeance is success
Oh shit it’s going down.
And 🎵 god damn it starlight 🎵
Please tell me that those that did will be fired and arrested.
Can’t wait to see what next.
The RAINBAKAS should have really MINDED THEIR OWN BUSINESS! They ASKED FOR IT and now, they are going to GET IT!
Wrong game but GET READY FOR THE NEXT BATTLE
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They really should!!!!!
It ain't that hard to leave that disgusting CHS, and go to somewhere decent, thousands times nicer school. Why would he stay in that awful place? Because of the plot!? Heck no!
He should realistically leave them, and give them the middle finger while he is at it. And permanently stay in a better school. ( Possibly with the other Mortal Kombat heroic/anti-hero characters, that will be his real friends. )
CHS should be condemned anyway! A place like that in real life, would immediately get a lot of students and teachers expelled, fired, arrested, and closed the place down!
These girls are un-f******** believable!
They stalk and bother his personal space. And they frickin attack him for just a simple, but well justified insult against them!?
THIS is the kind of bullcrap that makes Spike rightfully hate them, and never forgive them in the first place!
After this, THEY should be the ones to be arrested and Spike gets a restraining order on them all!
He is clearly self-defending.
( P.S. Starlight blew it, and is now added on my "beat up severely or kill" list with the rest of the Rainbooms. You had one FRICKIN job to not be a moron like them!!!! )
Okay just to be just to be clear I'm on spikes side but I feel like spike is not ready to have his weapons and Sub-Zero or scorpion should have taken spikes weapons away because they're seeing spike is getting consumed by his anger even though it's still justified oh and also Spike doesn't seem to be trying at all to control his anger
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Sadly no. Because all of them are highly unlikable! ( So far. )
One; The Hell did they come from!!??
Two; Where were they in the beginning of this story? And now, they suddenly show up and are "interested" in him?
Yeah, I agree with Spike not liking them for their attitude. Due to them acting like boot lickers themselves. Plus, I didn't see them defending him when he was "weak" before.
So, they aren't accepted in his "harem". They have to frickin PROVE and WORK themselves to gain his attention.
( IF there is a "harem" in this one? Because all I see, is despicable bitches everywhere! The Disgusting and Hypocritical Rainbooms, possibly Starlight, then those three. Not one decently good and nice girl around here. It's like you make all the girls frickin cursed to be bastardized or pathetically desperate? )