Oh so I'm Asian so I must know karate... well do you... yeah I'm a third degree black belt

Ok, let go!!!!

Curious on how things will go.

Edit: Please don't delete this. Just read it entirely, then react.

You gotta be shitting me!?

A original story; "Where Spike gets unrealistically bullied by brutalized OOC versions of everypony ( Even the Mane Seven that are not only massive hypocrites, but DOESN'T deserve the elements for their heartless and racist/xenophobic behavior to him), just because he is "weak/powerless" in their eyes, and it won't come back to bite them all in the flank/ass very, very hard!"

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This is just as bad and mess up as your Ultimate Enemy storyline. At least in that one, it was from a dark timeline like Danny Phantom's Special. And we still have our lovable canon Mane Six not treating Spike as horribly bad as Dark Spike. Still.

Or any other overly cliche bullied story of either Spike, Naruto, Harry Potter, Deku, Issei, or any other OC Male Character bullied by highly OOC and total asshole/bitch versions of literally everybody fictional for some revenge plot.

I don't like to criticize here. But considering I'm a Spike fan, AND I seen this old plot trope from Wattpad or Fanfiction.net, over 30 times.

I can't help it but to complain.

BUT, their is one good praise I like to say in all of this.

And that being it's a MORTAL KOMBAT Crossover. And both Scorpion and Sub-Zero will man up Spike as a OP Badass Dragon Fighter. And I really want them to make everypony regret and give them literal Hell/Netherrealm.

And have him call out the Rainbooms hypocrisy, comparing them just as bad, or no better than the villains they faced. And being not worthy of their elements because of their heartless mistreatment of him, and he easily kick their pathetic weak asses hard!!!!!

And he won't ever forgive them for a long time ( And not forgiving them so easy in this case. Unless you planned to want them to have a very, very long, but hard earned "redemption arc", and somehow put them in his harem? Though I feel mixed with that. Because it's hard to "forgive" them after everything. ).

And please promise me, I like to see many karmic Punishment's of Brutality, and FATALITY!!!!!!!

P.S. Only Big Mac and possibly Starlight is on my good list, so far.

While the Princess/Principals are probably gonna be joining the rest of them in my severely brutized/death list. Because they SUCK at their job on not helping Spike out in the first place!?

Not gonna lie you got me Interested.

Fire and ice abilitys
Hell be like
GET OVER HERE

If you need any OCs, let me know via PM

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I have to warn you, you will not like what you are going to see in this first chapter. And if you read my long rant comment. You know why.

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Dude. It has the AU tag for a reason. And in case you forgot, racism has been a part of FIM since the beginning. Hasbro never beat us over the head with it as this story does. But still.

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I can clearly see the AU, I ain't blind.

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If you don't like alternate universe its not for you...

This fiction is good so far with no problems what so ever. And im a huge fan of mortal kombat. Bullied characters are sad at times... but you must know that anime had many cliché... the nose bleed or the girl kick the guy or hurt them... it's natual... Even that you just hate life.

The only thing for story is if there is such a cliché... saying like I 30 times in a row in the beginning of a sentence... now that is a different cliché... which this story has no grammar cliché other than the first beep scene. Which he used that word 5 times.

The only problem I may have with this story is that he used youtube to explain a fight which pauses the story and pictures...

This is really interesting, can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the amazing work. I honestly like when people put videos in their stories so the reader could get a picture of what's going on.