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Okay, it still has issues, but it is much better than before. I can't wait to see where you take this. Consider your story tracked.
... I'm not too sure how to feel about this.
On one hand... this is rather amusing.
On the other hand... a Predator in Equestria...
... I will need to read more before I can firmly give this a like or not.
But overall I'm interested and I really want to see where you're going with this.
This, was not very good, as much as I was hoping it would be, it makes no sense (common sense mostly) like how he fixed the exterior of the ship with Some tools that just, why? He would need the material the ship was made of (like steel, titanium etc, and that's stuff for Human ships) and he would need a welder and Fuel for it, that's putting it simply, doesn't help the name six seem to still be speciesist and retarded, that and the skull, How the Hell could a skull hold the amount of time that would be needed to leave a blood trail that goes from somewhere in town to somewhere in a Very wild forest with lots of other predators (not the alien kind)
I haven't seen the original but this one looks very good, I look forward to reading the rest of it and will be tracking it for any new chapters to come
Another Bad-Blood Predator, maybe either Tracker, Falconer, or Ultimate from the recent 4th film
The Hero has gotta be Spike the Dragon, he saved the Crystal Empire from King Sombra. And I think the Bad-Blood Predator at the end is the Ultimate/Armored Predator from the 4th movie
Spike with that clutch tho
Celtic's alive?! That's impossible, he was killed back at the pyramid temple in Antarctica by the Xenomorph Grid! Cliffhanger!!
Of course. Twilight is the Hero that the Bad-Bloods are looking for. Scar, Celtic, Chopper, and Fugitive Predator better reunite and team up fast if they are to save Princess Twilight Sparkle and Equestria with the other heroes
Wrong, here's a hint
The hero is a male, is young and the bad bloods want him since he has the title as the hero of a specific area, Tempest wants Twilight, not the Bad-Bloods
Not bad
Preds are always fun to deal with for MLP, especially when you think the ponies are non-violent. then again if anyone's seen the show....
I knew I was right the first guess! Spike the Dragon was the Hero That Ultimate was looking for.
Do I need to know anything about the Predator franchise in order to understand this story?
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Not really but if you have at least a general idea of the movies you should be fine.
A fresh start of a new friendship, and only that. Unless bromance is a option.
If spike gets his own custom amor that will be awesome cant wait for more keep it up
Welp She's dead
WHY ARE SO MANY SURPRISED
Needs editing but it's being tracked.
Please make more chapters
Interesting
KILL IT WITH FIRE!!
HEY! RAINBOW!! THOSE WORDS ARE HURTFUL!!!
I wonder why did you take down two of your stories? I noticed the story count went from 7 to 5 there.
So far on this fic well.. disappointed that Chrysalis appeared only to be swiftly killed off like that. Big time.
Why was she only included only to be horribly killed like that?
Its disappointing pretty much it happens the same in the movie where the royal sisters get taken out and humiliated all infront of Equestria like that.
I just hated how the movie did that to Luna like that. Doesn't help that apparently the repercussions just get brushed aside. Like wouldn't Luna feel deeply ashamed and humiliated from this huge failure here? Like the fact she(and Celestia) let Equestria down again and forced to rely on the girls to save the day. And wouldn't it damage the sisters' reputations further?
The movie just bothers me a lot..
Why was Spike still turned into a pufferfish there?
I feel like Luna would well.. not really take it well with how she got taken out by Tempest and subdued by Ultimate there.
Just hated how the writers of the show brushed aside the issues Luna should feel on her huge "failure" here with what happened in the movie.
Wonder how she and the other princesses react about the weapons and if they saw what Scar said to the girls?
In fact I wonder how Luna reacts to what happened with Spike with what the girls had done to him?
so when will the next chapter come out?
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i would agree
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i agree
Hey mane six, here's a friendly reminder: DON'T PISS SCAR
Nice job scar u killed Chrysalis. 👍
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Magic.
This getting an update?
Could you please update this story more
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FREEZE IT!!!
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That's a good reason for Scar to put her head to his trophy. Dash, you challenged him, dumb bitch
Wait,he's killed by Royce in the movie. Bruh
Oh please I don't wanna hear Predators sing....
Com' on!!! REALLY? You just abandoned this after all those events?!
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No im just really busy but Ill try and get back to it
A nice start of a new friendship between Scar and Spike. At least Scar will take good care of him what the mane six didn't do.
I hope Spike will get a nice new armor.
Will Lex find her way to Equestria too?
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I know it is late to say this. But, what about Celestia, Cadence, and Shining Armor react to the Mane Six's poor attitude to Spike?
Luna is NOT the only princess in here.
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I am pointing out Luna due to she might feel close to Spike maybe.
Afterall they share much in common.
Sorry I took so long, but I really want to speak my mind for a very long time in here. Firstly;
Why the f*** did you give Novo anything? She didn't do shit here?? At least Capper, Celaeno, and even Skystar did something.
They barely done anything, and are easily got their asses kicked. So why do they get "rewarded" as well? That's kinda stupid. (no offense )
Why give Tempest anything? Sure, she saved them, but at the last minute. And she was a part of the enemy a while ago. So, she can't just "redeemed" herself overnight.
And giving Weapons to the Mane Six of all ponies? They don't have the guts to use them correctly, or to kill. They are just naive pacifists. Plus, didn't Scar trash talked them last chapter for their own f*** ups, and their mistreatment of Spike?
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I know they share a common "experience" ( Spike with the Mane Six, Luna with Celestia. ). I ain't forgetful or dumb. I just doubt LoganRyder will just swift his attention to Luna, when he is heavily focused on Spike's, Scar's, and the other Predator's/Yautia's Bromance.
Plus, do you actually say something else or talk about the other characters, besides Spike's and Luna's predicament?
I do get about being a total fan of a specific character or more from MLP. ( I be a hypocrite if I talked down on someone on praising a character. When I myself got many favorite characters from different franchises as well. Heck, I'm also a Spike fan too. )
But what annoys me, is that you keep repeating or talking about the terrible predicaments of either Spike, Luna/Nightmare Moon, or sometimes Chrysalis in every story of either you or I have cread.
I'm not trying to be rude, or sound like a jerk. I'm still a Spike fan too. But, doing it 24/7, rinse and repeat. Can really grind somebody else's gears.
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No hard feelings. At least I can act decent. Unlike some people I seen like Twitter, YouTube, Facebook, even on FIMfiction, Fanfiction.Net, and Wattpad, etc..