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Just your typical American Brony who believes in our Big God Given Rights, defends our freedoms and the Constitution, and leads The American Resistance against the corrupt radical left in Washington.
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That cover art my dude.......... Here's a like.
You forgot to add Disney Frozen and DreamWorks Rise of the Guardians.
P.S. What the heck did Starswirl and his Pillars ever do to your human protagonist!?
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Thank you for the like. Support is always appreciated.
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My bad. I'll try to correct that mistake in a little bit. As to answer your other question, you already know that the Pillars and the Echidna tribe were fighting for centuries and that the Pillars stole the Master Diamond from Knuckles' grandparents, but the beef runs much deeper than you may think on the surface. It will be revealed later in time what caused Knuckles to hate Starswirl so much.
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Wait, your human protagonist is highly based on Sonic's Knuckles?
Personally, I didn't even read the first story. I just read the first chapter in this, and that's why I have those questions.
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There are similarities between Knuckles in this story and the one in the Sonic The Hedgehog 2 movie, but there are also differences as well. I recommend you read the first story before you read this one or else you might get very confused. The first story should answer most of the questions you have about Knuckles' character. If you're still confused after reading it, ask me at any time and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.
Why do I feel hype from this? Cause I’m not complaining.
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You should feel hype from this. The goal of this story is not just to make an emotional connection to people, but it's also supposed to be exciting as well because you're interested to see what's going to happen next. That's what separates a good story from a bad story. I will continue to try to make this as best of quality as I can, but it will require some time to really think about how I want to best frame it.
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Well all I can say is that I can’t wait to see what you have in store
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I think you will enjoy it. Even if all the crazy adventure is a bit much for some people, everyone can learn something from this story. It mainly focuses on forgiveness and that's hard to come by these days during this dark time in our world. It's something that we all struggle with and it's hardest to forgive those who have hurt us the most, which for Knuckles in this story, would be Starswirl and the other Pillars. So, I believe that anyone who may be struggling to forgive someone who hurt them should definitely read this story because it will tackle that very issue. This isn't a self promotion, but rather a calling for anyone with this issue. Hope you continue to enjoy the chapters! Your support is definitely very appreciated. :)
Slow down, this is a little fast paced to my liking. You just literally teleported characters from Frozen and the holiday guardians out of nowhere. ( I do know that you making a crossover with them eventually. But you could have Introduce them a lot better. Plus, you didn't explained on how, and why the Frozen characters meet the holiday guardians and helping them face Pinch in the first place? Are we missing something here? )
And why the did you forced Elsa to uncharacteristically attack Knuckles, and didn't frickin apologized?
P.S.
Seriously, didn't Knuckles already explained to you that Starswirl and his Pillars attack his tribe/species, and stole their Master Emerald? It ain't this "big mystery" when Knuckles already told you why he hates them from a couple chapters ago.
Do you have amnesia, or terrible memory, Twilight!?
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This is part of the reason why I'm spacing out these chapters. So that I can give it more time to develop. Also, Elsa didn't like the idea of being so well known by someone she literally never met at all in her life and because her powers are connected to her emotions, that's what ended up happening. However, she will apologize later on as she spends more time with Knuckles and the rest of his group. Patience is key, my friend. Don't let it bother you.
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Like I said before, she does know that the Pillars stole the Master Diamond from the Echidna tribe, but she also knows that there is something bigger going on that neither Knuckles nor Starswirl is willing to tell because of how painful it really was. It will be revealed in a later chapter and once it does, this will make more sense. I promise.
Another question; You do realize that Frozen and Rise of the Guardians are in two different time frames? The Frozen setting seems to be in the 1800's ( 19th century. ), while the holiday guardian's adventures from the movie is in modern day ( 21st century. ).
So, how does that work? How do they all somehow meet each other in the first place? Do they use a dimensional portal that goes back in time!?
And I DOUBT that Arendalle still "exist" in modern day!?
So, are we gonna see the TMNT next?
Okay, how many more franchises are you gonna put in here?
Not trying to sound rude, but having multiple different franchises in a massive fictional multiversel crossover can be a quite a hassle to pay attention to the humongous story at large.
Not exactly against huge multiverse crossovers like this.
Just find it annoying that you reference these different stories and adventures of the characters you have.
But, you didn't show us to them before. It's the same issue with "Show, Don't Tell" mistake.
So unless you do have the first Frozen and Rise of the Guardians story somewhere? Then I ( And anybody else reading this. ) will don't know what the heck is going on!?
Wow! And I thought that only Starswirl is a massive delusional dick!
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The multiverse is a very complicated subject. There are so many different universes that exist and it's just difficult to keep track of all of them. I am aware that the timelines are different, but there may have been outside forces that have changed things around for it to make more sense. That's all I can say about it.
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No, you will not. I only planned for the Frozen and Guardians franchises being in this story. There will be references to other movies, but the characters from those will not be actively involved in this story.
Twilight, I have seen many fanfiction literatures of Blueblood in this site. And sadly for you, those many Blueblood's are just as bad, if not much worse than Prince Hans ever did in the first Frozen movie. So, you are totally dead wrong sadly.
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You would be correct. It's difficult to write a story with so many characters that are actively involved, but I am trying as hard as I can to do the best I can do with this story. I know a lot of the story does not make sense at the moment, but it will make sense in time as more chapters get released. All I ask is that you simply be patient and all of the loose ends will get tied up at the conclusion of the story. I guarantee that is going to happen. I'm going to make it happen.
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I know that Blueblood has done very terrible things before in other fanfictions, but Twilight is completely oblivious to the fact that is the case. She does not know that the internet exists and it is not in her world, so she has no idea that is going on. It might sound like an exercise in futility here, but I wanted to at least give you some context as a way to understand a little bit better.
This sounds like you kinda over hyped those two villain's "threat level" a bit too much? I mean, they aren't DC Comics/Marvel, Dragon Ball Z/DB Super, WH40K, or Godzilla/Kaiju's that can annihilate an entire moon, the entire planet, gas giant, sun/star, or even a solar system power level!?
So, their "multiversel conquest" is highly laughable.
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You are right and they are not as powerful as other villains in MLP or other franchises, but there will be some creativity that will be involved here to make them seem more like a threat and to make it more interesting. It just started and they'll get more dangerous over time. You'll see at a later point.
I honestly can’t wait to see what happens next, especially with the beef with Knuckles and the Pillars.
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It's going to not be pretty, I'll say the least. It'll eventually reach a boiling point and then they'll have to decide where to move forward after that.
Things have gotten complicated
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Yeah, things have gotten complicated and they will only continue to get complicated as we get closer to the climax of the story. But don't worry, there will eventually be a resolution to all this. I guarantee you that.