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underrated Drake

Just a regular guy who has very little knowledge on MLP but a lot of creativity.

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Their going to make it seem like Spike was the one who did it, and send him to get killed. He's going to be like, fuck you guys, and awaken his powers and kick the other dudes ads, before turning and telling everyone they were all assholes.

Thats my theory.

At this Satan’s eyes started to open wide in happiness, and just as he and Spike were going to shake hands, Spike quickly grabbed Satan’s wrist, picked him up, and body-slammed him.

You could have gone for a piledriver Y'know. It may cause some neck damage to the opponent, but that would be the point. I am excited for this match coming up, to the death sounds very enticing. I may have become weaker, wanting to hear the sound of ONE, TWO, THREE other than to see my enemy broken and battered, but To The Death would be the best type of match, only pain cold be given, until your opponent has finally fallen dead to your attacks. Flaming tables, Barb Wire Bats, Trash Cans, all available weapons to bring your opponent to their doom. Bang Bang!

8 out of ten Bang Bangs from me.

Love it! Nice to see spike getting some respect and friends.

Not bad, tell me if you need me to edit again.


I eagerly await your next update with great interest.

Well that was a...pleasant chapter. It was nice to see Spike's power and to be honest, I am rather jealous. That raw strength could be sed sfor so much more and he just uses it for mercy? It is a sad waste of sch potential pain that could be brought, and even then, he was in a match To The Death, and it's a shame that wasn't seen.

5 out of ten Bang Bang's from me.

Awooo, well I don't know why Mr. Jack over there would rate it so low simply for Spike showing a bit of Mercy, but I on the other hand Have to congratulate him for showing control. The fight was pretty groovy in my opinion and we do now know the danger of him using the power, perhaps even loosing control after using it for some time!

7 out of ten Tye-Dye Shirts from me, Lord Have Mercy!

Wow even though I like Twilight after what Spike said she kinda deserves that

Well, I can say that I cannot regret reading this one! I'll have to thank Mick for the recommendation! Have to say this Spike is one interesting guy. He has his, issues, but he seems like a nice guy caught up in a bad situation. I do have to hand it to Twilight and Flash trying to make up to Him for treating him so badly, and if I were in his shoes, I would have forgave them, bu hey I guess I can't blame him. After all, their treatment did send him to an extremely low point in his life. And I know, He wouldn't forgive them for that treatment either. But, he Isn't here right now, but I do know that Spike has something similar. He get BIG and Strong! But I like that he does need to learn his abilities instead of just getting them too easily. Yowie Wowie, this has gotten me excited, and I can't wait for more! But he has to remember, that those offerings of friendship don't come dime a dosen, and every offering, could easily lead to betrayal.

Bye! Good luck with your writing and the story! Bye!

“Don’t try to Cpt. Rex me, it means nothing towards what you're trying to ask…” Spike said before being interrupted by Flash.

A man of culture, this story 10/10 :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I like this story but he's to forgiving to someone who left him like trash and someone who made his life miserable for years. Makes you wonder if spike didn't have that power up after that fight would thay care?

I respect your comment but I'd like to ask you something, let's say you suffered the same or even worse things than Spike, and one day you become stronger than your bullies, would you stoop down to their level and behave the same way they did or would you act in a forgiving way.

I know that many people read this fic waiting to see Spike go back to class and just torture the hell out of his bullies. But if there is something that life has taught me is that Guilt can kill.

Spike ain't nice because of the kindness in his heart, he knows that everyone in school is either afraid or feel seriously guilty about how they treated him, so he is torturing them in a more subtle, yet, evil way. By acting nice and even saying he is willing to die to save the lives of everyone friend or foe, he is psychologically stabbing everyone who bullied him. Believe me sometimes words can be deadlier than weapons.

No I wouldn't stoop down to there level but I feel the feelings of the people that tortured spike should be brought up at some point more in depth. If you're planning to do this in future chapters sorry thanks for the reply. Ps keep on being you and have fun

Comment posted by diablo4000 deleted May 31st
Comment posted by underrated Drake deleted May 31st

Yowie Wowie, with all that money, Spike's the next Tony Stark, or considering hismp a rental status, Bruce Wayne.

Looking at the cover art, I have to say: The artist got Overhaul's mask and eye color completely wrong. Everything else looks good, though!

because I think it was all misunderstanding, he didn't ask to marry you as much as a date as friends

Sad, but cute. I kind of expected Fluttershy to be some type of yandere but wow just wow. I love the story dude, keep up the good work!

Comment posted by tx-300 deleted June 5th

I feel that last bit is rushed and with the way you portrayed Fluttershy in it...Do you hate her or you doing a sick joke?
Don't get me wrong in another story could be comical or dark but here...feels....stupid.

I mean you ended the chapter with Spike asking Rarity to marry him already...wow....

Also work on your grammar!

Ch.7 is gonna be interesting. I wonder how they’re friends are going to react to the marriage situation.

If you need someone to help edit these chapters, let me know. Good premise so far but the story would flow more smoothly with better grammar. Keep up the good work.

I still think Spike should give Fluttershy one date, even though he's taken now. Doesn't show anything about being exclusively to one girl in his grandfather's will....and I'm a bit if a sucker for FlutterSpike and Sparity.

Nope just giving the fans what they want, when it comes to shipping I have no idea of who to ship

You're pretty good with Spike as the main character you should do one where Spike becomes Darth Vader's apprentice with Starkiller

Feel a bit rushed and I'm sorry but major pissed.

You mentioned in the story AppleJack had been treating Spike badly like she hated him, and then doing this one eighty pisses me off as it makes no sense, and worst yet we hadn't even heard why she acted that way.

Not only is that bad writing but it'sfeels liek your trolling the reader or just forgotten and or don't care about it., but never fixed it.

We'll get to that soon enough, and believe me, it WILL anger you

Remember, I left the ending of this chapter open

Comment posted by diablo4000 deleted July 3rd

Interesting story and concept but...

Another demonetized Flash? :facehoof:

Comment posted by underrated Drake deleted July 3rd

“Maybe I should flash him myself,” said someone in the background, but no one could make out who the voice was coming from.


Comment posted by Aether Spark deleted July 4th

‘Say Spike, don’t you think that all of what we went through made us closer, like friends?” asked Twilight

“Yeah,” Spike said

“So what do you say? Friends?” she said

“No,” Spike said

“But I thought,” Twilight said

“I agreed that it brought us closer, I didn't say that we were friends,” Spike said walking away “That doesn’t mean I’m not open to the idea of re-befriending you, sometime in the near future,” Spike finished as he continued walking to his bike.

Don't be sad Twilight, progress is progress. :raritywink:

How many of you believe the hooded figure is Filthy Rich, or the Flim Flam Bros.? Both have plenty of motivation to want Sweet Apple Acres from the Apples...

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