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Wildcard25


I used to question the MLP FiM show, but one episode and I got hooked on it. See my Fanfiction account ChaosMagemon for more than just MLP fics. Joined the Herd Nov 5, 2011

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So just like Batman, he will have a no kill rule?

well this spike will be turning heads a lot.:trollestia:

Please tell me Spike is gonna get some payback on his bullies.

That anime you mentioned isn't that the one where the main character was a fat guy who then became a skinny hot guy after finding a secret room behind the restroom wall of the house his late grandfather gave him and found a door leading to another world

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Master Thief Dragon was different. There Spike was a thief stealing back items that rightfully belonged to his family and a young genius professor. In this Spike is a hero and a student

This sorta reminds me of the movie Blue Beetle but with a Karate Kid and Batman twist to it

Looks awesome. Cant wait for more.

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Well, still that world is post apocalyptic and Spike is hated because he's a human with Equestrians. In this one he's a human like everyone, but many people found his original appearance ugly and prefer to just pretend he doesn't exist

Comment posted by beirirangu deleted Nov 23rd, 2023

Don't want to sound egotistical... great story by the way... When I was starting to write Fics I used the term "DragonKnight" as Spike's band name.

This is a much better use for the name!!!!

Love this story so far. I watched the anime a while back and I liked it

"Now, it's time to unleash the true dragon within you," – Ignitus.

“Relax, kid. No one can hear or seem me except you. So try not to talk so loud otherwise you'll just look like you're talking to yourself.” Drakon suggested.

It’s “see” me.

Random Old Lady: “You keep talking to yourself and people will think you’re crazy.”

Next up, Everfree Academy.

Liking this so far.

Hell yeah. This is amazing already~

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Random Old Lady: “You keep talking to yourself and people will think you’re crazy.”

Spike: "Thanks, l will keep that in mind"

Random Old Lady: "I wasn't talking to you"

The girl that was cornered had long dark purple hair with a single pink streak in it, and violet eyes. Spike was enamored by her beauty, and especially her well endowed chest. But he shook whatever indecent thoughts he had and focused on the situation.

Bro

Stop

This is not the way

Light-noveling is not the way

There is better ways

No

Please

Halt

You shall not pass

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Too late man It's happening. If you don't like it there's the door. 👉🚪Just don't let it hit you on the way out.

Nice that Spike is transferring to another school that shows him a little more respect. That said however, I'm a little disappointed that Spike didn't get even with Shadow and his two sluts, but it does make him come off as the better man. Though, I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of those three.

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Was that a cars reference? You have me impressed.

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it was indeed... though l pictured the random old lady as Granny Smith for some reason.

Well, I think this story is off to a good start. I'll bookmark this story because I feel like Spike sometimes doesn't get the respect he deserves for what he did in the show and how he born. Sometimes with living parents, sometimes they somehow die shortly after he is born. Either way, I can't wait for more of this story.

Comment posted by beirirangu deleted Nov 23rd, 2023

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You say that like it's a good thing. At some point, authors recognize that hypersexualising on first contact is a bad idea.

It's done with purpose or with humor, blatant is bland.

Same with a main character creepily observing every single minute detail of another character's appearance within seconds of meeting them. It's creepy and breaks flow. (luckily, it seems he grew out if this one since the last story I read from bro)

Both of these practises are something authors grow out of. I'm just trying to push him there a little faster.


Edit 1: For Mech

My comment is aimed at author so he can grow at a faster rate than I did. My comments was not for you

If you find it discouraging, then that's your own fault.

If you enjoy the story so much, and are aware of its peeves, then you should not be perturbed when someone merely points them out.

It means that you are, in fact, peeved by those parts of the story.

At least be honest about what you feel, to yourself, if not to me.

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So? Stuff like that is common in these kinds of stories.

As I said, if you don’t like it then you shouldn’t be here. Especially if you’re gonna bitch and moan about it. No one likes a party pooper after all.

Well… call me intrigued. I’m in. But even so, try to remember that you decided to mix in some Batman parts. So do your best to mix that in with the story that you have here. We’re all here for you, Wildcard25!

Ooh! I have a feeling Spike's gonna meet the rest of the Mane 6 or 7!

Happy Thanksgiving, Wildcard!

Happy Thanksgiving Wildcard. I can't wait for more of this story.

Hmmm It's starting to feel a gary stu story.... I hope this story becomes unpredictable.

Why hasn’t this guy write anything by good in anthro. Again with the dragon spirit guide? I’m guessing there would be no isekai door here.

With too much human, the genre for these fics should have been Equestria Girls.

heh. wonder how spikes old school mates will react knowing spike is going to a better school now?

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It would definitely be a "Who's laughing Now?" moment.

“Rainbow, ease up! Spike's had a long day and he doesn't need any of that,” Twilight scolded her, before speaking to Spike, “You'll have to excuse Rainbow Dash. She can be very crash with others.”

You mean brash.

“I hope it's alright I invited Spike to join us after school.” Spike asked her friends.

You mean Twilight?

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I still think Spike should teach those three a lesson to not bother him ever again, considering how Shadow is a total moron to not take no for an answer.

I'm willing to bet Pinkie will point out Dracon cuse she's Pinkie and shocking both him and Spike.

Suddenly the sounds of police sirens were approaching and Spike snapped out of his rush, “Oh, shit!” not wanting to be questioned by the cops he made a run for it.

Why would Spike run away when he's the one who stopped the mugger? It's not like the cops will mistake him for an accomplice.😕

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Sometimes one doesn't want any attention

Mmm, nice plot going on here. Maybe character getting special powers might be a bit of cliche, but there's nothing wrong about the cliche as long as it leads to a good plot. And I think here cliche is used in a good way for story.

Nice that Spike managed to help someone again.
I imagine Main 6 discussing news about the boy who defeated the mugger and saved two girls, and Spike trying to look like he doesn't know anything.

Good luck to him with his new life :)

“Darling I'm not a top young fashion designer for nothing,” Rarity explained, “I don't do clothes for just my friends and regular people. I do it for all kinds. Models, celebrities, pop stars, and other VIPS.”

By celebrities, I think Rarity means movie stars, since models and musicians are also celebs.

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