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LuckyMagic

I'm a young Spanish writer that loves writting, I was fan of MLP since the 15. I love the dark novel and my stories are not for everyone. I wish you like reading it as I love writting it.

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underrated Drake
underrated Drake #1 · May 24th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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Veo que te gustan mis historias... si quieres ayuda para el proof reading y/o un editor solo dilo.

Armored Core
Armored Core #2 · May 24th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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more more more

What kind of species is Spike?

LightnDarkGodofSalvation
LightnDarkGodofSalvation #3 · May 24th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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I hope Rainbow Dash speaks about the "event".

Edit: Wait a minute, oh that's right. Spike is forced to help him to make Twilight love him. However Pinkie is going to spill the beans (hopefully not literally). If she does that, then I will probably be less sour to her antics.

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #4 · May 24th, 2021 · · 2 · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10830672
Hahahaha as I said, my stories are not for everyone, but well, this story is more a shotacon

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #5 · May 24th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10830641
Spike is a nomag, one of the left in the World, no magic, no wings, no pony ears, just a "normal" person

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #6 · May 24th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10830488
Ostias, hablas español? Que bueno de verdad, por ahora voy bien, me va gustando tu historia de Dragonlord, lo único, creo que tu spike lo pasa mejor que él mio

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #7 · May 24th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10830667
Is he forced to love her? Or he really love her?

tx-300
tx-300 #10 · May 24th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10830702
No Spike Dragonbound. NNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

KillerJacob04
KillerJacob04 #11 · May 24th, 2021 · · 1 · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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I Love The Story so Far Keep it Up

Spike the red leader
Spike the red leader #12 · May 24th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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Ok yo qiedo qe esta estodia continue esta echa bien

tx-300
tx-300 #13 · May 24th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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So the boys know about the technology that Spike can do with it, in addition to discord so they already know. If Spike really sets fire to everything and will make an improvement technology and end his humanity that can rival magic or use it to his advantage and be more terrible in the world and the elements of harmony can lose strength and see that no one worthy to be the elements.

Wolfking black
Wolfking black #14 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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I hope Spike catches a break soon, because Flash will just set up Spike to take the blame for disguising himself as Flash for the date with Twilight

Pete100
Pete100 #15 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 1: A normal live ·
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He opened the practically empty fridge and grabbed the last remaining pack of milk as the coffee machine beeped with a squeaky clatter. He grabbed a cup and poured himself a latte as he looked out his window at the view of the city of Canterlot as the first stirrings of the city began to begin. A few pegasus were flying to their offices, some earthlings walking and a couple of police unicorns patrolling their suburban neighborhood.

Wait, is he in equestria or the human world?

He started to walk up the stairs to the door when he made eye contact for a few seconds with a girl who was leaning against the wall. Seeing her stare at him, he put on his hood and quickly walked inside the building. The pale pink-haired, pegasus was starring at him. When he notice, he run into the building. "Poor kid" she thought wistfully "If only people would realize what he looks like."

What does she mean by that?

"Hey, asshole, do us all a favor and die," a boy shouted at Spike as he threw a crumpled piece of paper at him.

They do realize without their magic they ain’t sh*t, right?

"You should at least have the consideration not to look directly at me nomag," she said as she walked past and finished by muttering to herself, "I don't understand how Discord allows a nomag in this noble institution."

Discord knows something.

Flash turned around before he left the bathroom and flicked the butt of his cigarette at Spike. "Remember, today at the mall at 18:00," he said threateningly, "don't make her wait."

What is he talking about?

"Why would Fluttershy have a problem with the nomag,?" she asked again, whispering to Applejack.

You all have a problem with him.

"Don't let your spirits drop, hooded gentleman," she said in her tired old person's voice, "you're a thousand times better than any of them. I wish one of my granddaughters would take after you."

Finally. Someone nice.

Pete100
Pete100 #16 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2: The Boxing Ring ·
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"It doesn't sound so bad to me," she said approaching them about to jump them only to be stopped by a stream of water that wrapped around her fist and prevented her from hitting them.

"It's not worth it Applejack," said Pinkie while still holding the spell, "They are party poopers of the highest order, let's not let them take us to their territory."

How can she do that?

Rainbow Dash began to fill with electricity as her necklace began to glow and green smoke poured from her body.

What?

Rainbow then changed her expression to anger as she saw her boyfriend flirting with her.

Break up with him.

"It's not for them that I'm crying, nor for him," said Rainbow.

Then who?

The girls had seen everything and in this case, even Twilight and Applejack, felt sorry for Spike, but quickly removed it when the boys passed in front of them, Twilight winked at Flash who winked back and Applejack looked away when she saw Caramel who just shrugged her shoulders.

Whatever happens to them I don’t care anymore.

"Well," he began, "Since I see you're in the mood for a fight today, I won't tremble at all when I say that today's class assignment is Martial Arts."

They have that?

"You're right about that, cowboy," laughed Flash, "You have to admit that he's made our lives a lot easier by doing our dirty work for us."

What?

"You're going to shit yourself, Adagio Dazzling," said Twilight furiously, "you and your sisters."

She really fighting over this man?

Before she finished with Applejack, she spotted Spike in front of her, who also looked at her curiously, turning his head slightly. Aria didn't know why, but she blushed at that as she thought the nomag was cute, smiled and winked at him. She leaned close to the cowboy girl's ear and whispered:

Interesting.

Sunset and Sonata fought in judo mode, it was a very confusing fight since most of the time both were on the ground while insulting each other, Sunset came out victorious by standing on Sonata's back and twisting her foot.

Didn’t know they could do that.

As Thunder turned around, he received a kick in the mouth from little Spike who threw him out of the ring. He then jumped on top of the pegasus and while with one hand he choked him with the other he started punching him in the face, destroying his nose and turning every inch of his face into a pool of blood while everyone watched in shock as the nomag hit the strongest student of the school over and over again.

Stop playing with my man.

Pete100
Pete100 #17 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 3: Afterclass ·
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"Spike," Celestia said, "You're an amazing boy, your kindness, honesty, loyalty make you so much more powerful than even the Harmony Girls, you can't do this just because you don't have magic."

That’s a fact.

"None of this is mine," he said looking at the awards, "I didn't invent any of this Celestia. Not the Changeling Belt, not the Invisibility Suit, not the A300R Antimagic Chains, not even the recipe for Dragon's Breath Tacos."

Who did?

"He agreed to give you the rights to his inventions," said Luna. "If it weren't for him we wouldn't have what we have now. Not our mansion, not the funds for our children, not anything. We owe a lot to that little boy."

Who are they talking about?

"What worries me is our future," Discord said dryly, "If he dies or something happens to him, we'll have nothing in a while, it'll be found out that I didn't invent any of it when I suddenly stop sending inventions and they'll stop paying us for the license and then what do we expect our children to live on? On civil service salaries? "

Wow

"Don't tell me about your life Mr. Drake" said Crunky dryly "I don't care, now sit down and take the exam." Spike went down the corridor of tables while looks of hatred were hanging over him and murmurs began to arise among the students.

Wow. They mad mad.

"Get out of my sight nomag," he replied as he looked at the questions being absolutely all correct, "You fucking nomag, you sure did cheat."

Big brain.

"Uh... um... Spike..." said a soft voice, being surprisingly Rainbow Dash.

Wasn’t she talking sh*t?

"Rainbow," began Rarity, "do you even know what you've risked? I know it's not a rule as such but, talking to the nomag means immediately being outcast unless what you talk to him for is to kick his ass."

So what?

"We've all picked on him all the time," said Twilight, "I've thrown his books on the floor many times and laughed at him. Not out of malice, but because it came from inside me. Applejack beat him up when she saw him talking to her sister about eight days ago."

F*ck that whole squad.

Sunset realized what was going on and woke up her friends by kicking Spike in the face, knocking him down and causing blood to run down his nose again.

Spike has the patients of a monk.

Pete100
Pete100 #18 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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"Harmony Girls." Rares: Twilight finally showed up darling? Twi: Yes, he's here and he bought me flowers and invited me to the tickets. He's the best. Shy: I'm glad he didn't stand you up Twilight, he's a good guy deep down. ApJ: See, those mermaids were just trying to bother us. Our boys are loyal, don't you think Dash? Dash: Yeah... no doubt about it, if you say so...

I know this may make me sound like a monster, but I honestly feel no remorse for these b*tches.

Pete100
Pete100 #19 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10830907
Why are they even still connected to the elements?

tx-300
tx-300 #20 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10830937
They even blame Spike if the world goes into a pandemic

tx-300
tx-300 #21 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831238
the story should show the elements weakening the cause that it is doing with the nomag, at the beginning of the story it is confusing.

Pete100
Pete100 #23 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831394
It honestly should, because they obviously don’t deserve those elements.

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #24 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831238
This is the reaction that I want, many questions, hate to the T-Wings and a little to the Harmony Girls... and sorry because this carrousel of horror just begin (evil laughts in spanish) just... poor spike 🤣🤣🤣 all questions Will be solve by time don't worry

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #25 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831394
Time by time, I prefer the confusing cause then, when all the pieces are connected, the satisfaction would be better

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #26 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831393
Random Magical creature of my story: "Mmm a pandemic is killing many people... THE NOMAG, I KNEW IT.
Spike: ... Really?
🤣

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #27 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10830907
How do you know?😲
I think that you Will freak out with the ending (spoiler: Mecha fight) but for now, let's say that Spike don't want more trouble to his mind

tx-300
tx-300 #30 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831427
for more Iron-man than Mecha for Spike.

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #32 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831577
That more things (bad mostly) are about to happen

Pete100
Pete100 #35 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831601
Is he ever gonna get revenge or anything?

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #36 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831625
You have no idea my friend, but revenge is served cold and with time, so many things need to happen

Pete100
Pete100 #37 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831632
Can you say who his revenge is gonna be on?

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #38 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831642
I don't like to do spoiler but, just think that I love horror videogames and specialy one that have a bird, a bear, a bonny and a fox... i can't tell more, but the revenge has someting with this just wait and enjoy reading.

LuckyMagic
LuckyMagic #39 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831660
And the revenge is to everyone who mess with him

Pete100
Pete100 #41 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831394
How is the beginning of the story confusing?

tx-300
tx-300 #42 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831719
wins the magic after defeat and reshaping the being of chaos with elements and still and recent should if all chaos trying to learn and more has nomag in the middle besides Spike before the magic was majority and firearms would be more efficient, netflix series shadow and bones showed this. They are on land or equestry or name has changed. And Spike should be a dragonbound. Aaaaaaaahhhh!

Pete100
Pete100 #43 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10831765
I’ll be honest, I think your grammar confused me.

Pete100
Pete100 #47 · May 25th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4: A date with an alicorn ·
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10832264
Yeah, so you may wanna edit that a little bit.

Wolfking black
Wolfking black #48 · May 26th, 2021 · · · Chapter 5: Cards on the table ·
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I can’t say I was expecting this in the chapter, worried for what is to come next though

Xinos213
Xinos213 #49 · May 26th, 2021 · · · Chapter 5: Cards on the table ·
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I like it waiting for the next one

tx-300
tx-300 #50 · May 26th, 2021 · · · Chapter 5: Cards on the table ·
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"The sabotage of the Thousand Yards of Mareapolis by a nomag runner, the Last Normals of the Planets gang of robbers, the kingpin Don Brute Marequendis who has been plunging Las Pegasus into drugs since magic began and all his nomag gangsters who rob, extort and kill the people who live there, the Valentine's Day massacre four years ago... shall I go on?" said Twilight trying to talk some sense into them.

Okay, Okay, Twiglith so when you and your friends defeated Discord and released Magic thinking that the world is going to get better, to know that it happened? It got worse, because of you your irresponsible let society determine to discriminate against those who have no magic, before magic this world already had pre-concept with people, death, murder, robberies and everything bad without the existence of nomag.

but when the magic came 'our blame on the nomag that people died he has to be isolated', damn it, people like you explode your emotions.

Do you know why you blame the nomag? to hide his irresponsibility that happened, Spike is a victim of this and all nomag magnified by not having magic.

And I am pissed that the magic of the elements of harmony should be saying that the treatment with these people is wrong. Or this magic is also discriminating.

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