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Clay Pigeon


Eight years.

Eight years full of conflict & war – eight long years she hæs spent living a þousand years in ðe past. Eight years of fighting for various lords & ladies, all leading up to a final duel against ðe warlord Apollyon.

Now, the Warden has returned to her own time and must reacquaint herself with the culture of the twenty-first century and the life she left behind. However, she is not the only one who remembers the conflicts of Ashfeld…

Crossover with For Honor. This takes place just after Rainbow Rocks, so the events of Friendship Games have yet to happen. Concept is inspired by the story Springtime for a Drake. I highly recommend giving it a read.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 24 )

For Honor is a video game focusing on medieval combæt. ‘Tis basically a “Who wöuld win in a fight?” game between knights, Vikings, ænd samurai.
Here, I’ll leave a link to ðe cutscene depicted in ðe first chapter. I... may have tweaked þings in my versiön a little.

Cutscene starts at 2:38.

Looks interesting.
Well-written enough for the grammatical errors to not bother me. You could still use a pre-reader, nonetheless.
While I'm not open for such a position, I know there are many groups who are.

I'm keeping an eye on this one.

Þænk you! :pinkiehappy: I’m grateful for ðe compliment, but I’d æctuælly prefer it if my errörs were pointed out. Poör græmmar irritates me æs well, ænd I’m always trying to improve. John Grisham or Kkat I æm not.
Regarding ðe pre-reader, I cöuldn’t agree more. Right now, I’m essentiælly my own pre-reader; æs such, I’m always loöking for ænyöne who’s willing to help.

Wow. that was great! Was not expecting ARIA to be the leader of the Vikings.

Þænk you! :pinkiehappy: I’ve been wörking on ðis for quite söme time, ænd I’m ecstætic to see such a positive reæctiön.

Regarding ðe spoiler… you’re close. Aria is among ðe Vikings (specifically as a Shaman öf ðe Drekiheim clæn) but she is not ðeir leader. Ðæt honör goes to Jarl Vegarðr; ðe only leader in ðe room was Ayu... in hindsight, I probably shöuld’ve made ðæt more clear. :facehoof: My bæd.

I love this fan fic it’s amazing canny wait to ver mas no e leído lo que recommended but I will read it now

Not nearly enough for a fourth chapter at the moment, but I have been workiŋ on it, I assure you. Unfortunately, I’ve written myself into a corner and, as of now, I haven’t the slightest clue as to how to get out of it. I know what I want to happen, just not how to make it happen.
My sincerest apologies. One thing I despise is when authors disappear without a word, and here I am doiŋ the exact same thiŋ. :facehoof: I’ll try to keep everyone posted from now on.

Most definitely. :ajsleepy: I’ve mænæged to write myself into a corner wiþ ðe next chæpter, ænd I æm in severe need öf æn editör. If you’re offering, I’d be honöred to æccept.

GAH! I so want this to continue! Writer's Block sucks though, I know.

Trust me, I want ðis to cöntinue æs much æs you do; :ajsleepy: unfortunætely, I have written myself into a corner wiþ ðe next chapter, ænd ended up forgetting about ðis story completely until ðe Marching Fire expænsiön came out a few weeks ago. I’m trying to get back into ðe swing öf þings, but wörk is keeping me a bit... distræcted right now.
Ðe fic’s not dead, ðough. I promise ðe fic’s not dead.

I shall await an update with baited breath... And then I'll remember to breathe and wait normally.

I’m deeply sorry to put ðis story on hiatus, but I cænnot in goöd faiþ string you guys along æny longer. Real life is swamping me right now, ænd my drive to cöntinue On Shimmering Steel hæs nearly fizzled out.
Ðe story isn’t dead – I do plan to cöntinue ðe story sömeday – but I’ve currently written myself into a corner ænd hæve no idea how to get out of it. I’m sorry, but I’ve no interest right now in cöntinuing ðis story… ænd fröm ðe læck öf feedback in ðe comments sectiön, I don’t þink ðere’s much interest fröm you guys eiðer. I won’t lie… ðæt’s a big fæctör æs to why I cæn’t bring myself to cöntinue; it feels like I’m only publishing ðis for my own sake, ænd ðæt’s not enöugh.
Clay Pigeön

I am willing to help. Sorry I am late. I hope others sill agree that this story is awesome, and I personally like it a lot, and we wait for it's return.

I've been looking for another For Honor story to read, and I'm happy to find this. Been enjoying it so far, and I'll be looking forward to continuing reading this whenever you decide to update this. :twilightsmile:

Hey, if you like for honor stories, I have a for honor story that isn't displaced. Though it does have humans put into equestria. Just click my name and look at FOR THE HONOR OF EQUESTRIA.

My sincerest apologies for getting to ðis so late! :ajsleepy: Æs I hinted æt in my previöus comment, real-life kind öf has me æt a moment where I really need to get my shit togeðer and writing döes not take priority, unfortunætely. If you’re willing to help in æny way, I’d be honored to accept.

Yes sir. I can write a chapter, and send it for approvel, or edit chapters as you do them. I also can help with direction. The story is slice of life, and her transition home. A fight here and there, but it isn't about those.

Æny ænd all öf ðose wöuld be perfect. I’ll send you a DM wiþ a link.

I just noticed.
This story has ZERO dislikes at the time of this comment.
In my eyes, that speaks highly of the quality of your literary skill in and of itself.
If you want some actual praise, i honestly feel like leaving it off on the cliffhanger you did is the only low point.
But that is more a personal nitpick out of bias against cliffhangers.

Also, it'd be some funny shit if Sci-Twi was sent back in time as well.
Have her be either an orochi or nobushi.
That'd be a fricking headspin.

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