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ElementBrigade


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Well I will be interesting to read this story agien, I think it will be good one, atleast Alma is still here,

I'm guessing this is a rewrite?

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Yeah it is a rewrite, but an interesting one~

Have... Have you never played a souls game before? The maximum of a stat is 99, and you'd be super overlevelled even ignoring the impossible stats.

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I'm gonna make the assumption that this is caused by a modifier due to being in lands that are teeming with magic.

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I have, though due to her being in a land brimming with pure magic, her stats has increased drastically.

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I'm pretty sure lordran wasn't losing its magic, the "sun" was going out. in ds1 you still had all those weird magical enemies and that big invisible walkway, and then in ds3, the kiln of the first flame got an order of magnitude more complicated with the ringed city inseption areas

still sounds super magical, is my point

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She's in Equestria, not lordran dude. You do know that, right? Hence my statement from before.

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yeah, but I meant that lordran is probably around as magical

I like that is it is now a staff instead of a sword it makes a bit more sense

It’s weird how I can’t tell who’s the bad guy…… and I love it!

Well, that state of good or bad it is objectively gray, as both sides sees them self as good it is only the victorious that deside what is what even if the rest don't or do agree with it

Still grand story, staff instead of sword more understandable it is not like she has the sword of Night and Flame

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the town kinda is because of a leathal vershion of cutey mark pox hit the town making them think cutymarks where evil

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it's what happened in the oragnal creepypasta of story of the blanks

Pain radiated through the Ashen one’s body as she was thrown into the side of the entrance that led towards the entrance of where the path she was on led.

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I like your story, but I have two little things that bother me a bit.

“Yeah...my bad for being inconsiderate or not taking that into account.”

This sentence sounds to me kinda to formal for a simple conversation. "Yeah...my bad for being rude, didn't thought of that." would sound more natural.

Night time has fallen upon the kingdom of Equestria as a familiar golden chariot flew through the moon lite night sky...

As the ponies are anthros wouldn't a palanquin or rickshaw make more sense?

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Thanks for pointing that out with the first part. As for the chariot part, I'm going by how the show had the chairot being carried.

Okay, this seems Interesting....

I haven't read the original so I'll be coming in with no bias!

It's always nice to see a fic featuring Sunnytown, Story of the Blanks is massively underrated.

Applebloom... :fluttercry:

:twilightangry2: YOU BASTARDS!!! :flutterrage:

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It make me wonder how that plague got started in the first place because the Cutie Pox can't be natural, even by the standards of MLP.

A bit of music with this chapter:

“....So let me get this straight. This town is cursed because they killed your friend due to this mark that she got from finding something that a friend of hers lost?” Alma asked as the earth pony nodded. “...Oddly enough I had a dream of something like this, though it was near the ocean, and the pe...ponies were disfigured fish-like creatures.”

“Byrgenwyrth… Byrgenwyrth. Blasphemous murderer’s, blood crazed fiends. Atonement for the wretches, by the wrath of mother kos. Mercy for the poor, wizened child. Mercy oh please. Curse here, curse there, a curse for he and she. Why care. A bottomless curse, a bottomless sea, source of all greatness, all things that be. Listen for the name full chants, weep with them, as one in trance. And weep with us, oh weep with us.”

Heh, Celestia done figured out what she did wrong, now what she gonna do to fix it?

Yay nice, the rewrite is awesome and good so thanks and do your thing

“Something involving a curse or something. I wasn’t paying much attention due to lack of interest, and I was still trying to wake up from being stoned.” ”

She took 1 to many puffs of the joint.

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....it took me awhile to get what you mean behind that joke XD

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