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Good fic continue
You've Met a Terrible Fate, Haven't You?
Not that I'm complaining, It's pretty impressive that you are working on a new one and it happens to be one of my Favorite "Legend of Zelda" Games.
Who Will be the next Vessel for Majora to take over? I Wouldn't be surprised if it was Luna. A Princess who has the power to control the moon, has Dark Past of her time as "Nightmare-Moon", Striking down her Sister out of jealousy and resentment, Attempting to Bring Nighttime Eternal and to rule Equestria Alone. Majora will probably use both Luna's and It's own power to bring the Moon crashing down and obliterate Equestria.
I Look Forward to Seeing Where this will go. Keep up the Good Work.
If I had a shekel for everytime I've posted the following:
I'm gonna have to leave a down-vote on this one. The plot has been to death and beyond, the arbitrary nature of it even more so, the OC is unlikable and doesn't stand out from the thousands just like him, and the dialogue is just...flat.
1/8 m8. Please don't be ir8.
Amazing fanfiction please continue.
7670890 B-but there isn't even any real dialog yet!
Jesus, I think this is the definition of "Judging a Book by it's Cover"
I'll admit, I wasn't expecting alot of good comments.. But.. Its a bit like a kick to the nuts
7670887 At least I have you my friend. You think this will make a good story right? It was a bit hard to get it started since the character doesn't have limbs or the innate ability to talk anymore.
I have some good ideas, as this was my other idea for a first Displaced. I found myself thinking about this one more than Grimoire
Liking this please continue .
Intresting. Never seen this particular thing done before, so I will watch with intrest.
7671304 Unless our Friend takes Enough Damage, he can sprout some limps and be in The "Incarnation" Form. But Too Much, will cause him to enter the "Wrath" Form and go Berserk. But Can't Majora actually speak in the "Mask" form after it revealed itself when the Giants Stopped the Moon and it Discarded the Skull-Kid?
If This is going to be anything like you're Grimiore of Equestria Story, I Think I Can say It's gonna be a good one. unless you've either received a C&D or lost motivation to continue, but I doubt that'll happen.
And Again...
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Keep up the Good Work and I Look Forward to seeing where this will go.
Hmm lets see. Displaced? check
Sent to equestria? check
Has dark power aura? check
.......Im in love and its only the first chapter! Please continue!
Well... thtat certainlt happened. Apart from some misspellings and minor sentence tweaks, this is a good chapter!
.....Well That was an Interesting Confrontation.
The Guy really didn't want to do it, but it was the only way to communicate through possession. Thankfully he was able to help Luna from being possesses By Majora and prevented her of becoming a Puppet to it's Will.
What do the Sisters intend to do with Majora Now?
And Majora...Since When Were You, The One in Control..?
7678395 nice undertale reference that would be an awesome matchup Chara vs Majora's Mask fight
i love it!! more please
it seems interesting
What have you done there will be majoras make on Luna's butt pics forever!!!
There is excellent, and then there is this. Well done so far
Really....really you really went down THAT road
No comment
I honestly had high hopes for this story and they were crushed in three chapters. Not only did you kill off your main character, you completely broke the displaced formula and not in a good way.
The fact the main characters was murdered to spawn the Deus Ex Machina mask was a lazy writing tactic... I mean it's not even a human in Equestria story at this point since he's officially dead. As such I'll be asking for the stories removal from the displaced group.
That was indeed a warm moment, but then...
Majora & Nightmare-Moon Shattered that moment and have begun their Ambition. Equestria probably won't be the same again after this.
You all seriously can't expect that everything will be fine after that? Majora's Mask is a Dark game and such Tragedies are bound to happen. This is only one of them, there are going to be more in the future and another thing our character is only temporary separated at the moment and is not dead.
And to the Author. I Look forward to seeing what will happen next.
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Holy shit.. Do you really think I would kill of my own character? The character that I JUST finished fleshing out? The Fuck would I do that for? I may be stupid, but I'm not gonna kill the story's only focus..
If you don't mind, I now have to focus on the next chapter of this instead of my other story, just so people don't assume he's dead..
*grumbles to himself* I didn't even imply he was dead.. I made sure to mention being split.
7707282 At least you understand, thank you for believing in me
I Guess Nightmare figured out Majora's Deception after it used her power to bring the moon crashing down on Equestria. Thankfully they were able to stop both Majora and the moon in time. Now Nightmare is scarred by Majora and wants nothing to do with it. Nightmare only wanted Eternal Night and Rule Equestria, But Majora only desires it's wish to be granted and bring only oblivion.
The Fierce Deity is possibly the only god to counter Majora's power and quell Majora's Rampage should he be unleashed again. Is Celestia the only one to use the Fierce Deity's Mask? What will they do with Nightmare Now?
7707373 You Are Very Welcome.
7679076 Thanks.
Oh... And Another Thing...
7712522 You always have the best questions, but if I answer them, then I ruin the story!
I give exception to this one question however. Celestia will not be the only one to wield that power.. In fact, she's one of Four candidates for it.
7712522 I've seen a theory that Majora's mask and the Fierce Deity are parallels to the everlasting struggle between the incarnations of Link and Ganondorf.
MORE!
7707373 I thought what you did was clever and a fresh new take on the displaced trope. Love this story and hope you can continue its greatness
But remember
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7712556 Thank you and Apologies...
Is That So...?
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I See...
You sir are amazing. I however demand more! Lol. Very good man please keep it up!
fuckin' skull kid discord
It's alright. You were just making sure that you've done it right, no rush and plus you needed a lot of time to perfect it. I don't mind waiting, besides I'm practicing patience.
Luna participating with our friend throughout Termina, I Wonder what's gonna happen once they get to Ikana Canyon? Why does Majora continue to act like a spoiled demon even after it's power was quelled for now?
The first chapter seemed promising.
Second chapter comes along and it starts to follow in the footsteps of every displaced fic ever. And thats not a good thing.
Third chapter and it becomes unreadable to me.
8123932 I implore you to reconsider.. It doesn't go the direction you and everybody else thought it would..
I just watched the sun zip across the sun into a sunset..
Can you see what's wrong?
Is this story still being updated?
Oh no. Why do I get the feeling that things are about to get seriously chaotic in a very bad way?
It's funny. I was wanting to do a Ghirahim in Equestria fic.
Looks promising.
Is this story on Life Support or is it in a Coma?
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Sadly, it's dead. No response to my comment for two years, which is a shame. Any Displaced of zelda character is a rarity.
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Is this story dead?
10098890
Looks like it here when it's almost 2021, not updated in 4 years, the author is still popping in, so...abandoned... pity, this was looking good
9401676
Then go ahead I mean there is a Hyrule warriors ganondorf and zant displaced fics.