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Yess this story is getting very interesting to read keep up a good work update more soon it has my full attention now.
Cue the theme music:
I am wondering something though, why Hazama instead of Yuki Terumi? I mean Terumi is significantly stronger than his Hazama counterpart.
This has intrigued me
that's what she said! Lol, great story mate!
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I have plans for the future about that actually. I hope it pans out like I want, this IS my first attempt at writing after all.
nice work
Oops hazama you did it now I can't wait to see what happens next keep up the good work.
Question. Is Hazama going to be an antagonist?
You know Mr. Anderson, it is invaluable.
7546752 I love this story!
See, I told you Mr. Anderson.
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You'll have to wait and see. I'm making it as hard to tell as possible got a reason XD
*<>* why do we get the feeling that as soon as he caused Luna to release her hidden power and later released his magical presence to Luna that Celestia picked up on it and gave chase ....prolly thinking the worst cuz of the current worldly affairs going on
Now this is interesting. Blazblue was one idea I had for a future story.
Welp.... Murphy happened.
Certainly good for a first story. Keep it up
Dang It! I was gonna have him...
It's spelled 'grimoire'.
For some reason I can see the trash symbol that lets me delete your story I don't know why. You might want to check your settings on the story or something.
*<>* Oh snap this just keeps getting better
more
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Why does it feel like the chapter ends where it shouldn't?
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Is Celestia really saying he's evil just because he's able to kill her?
Shesh Celestia's a pussy.
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Lol, not what i was going for, But she does seen to use the Elements as a crutch doesn't she?
7565352 Just remember, this is set in the time with Sombra, anything dark and creepy will scare them
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You may want to break up your paragraphs a bit more, long paragraphs spark TLDR syndrome like nothing else...
Other than that, I'm looking forward to what's coming...
I hope this isn't going where I think it's going if so it's going to be boring I have seen it too many times let me guess the evil won the battle now he is going to do something bad and somehow down the line princess turned him to Stone 1000 years later he breaks out but by this point he's beaten the evil Within him and everybody still thinks he's evil and he tries to do something to prove it's not that are you going to take it the other way he's going to be evil which is going to be worse than the other one well we'll see in the next couple chapters
Don't get me wrong I liked it up to this point but once that stuff in the head started it started getting predictable now if he stays good through the whole thing that's not predictable I haven't seen that and I'm not trying to bad mouth you or anything like that I'm just offering some criticism something to help you get better something most people look for I'm not going to be one of those people that tell yo it's good when it's not
7565508 Yes.
Well since Hazama is the god of trolling I would like to see him and Discord duel to decide who is the true god of trolling.
good job
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Plot twist; Celestia beats them both
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Agreed, PUT IT ON A SHIRT!!!
WoW dark turn.
I wasn't aware Resident Evil 4 had a merchant in it. Are you sure it has one?
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Yup
If You Don't believe me, You Could just google it
It'll show up
7578725 the merchant even has his own cut scene when he first shows up. Also, his "What're ya buyin?" and "What're ya sellin?" lines are some fun to imitate, creepy lines.
good job
Can't wait for the next chapter
That's Good our boy managed to Repelled Terumi, But It's only a matter of time when Terumi Takes Complete Control. Hazama Better Find some help on either weakening & Sealing Terumi or Destroy Him completely.
Guessing after what Celestia witnessed, Doubt, Distrust & Safety will begin to plague her mind on Sealing Hazama/Terumi by using the Elements of Harmony or Imprisoning Him in Tartarus for a Crime that was beyond Hazama's Control. Either way, This will not sit well for Luna.
When the "Nightmare Arc" Begins, Are Terumi and Nightmare-Moon gonna Fight Each other or work together on defeating Celestia and Conquer Equestria and then be defeated?
7583789 So many possibilities.
Love
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7584094 Ain't that a kick in the head.
7583789 couldn't they try to purge Tarumieith the Elements? Or even move him to his own body with necromancy then destroy that?
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Remember the animation the Crystal Empire where they didn't have the elements nor know about them.(I think)
7585567 There's still necromancy
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You got me there Panda
7584066 Thank You. But it's actually up to the Author since it is his/her Story.
7585035 It is Unknown How they we're able to Defeat and banish Sombra, Depending your Canon or Fanon. They've Either used the Elements of Harmony on him or both Celestia & Luna combined their Magic together to use a Banishing Spell.
And Like "Dark Magic", Necromancy is Forbidden. Similar to Dark Magic, It can corrupted the caster's mind and lead them down the Dark Path and It is Very Disrespecting to revive the dead & have them serve you.