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Ahhhhhh jease I new what I was getting into but I read it anyways.......Why do these things exist (being rhetorical jsut need to dump a little.) Overall nice idea but not my cup o tea.....far from it so sorry mate downvote
This will be most glorious entertainment.
Please continue!
Hopefully once you fully flesh out the plot it gets better. As of now, its just odd
this seems interesting whens the next chapter out?
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Hmm..
I wasnt expecting anyone to ask that, I guess I can have another chapter out on Thursday? Assuming I get the next chapter of another story out first.
Yeah, seems do-able
7725412 :D ok
i want more please
7731934 Agreed! The premise is really interesting and their interactions are both too cute and hilarious to not want more of it!
CURSE YOU CLIFFHANGER!!
Nice.
I really like this story. I don't see many like it on the site and it definitely has my interest. Keep up the spectacular work and I definitely hope to see more.
*SPLAT*
"Ugh, another one? I hate those things!" Luna grumbled as she wiped off her hoof, a red streak appearing on the white marble floor.
Damnit, I wanted to read this whole, but now I am dazed right at the start by this. You have got my maximal attention! I will love this story! ^^
Story awesome man.
Get out of my head. I've been trying to think of a way to write something like this. You are possim grade for actually making this a real thing. Can't wait to read more.
This is great. I look forward to seeing where it goes.
wat
As fun as that sounds, I think that's a typo.
moving on...
BAH! CLIFFHANGER?! nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Make more!
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Thanks for the catch, I fixed the typo.
As for more of this story, as the people have demanded, it will be getting more love from me
7801658 I hope it will arrive soon, with more Cadance :-D
is the next one going to come up soon?
Plz more when is there going to be more?
I loved this story. It is surprisingly well done. Its sad that it hasn't been updated in months. I would be willing to bounce ideas off the Author, should the Author be stuck.
The Monk
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Be said he has chapters written and he waits until he posts them. Because he is busy.
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Holy crap I forgot about that, I'll be updating this soon
7982282 oh wow
My favorite story and you forget about it.
7982498
Sue me, I've had a lot going on..
Anyway, It'll be up in a few
Nice thank you for continuing to wright this story great job by the way and are u going to start the story about the Op Lil girl in equestria
Y'know, Nero is pretty chill about seeing his fellow humans smeared across the floor. And the genocide spells. I realize that it's kinda par for the course, but goddammit man! You're allowed to freak the fuck out a little.
Great update.
Minor typo though.
The Monk
Im sorry, I just can't let this slide.
So what your saying, is that Celestia basically gave all the guards blue balls.
: )
The Monk
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Im afraid I dont understand your question, could you elaborate?
7983318
You have no Idea how many times I told myself "I can't put that in the story..."
But my soul said "You can't take that back, its too funny"
Very nice! I hope that when he gets to meet Mane6, I hope that Applejack will keep hating the humans even after she figured out they are smart :3
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I notice that you said gently, but I am still impressed by his ability to remain on her snout during any head movement at all.
Pink is an adjective, not a proper noun. You should not be capitalizing every instance of it.
You should really proofread your work before you publish it. This is embarrassing.
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But I do those things on purpose.. I feel that capitalizing a colour makes them stick out more, so people really imagine the colour as they read. I know its not grammatically correct, but you're also the first of all my readers to point it out. So kudos to you
7997657
These sort of things tend to jump out at me. As long as there's a reason for it beyond sheer ignorance.
I really wished they weren't that tiny. I sometimes don't see what's so grand about stories like this(or people that might get turn on by this). At least make them indestructible dang it!
8028384 It makes them literally nothing. That's what is interesting. Just specks among the godlike ponies. They have all the power, killing them without even noticing.
It is strange how the ponies turn exact 180 on humans when they find out they are smart. Some ponies, like Applejack, shouldn't, so we can keep things interesting :D
Someone plz tell me this story's not dead I've grown to enjoy this to much
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Not dead, more 'Hiatus' I guess would be the word for it. I have a chapter in the works, but.. I've been distracted. Sorry
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Please, is the hiatus over? :)
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He also said earlier (as all of the chapter are the same day) he's basically ran out of freak-outs today.
You still working on this story? I really do enjoy this.
Will you continue? I'd pay you for each new chapter :)
I cant believe they kill humans just cuz they think they are bugs