Displaced fic. A man gets transported to Equestria after buying an item from The Merchant. This item? Majora's Mask... And now I'm a floating mask.. What's going on?!
I honestly had high hopes for this story and they were crushed in three chapters. Not only did you kill off your main character, you completely broke the displaced formula and not in a good way.
The fact the main characters was murdered to spawn the Deus Ex Machina mask was a lazy writing tactic... I mean it's not even a human in Equestria story at this point since he's officially dead. As such I'll be asking for the stories removal from the displaced group.
Majora & Nightmare-Moon Shattered that moment and have begun their Ambition. Equestria probably won't be the same again after this.
You all seriously can't expect that everything will be fine after that? Majora's Mask is a Dark game and such Tragedies are bound to happen. This is only one of them, there are going to be more in the future and another thing our character is only temporary separated at the moment and is not dead.
And to the Author. I Look forward to seeing what will happen next.
7707090 Holy shit.. Do you really think I would kill of my own character? The character that I JUST finished fleshing out? The Fuck would I do that for? I may be stupid, but I'm not gonna kill the story's only focus.. If you don't mind, I now have to focus on the next chapter of this instead of my other story, just so people don't assume he's dead.. *grumbles to himself* I didn't even imply he was dead.. I made sure to mention being split.
7707282 At least you understand, thank you for believing in me
Really....really you really went down THAT road
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I honestly had high hopes for this story and they were crushed in three chapters. Not only did you kill off your main character, you completely broke the displaced formula and not in a good way.
The fact the main characters was murdered to spawn the Deus Ex Machina mask was a lazy writing tactic... I mean it's not even a human in Equestria story at this point since he's officially dead. As such I'll be asking for the stories removal from the displaced group.
That was indeed a warm moment, but then...
Majora & Nightmare-Moon Shattered that moment and have begun their Ambition. Equestria probably won't be the same again after this.
You all seriously can't expect that everything will be fine after that? Majora's Mask is a Dark game and such Tragedies are bound to happen. This is only one of them, there are going to be more in the future and another thing our character is only temporary separated at the moment and is not dead.
And to the Author. I Look forward to seeing what will happen next.
7707090
Holy shit.. Do you really think I would kill of my own character? The character that I JUST finished fleshing out? The Fuck would I do that for? I may be stupid, but I'm not gonna kill the story's only focus..
If you don't mind, I now have to focus on the next chapter of this instead of my other story, just so people don't assume he's dead..
*grumbles to himself* I didn't even imply he was dead.. I made sure to mention being split.
7707282 At least you understand, thank you for believing in me
7707373 You Are Very Welcome.
7707373 I thought what you did was clever and a fresh new take on the displaced trope. Love this story and hope you can continue its greatness
But remember
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