Good fic continue

You've Met a Terrible Fate, Haven't You?

Oh...? Working on Another Displaced Story, My Friend?

Not that I'm complaining, It's pretty impressive that you are working on a new one and it happens to be one of my Favorite "Legend of Zelda" Games.

Who Will be the next Vessel for Majora to take over? I Wouldn't be surprised if it was Luna. A Princess who has the power to control the moon, has Dark Past of her time as "Nightmare-Moon", Striking down her Sister out of jealousy and resentment, Attempting to Bring Nighttime Eternal and to rule Equestria Alone. Majora will probably use both Luna's and It's own power to bring the Moon crashing down and obliterate Equestria.

I Look Forward to Seeing Where this will go. Keep up the Good Work.

If I had a shekel for everytime I've posted the following:
I'm gonna have to leave a down-vote on this one. The plot has been to death and beyond, the arbitrary nature of it even more so, the OC is unlikable and doesn't stand out from the thousands just like him, and the dialogue is just...flat.
1/8 m8. Please don't be ir8.

Amazing fanfiction please continue.

7670890 B-but there isn't even any real dialog yet!
Jesus, I think this is the definition of "Judging a Book by it's Cover"
I'll admit, I wasn't expecting alot of good comments.. But.. Its a bit like a kick to the nuts

7670887 At least I have you my friend. You think this will make a good story right? It was a bit hard to get it started since the character doesn't have limbs or the innate ability to talk anymore.
I have some good ideas, as this was my other idea for a first Displaced. I found myself thinking about this one more than Grimoire

Liking this please continue .

Intresting. Never seen this particular thing done before, so I will watch with intrest.

7671304 Unless our Friend takes Enough Damage, he can sprout some limps and be in The "Incarnation" Form. But Too Much, will cause him to enter the "Wrath" Form and go Berserk. But Can't Majora actually speak in the "Mask" form after it revealed itself when the Giants Stopped the Moon and it Discarded the Skull-Kid?

If This is going to be anything like you're Grimiore of Equestria Story, I Think I Can say It's gonna be a good one. unless you've either received a C&D or lost motivation to continue, but I doubt that'll happen.

And Again...

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Keep up the Good Work and I Look Forward to seeing where this will go.

Hmm lets see. Displaced? check

Sent to equestria? check

Has dark power aura? check

.......Im in love and its only the first chapter! Please continue!

The first chapter seemed promising.

Second chapter comes along and it starts to follow in the footsteps of every displaced fic ever. And thats not a good thing.

Third chapter and it becomes unreadable to me.

I just watched the sun zip across the sun into a sunset..
Can you see what's wrong?

Looks promising.