Rings that grant abilities from the spirits that inhabit the gems from within, Spike's life shall never be the same again!
So far, this is pretty good. Can't wait for more.
How is this both anthro and takes place in the Equestria Girls universe?
Let's see where it goes.files.everypony.ru/smiles/f0/f3/d62ee4.png Please change the color of the first Chapter.
And here we gggggoooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!
11663880I wonder that too
Interesting origin and a decent opening.
Some spelling and grammar issues, but it's still readable. Running it through Google docs spell check or grammarly would help.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
I’d recommend gram army to help with the grammar. It’s not perfect but it’ll help, I’d also suggest longer chapters. I’d recommend a thousand words minimum, it’ll encourage you to flesh them out more
11676499Will take gram army into consideration, and I am planning on making chapters longer.
11677587Sorry autocorrect grammaly not gram army
11677587What darkstar is referring to is grammarly
I wonder how the wish will make spikes life better. Should be interesting.
So far, this is pretty good. Can't wait for more.
How is this both anthro and takes place in the Equestria Girls universe?
Let's see where it goes.
files.everypony.ru/smiles/f0/f3/d62ee4.png Please change the color of the first Chapter.
And here we gggggoooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!
11663880
I wonder that too
Interesting origin and a decent opening.
Some spelling and grammar issues, but it's still readable. Running it through Google docs spell check or grammarly would help.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
I’d recommend gram army to help with the grammar. It’s not perfect but it’ll help, I’d also suggest longer chapters. I’d recommend a thousand words minimum, it’ll encourage you to flesh them out more
11676499
Will take gram army into consideration, and I am planning on making chapters longer.
11677587
Sorry autocorrect grammaly not gram army
11677587
What darkstar is referring to is grammarly
I wonder how the wish will make spikes life better. Should be interesting.