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Let's see: Can't even spell "skies", or use plurals, or commas, uses 15 tags for a 1k word fic. Doomed to fail.
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Thanks for telling me about the typo I didn’t notice, I hope you try to give it a chance, it was just a singe chapter to get the story running.
I vaguely remember the show yes very much like it
Storm Hawks, Dragon Booster and Slug Terra. Three of my favorite shows (when I could get to watch them)
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I LOVE this show!!!
I love that you decided to make it into a Spike based story.
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I kind of feel sad that I saw this in the past loved it forgot what it was called then saw it when I was at a dentist a while back still loved it and till now remember the show but forgot what the name of it was
Hrmmmm never thought I'd say this lol but A same as with twins swords you have 100% free reign to use red if you want only thing is ask make him hilarious and same as the show goes with different faction's that are not on either side or a badguy would be interesting to see him portrayed as a badguy lol but I love this and I love snarky spike
Makes sense though Joe is gonna be hilarious I mean spike walks in and his orders already there and he don't realise why
i wonder if someone will make a opening for this fanfic, could be cool to see one tbh.
oh snap.... I think even a diamond dog would stay away from the up coming conference.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *cough* *cough* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
LOSER, BARBIE GIRL!
#TEAMEMBERSPIKE
-read chapter, look at tags-
yep that is a sex tag, why did I not see that sooner
all in all a good show sir or ma'am
Ok that was hilarious and twilight passing out was the icing on the cake
That ending
Keep it up
Okay, I hate to be that guy but I'm gonna be brutally honest here and say that this chapter felt really, really rushed. The reconciliation between Spike and Celestia felt forced and doesn't feel genuine in the slightest. This is what it felt like to me:
Spike: You sent me away without a word five years ago and rarely contacted me!!!
Celestia: I did to protect you.
Spike: Oh, okay. I partially forgive you then.
It just seemed jarring to me.
I also feel that you introduced the Mane Six way too early in this story and so was having them be part of the team. Now I'm not saying that they shouldn't be but we have yet to see how the first five function as a team. My suggestion is dial it back a little, have the Storm Dragons do a couple of missions so the readers know what they can do then have them go to Canterlot.
I apologize if I sound harsh in my criticism but I think the previous chapters need to be rewritten a bit.
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I get it but I’m planning on doing some in depth flashback chapter after the Canterlot ones. For 2 reasons the first is to show the girls how bad it can get with spike and crew the second is to give them a idea of how they operate, this is all going to happen during their first training session. As for the celestia bits that will make an appearance too. But Spike has been in life or death situations where it was either him or civilians or his crew.
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Whatever happened to those shows anyway?
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cancelled, cancelled, finished but really had advertisements for the final season never air, then had a few short movies, but never saw him get back to the surface, or really wrap the plot up.
This wasa awesome and interesting beginning can't wait to see where this goes..
This was a awesome lore chapter.
This was a interesting one there wings are awesome.
This was a wild and hilarious chapter.
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do you hear any news like samurai jack got a finishing season??
Pokes your snoot annoyed thanks for the spoilers I was excited to find out if they pulled it off
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true I did, but i didn't go into detail on how bad it went, that's the next chapter.
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true now im wondering whos gonna fall first
This was a fun and sweet lore chapter it was awesome to see Luna and Ember getting to meet learn about it ACH other and a awesome spare .
the girls are soooooo gonna look at spike in a strange way after this.
This reminds me of an old TV series called storm hawks
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I love it, please update soon.
Same old tia
This is a awesome fic!!! I do you hope you update soon!^^ soo excited to see whats next!
I like this fic, your awesome plz update.
Good work, Tad.
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Thanks Wrex, I don't know what took me so long to get it out, I had most of it ready as early as March
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Well, when you factor in the other stories your doing, delays are unavoidable.
This is more about the story image then the latest chapter on here but, I just realized that's the Skrill from the httyd franchise. And about it, did you know there's Dragon Rescue Riders on Netflix, including some mini movies. (Well, I call the latters that mainly because they're longer than the individual episodes.)
10382093 yes
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..... uuh.........
Nice chapter.
The new chapter is awesome i love it!! Happy to see you contiue the story! Can't wait for a new chapter!!
This was a awesomely cute and fun chapter I'm happy Spike is helping the main six get better . plus some adorable mother and son with Spike and Celestia, and some funny and chill future mother in law and daughter in law time with her and Ember. 1 I hope Celestia and Discord get together in this story and I shill with Spike had at least 1 more girl if he's going to have Two big slugs.
Is this story gonna be continued?