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This story is a sequel to Play Date
Written as a second submission of the "Shining Armor is a Terrible Dad 2024" Contest
Flurry Heart has grown to love her play dates with her dad, but as she's gotten older, their adventures have gotten more dangerous, much to Cadance's dismay.
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She's got a point.
This reminds me of playing Princess Maker and winding up with a daughter who is a hardened combatant.
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Just wait til the next sequel. Those combat skills are going to get put to the test...
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Well, ’tis no matter; honour pricks me on. Yea, but how if honour prick me off when I come on? how then? Can honour set to a leg? no: or an arm? no: or take away the grief of a wound? No! Honour hath no skill in surgery, then? No!
What is honour? A word! What is in that word honour? What is that honour? Air! A trim reckoning! Who hath it? He that died o’ Wednesday. Doth he feel it? No! Doth he hear it? No! ‘Tis insensible, then. Yea, to the dead. But will it not live with the living? No! Why? Detraction will not suffer it.
Therefore I’ll none of it. Honour is a mere scutcheon: and so ends my catechism.
Cousin Nyx is being a bad influence, as well as Dad.
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At least she's staying fit, instead of getting pudgy from learning strategy from Battletech, Warhammer and O&O.
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I'm really enjoying your short stories. I might just follow you in the near future.
Also, just remembered, and I didn't put this in the review, but really good sense of action. Movement and form description were very well done on top of the much better pacing.