Now at that 'tricky' age of nine, a moody Flurry Heart is left with her aunt Twilight for the afternoon while Shining Armour goes off to take care of... something. Their time together is more eventful than either one expects...
Picture credit to Aleximus Prime on DeviantArt
So I heard there was some kind of Shining Armour Is A Terrible Father Contest on, and I wanted in.
Let's see how we do!
Aww
I love the art
Alexisis did good
"I did actually. And I tested it as well, just in case. Nice try."
"Damn it!"
How this story should've actually gone and made Shining out to be a truly horrible father, and not just his usual lame self.
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Yes, yes he/she did. This is the Flurry I wanted to portray in my story, cute but with a bit of sass...
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Nah, I wanted to show even the intelligentsia can be caught out on occasion by the cunning wiles of children. My nieces for instance... I could tell you some tales...
$50 US is currently roughly 39 Pounds Sterling.
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Still not enough for even a spark plug.
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You know?
You always sound a little Well...i mean this in the nicest i can possibly say
A little negative but i guess thats just how you are huh?
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Yeah
DAMN ECONOMY!
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Indeed
The flurry i know is sassy yet kind
She'd tease you for messing something up yet easily help fix it
Heh
WAIT UP FLURRY!
ILL JOIN!
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Sadly, I think she got the last ticket... but here you go, something for the fans.
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Thanks
Wild Stallions! *air guitar*
She's got very good taste in music for an alicorn filly.
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Excellent.
Great story!