Queer trans woman, writes stories about queer trans horses
The stories of Sunset Shimmer and Nightmare Moon have a lot in common. Sunset and Luna, though, have never even heard of each other. Luna's past is behind her, but Sunset still has one last apology to make. Will she find the courage to face the one she wronged? Or will she just keep hitting on Luna?
My entry for the Sunset Shipping Contest
Cover by the inimitable Rawrienstein
Special thanks to Gara and Arkadarp for proofreading!
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I really love this fic. It was a pleasure working with you on it.
Yay first like!
Oh, this was glorious. The by-play, everything was spot on. It just felt... natural. Never thought I'd see these two in a relationship within a million years (Part of which may lie in me being a SunLight shipper) but you made it work here. Here, have a mustache.
Wait, but in the first movie Luna clearly knew who Sunset was and where she'd lived. This doesn't make much sense, even if it's a great little story otherwise.
Best part, in my opinion.
Why did this get a sex tag exactly?
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>implications.
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yeah, exactly. I like erring on the side of caution for these things.
This fic made me smile and laugh all through it, great job!
This story....oh my goodness, how good it is! Loved the teasing back and forth and that reveal at the end! Have an up vote, a favorite and a follow. Good writing!
I hope you win the contest, this was great!
Oh Sunny that was hilariously effective
That was super cute loved the way u have this pairing
Only thing that threw me off the tiniest bit was Luna's blush galore. Sputtering yes,... surprised or thrown off? Sure, blushing was just a bit juvenile in that sense IMO. Other than that, have an up-vote and best of luck!
Very good story, almost makes me wish for more but its just perfect as a one shot.
this was quite heartwarming......can you write a sequel?
This is funny! Is there going to be a sequel?
Needs a morning after chapter where Celestia finds them together.
Great story, very interesting shipping choice and it was done well.
That was fluffing awesome :D.
This is some damn great stuff here. Well done.
This ain't too bad, I like this.
Ҳикояи бузург буд! Ман ба инкишофи хаёт ва тарзи гузариш дар саҳнаҳо дӯст доштам! Тавсифи шумо маро хушбахт кард ва умедворам, ки хуб кор кунед! Боварӣ ҳосил намоед, ки чошнӣ дар ҷомашӯӣ гузошта нашавед!
This was so sweet. Wouldn't mind a sequel either. :)
I give this a solid giggty... Not a full on 'hehe alllright...giggity' cause no sex but still a good story and flirty Luna is adorable
I'm way late to this fic omg but I wanted to say it's really good!!!! I'd never considered these two before but you really make them work well!!! The framing of this being when Sunset goes to reconcile with Celestia is really cool too!!! Also that flirty banter???? A+ omg!! The dialogue in general is just really good and natural! All in all this was a lovely read, nice work!!!
I'm surprised this wasn't tagged comedy. Their banter is pretty funny! :)
Wowza, that was good.
Lol, gey
But seriously this was so cute and gay!
A few too many Fluttersqueaks and stammers for such forceful personalities, but all told, this was some quality banter. Thank you for it.
"What of Princess Cadence?"
"There was the one alicorn and a hopped-up feather duster with delusions of relevance."
"..."
"Sorry, that was the old me slipping out for a second."
Well, that was put to bed quickly.
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cadence came when sunset was a pre-teen or early adolescence