Sunset Shimmer has been keeping a secret from her friends. She's got a new girlfriend who's smart, cute, funny, and she can even cook! Sadly, she lacks anything even resembling a social filter, so if you so much as mildly annoy her, she's going to let you know it. Sunset knows she can't keep these two parts of her life apart forever, and Pinkie's big-time creepy Halloween blowout is as good a time as any to introduce them.
Hopefully she'll survive the night.
An entry for Oro's Sunset Shimmer Shipping Contest!
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Okay, for some unknown reason I just see Sunrise as Root from POI. Don't ask me why, but... Anyways, great story and deadly hilarious. And yes, that bad pun was intentional.
So everyoen else is dead?
YES FLASH IS DEAD
Everyone being dead was stupid but other than that it was great
... Welp, Camp Crystal Prep has a Mirror Pool in it. Abandon camp!
The line about good-natured sociopaths got a laugh.
Dammit, KoB.
That was a really fun read, and I think you made it work great within the word count limit.
That was our only shuttlecock...
Kek
Double kek.
Besides all that, a very enjoyable read. Loved tgeir takedown of Equinox as well. Brutal.
Looking forward to the inevitable Canibal Mountain sequel! Or whatever comes next. Good job, and good luck!
I laughed a lot reading this story, good work!
Also, I would love to see the police report for this incident!
I want more of Sunrise and Sunset.
Hah. It's funny because it's true!
Dammit, Sunset. Everything that happens after this is your fault.
“So you’re saying she used her last breath to confess her secret, forbidden love to the Devil?” Rarity asked. She and Fluttershy were standing together over near the snack table, each holding a red plastic cup. “That's actually sort of romantic in a… deeply sacrilegious way.”
Huh... I wouldn't have thought that but you've got me there, Rarity.
Just FYI: Season names, and cardinal directions, don't usually get capitalized.
Anyway, nice prose, and good luck with the contest!
Yeah, don't get your hopes up, Sunnybuns. Pinkie Pie Sleepover Orgy fics are so common that they're probably their own sub-genre by now.
This is incredibly sharp and funny, and I laughed out loud multiple times reading it... but it kinda derailed around the time the slasher film parody stuff happened, and the plot never felt like it came together (as opposed to Sunset and Sunrise, who came together, and probably with a fair amount of plot stuff involved).
Also, the comic sociopathy, while legitimately funny, feels so disconnected from the show's whole ethos that i can't really derive a whole lot of enjoyment from it. I didn't love the handwave explanation, either.
Overall, this started with a carful of promise, and the relationship between the two romantic leads is fun to read, but it feels too tonally dissonant to really land with me. Sorry to say.
*hisses and backs away*
And for some people, this never stops being a reason.
She pokes you because she loves you, Dashie.
Narrator: Sunset was about to discover just how wrong she was.
If the fireplace has a fire large enough to fill it, then are they serving barbeque Pinkie?
*deletes inflammatory anti-religious comment*
Ok, now I like this girl.
Did they come to the party as a vampire and a changeling?
Dangerously GenreSavvy.
I can think of several reactions that TSC!Sweetie would give to such generous permission.
You say that like it's a bad thing.
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I hope someday I can write a story the great Majin Syeekoh approves of.
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I hope I can one day, too.
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Sweet Sunset! That was fast!
And you're like, one of my favorite authors here!
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Okay, now you’re making me blush.
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Really? Cause like the only reason I don't a tivly follow your entire page is so I get the surprise of seeing your stuff under new/popular. Even your shot posts are golden.
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That’s a rather unusual yet interesting reason to not follow me.
Heh, that’s downright interesting.
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I'm an unusual person. It works though. I've read like 90% of your work.
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Glad you enjoy my stuff.
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They're all fun. Except Ave Sonata. That ones sad.
What's the cover phot from
Loved it. Extremely cute. Just think you could have skipped the deaths to make it more comedic and less fridge terror. Excluding that, you're Golden
The mass murder was unnecessarily dark, but I'm giving you a thumbs up anyway for the horse pin villain and his his defeat through history knowledge and taunting.
Kinda feels like two stories in some ways, but it was fun. :D
You've got a "Strawberry Sunshine" in there somewhere.
You can has review!
Who the hell is Strawberry Sunrise and why do I care?
Giggle at the Ghostie?
Strawberry Snarked at the Spectre and Bitched at the Boo.
This my favourite joke. There were others that made me laught but this one had me rolling. Great story. Shame it's so short though (calling 12 short, wow). I love the idea of muffling emotions/creating sociopaths. Very interesting concept. Again, great story.
I know I'm late to the party on this one (no I didn't get it on in a car). But this was waaaay more funny than it had any right to be. Fun stuff.