Cars are still parked outside. If the rapture had happened, why was it unrecognizable? Why was the sky blue? Why did no one tell me? Do these things not announce themselves?
Wallflower Blush is absolutely certain of three things:
One, no sane person working on the student government reads her emails.
Two, Strawberry Sunrise reads her emails.
Three, Strawberry Sunrise is a bitch.
Written for the Thousand Words Contest under the category Experimental.
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I was going to use quote names to include email addresses but apparently that function is disabled for stories. They were going to look like this:
Howdy, hi~!
My goodness, this was adorable. Love the back and forth between them. Definitely, a fun banter and the email style really works for this. Thanks for the read~!
That was adorable and entirely believable for a pair of teenage girls.
I loved this!
I'm surprised this isn't in the unusual pairings contest. I love the exchanges between the two and I totally read more of them. You've some good jokes here and you plant a lot of each characters' personality in their emails.
Good job for a 1k entry!
I’ve mostly been saving these until the submission period closes, but the tags and premise caught my attention on this one. Delightfully dysfunctional crackship. Thank you for it and best of luck in the judging.
Well that's a rather obscure pairing, but goodness this was funny and cute as hell
Very cute
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Aren't succulents the most hands-off plants to keep?
Sunset must be pretty terrible at minding plants if a succulent manages to die in her care.
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Sunset: "Everything I touch dies!"
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Sunset just claims she was sold faulty succulents.
Love the email style, led to some pretty funny banter. I want to know more, but it’s also pretty cool to leave those gaps in to fill in yourself, it’s kinda how you have to go with the Thousand Words Contest.
D'aww. Adorable
Cute story, Red. I like the premise.
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It could've been great!
Wonderful, but I don't need to tell you that, do I? Simply great, the jokes, the pacing, the personalities, it's all great.
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thanks knighty *shake fist*
This was a fun pairing and a cute story. The email exchange set up was used pretty effectively, and I loved seeing Strawberry troll Wallflower like this. The jump from the penultimate to last chapter was rather sudden, but that worked in its own way too.
rip right out of the gate. very #relatable, that depression candy bar!
ehehe, this is spot-on Strawberry Sunrise smugness! like, just the same exact flavor as the one we got in "Honest Apple"! love it
honestly, good on Wallflower for saving the entire school from whatever disaster Trixie was going to inevitably cause with that! makes Wallflower's self-deprecation all the more sad to see. also, hehe, P-Phone
hehe, calling back to Wallflower's first email, nice
so true
this is high quality flirting, and exactly how Strawberry Sunrise would do it, very well done
yeah, you tell her, Wallflower!
haha, so very in line with Vice Principal Luna's only memorable line, as well as what a Vice Principal is
absolutely perfect email address, love it
auaugh perfect
aww, so that is what a post-reformation friendship looks like from the other end! it makes a lot of sense that this is what that would look like
just especially the "Can't blame them!" is so perfectly Strawberry Sunrise, wow! i can really hear that annoying high-pitched smug voice and i love it so much
haha, it's great that this aspect of Sunset is made fun of by the background students like this
aww, growth! much like what happens in a garden, really makes you think
augh, just the right mix of insufferable and adorable!
i love Strawberry so much in this (you just nail her so perfectly i am in awe), and the banter between her and Wallflower was just so fun to witness! this was an absolute delight to read, thank you so much for it!
I love this! The email banter was fun to read and the messages feel completely in character.
Hello! Have a review. I'm not sure this was quite as experimental as I'd been expecting, but who cares? It's a whole lot of fun. Great choice of characters (very nicely written both), lovely sense of humour, feels so well rooted in the CHS universe. I did roll my eyes very slightly at the sight of the number 420, but fortunately it made no difference to my enjoyment. Great fun all round, so have a like and a fave. Well done on the Bronze Medal!
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She is not wrong.
there are somethings money can't buy, for everything else there's Mastercard.
Recommended by TCC56.
And boy, oh boy, am I glad I gave this a shot. Wonderful little bit of rom-com.
This was such a clever storytelling method! I really like the ship too, not one I would expect. well done n_n
That was great! Very effective use of the email format, and true to the asynchronous medium - where we don't really see what's going on behind the scenes, only what gets written and sent.
Shame the quote formatting doesn't work in stories like it does everywhere else (including story previews, knighty fix plz), but the different voices and subject matter was distinct enough to easily tell who was who, even without labels.