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Shakespearicles


The Man. The Legend. The World's Strongest Writer

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20k words of father daughter incest with best pone?

Hell yes.

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their is just no better way to say it.

JackRipper
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Jesus you jumped in quick. :rainbowlaugh:

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THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID!
sorry.not.sorry
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Also, hello and welcome to Father's Day 2017. A story that's year overdue but I am confident that you will find that it will have been worth the wait! :raritywink:

JackRipper
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You're absolutely incorrigible. :unsuresweetie:

Congratulations on the feature, it hasn't happened yet. But let's get real, it'll be in the box soon. :raritywink:

The full image is a good one

8239253 ikr?

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it'll be in the box soon.

THAT'S WHAT-
Really? You're just going to softball it in like that?

JackRipper
Moderator

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That was the plan, yes. :ajsmug:

Nice chapter, but I found a couple spelling errors you may want to edit.

 "Their still so heavy. You haven't had anypony to help you empty them."

"They're".

But he held her tight, despite his repeated apologies, long aster he finished cumming, still making little jerks with his hips.

"after".

Oh wow, I never thought you would actually get around to doing this. And just in time for Father's Day, just as promised.

Fuck, I'm gonna have to wait until I get home from my grandmother's tomorrow to read this. Damn you Shakespearicles for posting this a day early. The anticipation is going to fuck me up a bit.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
21:21_6/17/2017

And all the Sparkles lived happily ever after...except for that changeling kid they all decided to screw over.

8239706 Aww, bro, don't be like that. You just gotta wait for when the sequel comes out.
In like... a year and a half.
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I'm sorry, but is nobody going to comment on this chapter title!?
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That's some god-tier Oscar Wilder word-play right there!

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No idea what you're talking about.

For fucks sake, Shakespearicles. Just when I thought I was normal you had to go and disprove me!

It really would've been better had Nightlight gotten Twilight knocked up. Seriously, Shinning knocked up Velvet, and then Nightlight would knock up Twilight. What a perfect ending that would've been.

Oh well, it was still pretty good overall. Although, the pacing was supersonic. You gotta slow that shit down a bit man, things were happening way too fast.

Yikes indeed

I feel like I need more explanation as to why Shining at all felt justified in doing literally everything he's done to his father thus far.

I need twelve showers.

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That would result in too many kids running around.

I have been waiting for this day, shiny and chrome.
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Couldn't find the full image.....what am I doing wrong??

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I CANT WAIT TO READ IT,!,!!,,,, YAYYYYYYYYYY

It should be illegal to create so much UNF!

I tip my hat to you, you magnificent sire!

i knew it would be u

"Yeah? Well one of us is acting very childish," she said. She stood up and turned around, lifting her tail, flagging it at him and showing off her marehood.

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What a minx :raritywink:

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Agreed. It's quite ridiculous. No one is that big a hypocrite... right?

I still don't understand Shining's reaction. Twilight's reaction to his fucking hypocrisy makes perfect sense, but his reaction is baffling.

Anyway, the Sparkle family tree is a clusterfuck.

Just take a look at my profile picture.

Also, what does 1014692 mean? It doesn't link to a story here as far as I know.

Woooo, lonely island xD

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I guess I can see his side a bit more, wanting to spare Twilight and his father having to try to keep the relationship secret, and that might even explain him forcing them to end the relationship, but the rest of it I think was just Shining being a Dickbag and wanting to get Night on the couch to leave Velvet alone for himself.

Glad you finally got to write your Night Light x Twilight story! Happy Father's day!

"Son, don't you know the golden rule?" Night Light asked.

"It's okay when it's in a three-way," Velvet assured him.

"It's not gay when it's in a three-way," Night Light explained.

"With your sister in the middle there's some leeway," Velvet said.

"The area's grey in a one-two-three-way," Twilight agreed.

DID YOU ACTUALLY JUST...?

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And I said, "What about Breakfast Epiphanies?"

She said, "I think I remember the fic. And as I recall, I think, we both kinda liked it."

And I said, "Well, that's one thing we got."

Happy now, ya needy bastard?

J/K it really was kinda clever.

8239898 Oh, did you think this would be the last sparklecest fic I would write? :trollestia:
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Really though, an alternate ending would be exactly the same story but with an eight-word difference.

Cadance's horn was a tempest of love magic, with just a splash of a contraceptive spell.

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^^^
Pretty much exactly this right here.

I'm trying to like this but every time Night Light gets involved in anything I just end up with 'Punished "Cuckold" Night Light - A Fallen Family Stallion' repeating in my mind. It's like a typical Jay Naylor comic - the action is great but nearly everyone involved is such a terrible person that it's not really entertaining any more.

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