I have to agree as well. There is no level of justification, even as a cover for what he had done in the past to do what he did to his father. Hopefully there is some explanation.
I haven't finished this chapter and I alredy had to come here to comment. Fuck Shining so much!!! How the fuck does he dare act all high and mighty when he's fucking his own mother!! I'm in the part where he's bribing the bartender to give nightlight extra alcohol and I swear that id this doesn't turn into a shit storm for shining armor after this GAH!!!! I don't even know!! He just infuriates me so much!!! Fuck shining armor!! I can't say it enough, fuck him and chop his dick off!!
No, just no. He go off too easily, Shining is garbage, he tried to make his father look bad in front of his mother for doing the exact same thing he was doing with his mother.
Twilight should have chopped his dick off or at least his ball
Ohhh fuck! I assumed night light n velvet were siblings but daaaauuuummmmmn. You you you hippocrate! This was more drama than I signed up for in an incest fic but I'm loving it.
Shining Armor you piece of shit hypocritical dirt bag! I shotguned something close to 8 chapters across two stories of you unrepentantly fucking your mom and getting her pregnant TWICE!! Your mom protected your ass from your father for a year longer than Twilight's life! Let your dad do basically the same thing that your mother has over like 3 decades. Oh wait! Are you in tiffy over the part where he's fucking your daughter?! Your daughter that you irresponsibly brought into the world, and were too irresponsible to raise and provide for, and so your father had to be the responsible one and raise your daughter, all while thinking that she was his? WELL TOO FUCKING BAD!! Let your neglected father get his dick wet in his oldest granddaughter's vag!
Congratulations Shining Armor. You broke your father in the same place and method you broke your family so many years ago. By fucking your mom in your parents' bed. Good job.
*many chapters later, Twilight tells Spike and her friends all at once in the table room* *everyone is quiet for several minutes* : ".....So I guess it's MY time to confess. I've been fucking AJ's dog, Winona, since we moved here." : "Ya know, given how fucked up your family is, I'm gonna let that go as long as you stop fucking her. That, or you buy her for 500 bits. : "SPIKE! WHAT THE F- : "I aborted Zephyr and I's baby with a coat hanger when I was a teenager!" : "FLUT-" : "I practice kissing with my sister Marble!" : "WH-" : "Well as long as we're confessing terrible secrets, I should admit to being part of the rainbow division of the weather factory, where we grind up pegasus children in a giant machine to create liquid rainbows." : "W-" : "I'VE NEVER PAID TAXES FOR CAROUSEL BOUTIQUE, AND I MISREPRESENT MY INCOME FOR MY PERSONAL TAXES!" : "Braeburn paid me 10 bits so he could lick my cooter when we were 5!" "....Anyone else have any more messed up secrets to share?!" Starlight glimmer: "There's a large unmarked mass grave behind my old house, in the village that I started, where I buried physically unfit newborns, and I also buried non-straight and disabled ponies there. Oh! Also the dissenters." "Did you at least kill them before burying them?" Starlight Glimmer: "NO! That's just extra work!"
I feel like I need more explanation as to why Shining at all felt justified in doing literally everything he's done to his father thus far.
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Agreed. It's quite ridiculous. No one is that big a hypocrite... right?
Yas
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I love this story
I am just going to sit hear and ride this grate story to he end.
THIS IS INTENSE!!!
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I have to agree as well. There is no level of justification, even as a cover for what he had done in the past to do what he did to his father. Hopefully there is some explanation.
I haven't finished this chapter and I alredy had to come here to comment. Fuck Shining so much!!! How the fuck does he dare act all high and mighty when he's fucking his own mother!! I'm in the part where he's bribing the bartender to give nightlight extra alcohol and I swear that id this doesn't turn into a shit storm for shining armor after this GAH!!!! I don't even know!! He just infuriates me so much!!! Fuck shining armor!! I can't say it enough, fuck him and chop his dick off!!
No, just no. He go off too easily, Shining is garbage, he tried to make his father look bad in front of his mother for doing the exact same thing he was doing with his mother.
Twilight should have chopped his dick off or at least his ball
This is a trashy version of mis-shapes... and I love it!
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This guy gets it.
nevermind
There are 2 spaces between 'could' and 'be'
the → at
*let's
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well that was dramatic, good thing most of your stories have a happy ending
8403038 What is mis-shapes?
Woof woof.
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♪♪That you liked Pina Coladas!♪♪
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♪♪and getting caught in the rain!♪♪
Ohhh fuck! I assumed night light n velvet were siblings but daaaauuuummmmmn. You you you hippocrate! This was more drama than I signed up for in an incest fic but I'm loving it.
Shining Armor you piece of shit hypocritical dirt bag!
I shotguned something close to 8 chapters across two stories of you unrepentantly fucking your mom and getting her pregnant TWICE!!
Your mom protected your ass from your father for a year longer than Twilight's life!
Let your dad do basically the same thing that your mother has over like 3 decades.
Oh wait!
Are you in tiffy over the part where he's fucking your daughter?!
Your daughter that you irresponsibly brought into the world, and were too irresponsible to raise and provide for, and so your father had to be the responsible one and raise your daughter, all while thinking that she was his?
WELL TOO FUCKING BAD!!
Let your neglected father get his dick wet in his oldest granddaughter's vag!
Congratulations Shining Armor.
You broke your father in the same place and method you broke your family so many years ago.
By fucking your mom in your parents' bed.
Good job.
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I actually stopped here, got up, and got a small glass of whiskey (Jack Daniel's to be exact), and got back to reading.
.....
I wonder how's Spike is doing right now.
Where's he at?
*many chapters later, Twilight tells Spike and her friends all at once in the table room*
*everyone is quiet for several minutes*
: ".....So I guess it's MY time to confess. I've been fucking AJ's dog, Winona, since we moved here."
: "Ya know, given how fucked up your family is, I'm gonna let that go as long as you stop fucking her. That, or you buy her for 500 bits.
: "SPIKE! WHAT THE F-
: "I aborted Zephyr and I's baby with a coat hanger when I was a teenager!"
: "FLUT-"
: "I practice kissing with my sister Marble!"
: "WH-"
: "Well as long as we're confessing terrible secrets, I should admit to being part of the rainbow division of the weather factory, where we grind up pegasus children in a giant machine to create liquid rainbows."
: "W-"
: "I'VE NEVER PAID TAXES FOR CAROUSEL BOUTIQUE, AND I MISREPRESENT MY INCOME FOR MY PERSONAL TAXES!"
: "Braeburn paid me 10 bits so he could lick my cooter when we were 5!"
"....Anyone else have any more messed up secrets to share?!"
Starlight glimmer: "There's a large unmarked mass grave behind my old house, in the village that I started, where I buried physically unfit newborns, and I also buried non-straight and disabled ponies there. Oh! Also the dissenters."
"Did you at least kill them before burying them?"
Starlight Glimmer: "NO! That's just extra work!"
EDIT: spelling, and added more for Starlight