Hmm... one thing I wish was brought up in this bonus was Night Light asking Velvet of her recent pregnancy and what happened to that child. Hell, I'd love to see Twilight's reaction to learning Flurry's her full-blooded sister.
Thank you for including this chapter, and some of the other edits I saw in the final chapter. It did resolve a lot of the problems I was having with Shining in the story.
Also, I just want to thank you for being so receptive to my criticism. It would have been easy to claim that I was thinking too much about a clopfic and a lot of people still liked the story, but you listened to my concerns and actively worked to address them. I really appreciate that. Looking forward to your next work.
Night should get the right to impregnate Cadance, then they would be even and he would have a sliver of a right to be forgiven. I only hope his vaceptomy is the reversible type.
This story wasn't good... IT WAS FUCKING AMAZING YOURE SO GOOD AT WHAT YOU DO 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Hmm... one thing I wish was brought up in this bonus was Night Light asking Velvet of her recent pregnancy and what happened to that child. Hell, I'd love to see Twilight's reaction to learning Flurry's her full-blooded sister.
Thank you
This story, man.
This motherfucking story.
Thank you for including this chapter, and some of the other edits I saw in the final chapter. It did resolve a lot of the problems I was having with Shining in the story.
Also, I just want to thank you for being so receptive to my criticism. It would have been easy to claim that I was thinking too much about a clopfic and a lot of people still liked the story, but you listened to my concerns and actively worked to address them. I really appreciate that. Looking forward to your next work.
What I thought of when Night found out that Shining banged Velvet when he was a teen:
Well, I suppose there wasn't much chance of it ending any other way. Not when everyone is this deep.
Night should get the right to impregnate Cadance, then they would be even and he would have a sliver of a right to be forgiven. I only hope his vaceptomy is the reversible type.
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Can Spike get in on the fucked up incest action?
Can he at least bang Cadence?
Next thing you know, Velvet is gonna want to bang Twilight, and try to get Shining and Night Light to bang.
Just turn the family tree into a circle.
10817944 Mmm! That would be hot!