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Grey walls? Check. Doors that only go in? Check. Inexplicable sewing paraphernalia? Check.
Discord's been through worse. He spent a thousand years trapped in stone. There's no way this little setback is going to get to him.
Still, it would be nice to leave sooner than later. Those walls seem awfully close. What would Twilight Sparkle do?
8th place finalist in the January 2015 writeoff, "All In". Cover art by TexasUberAlles!
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I've noticed that you're stories are really easy to read. With most stories, I take breaks and get distracted in the middle of chapters, but your stuff just flies off the page and I can't stop reading.
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Huzzah! :D
Organized chaos. What a brilliant kryptonite.
Organized chaos: the oxymoron that nearly did in the Lord of Chaos.
Hah, puns! I love puns!
Organized Chaos is my Discolight (Twicord) ship name.
Ah yes, I fondly remember this one. I still love the idea of Rarity's inspiration room acting as an inescapable prison for Discord, a topographical singularity of contradictions that locks chaos in an odor-fresh seal...
Sorry, I occasionally echo the tone of what I just read. In any case, glad to see this on Fimfiction.
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"Sorry, I occasionally echo the tone of what I just read."
Same.
Also, A VORTEX OF LOGIC WRAPPED LIKE A TWIZZLERS CANDY IS INESCAPABLE BY DISCORD.
Because it's licorice.
Eugh.
Nice build up in the beggining. I was confused yes but the ending paid off in terms explanation and comedy.
Nice way to blend ideas together PresentPerfect!
This reminds me of the story Dear Insanity for some reason...
One word: brilliant.
I think on balance I prefer this at Writeoff size (curse the Fimfic lower word limit!), but the extra context here is nice, and I agree with 7128330, the writing here is quite smooth, especially for a Discord 1st-person fic.
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I will say, I never felt like I was forcing extra words in. Chopping off the ending and reworking it, plus slowing the necessarily for-the-writeoff fast pacing helped bring this up over 1k naturally.
I reviewed this story as part of Read It Later Reviews #50.
My review can be found here.
It was beauty which nearly slayed the beast.
Better luck next time, Rarity.
Okay, that was beautiful. You should have ended right here-the line after just isn't as...this.
I was trying to envision what could possibly have Discord so befuddled and insidious as to keep him trapped, but organized chaos...yep. That'd do it.
GLORIOUS! <3
This was great; though I had to read it twice to get an idea of what was happening to Discord. I got the reference to the Sisterhood Social episode and it took me a minute to figure it out. Very clever! Wish I had come up with something as good.