Twilight and Spike lived their childhood in Canterlot Castle under the benevolent eye of Princess Celestia and violent protection of her resident, so called, monster. A monster she returns to to find peace with but also unexpected danger and threats.
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Very awesome update, gets the point of Luna's personal struggle against a world that hates what she was and still avoids her like death incarnate.
Personally, I am fond of the constellations Orion and Perseus. Orion, mostly for the myth attached to it - the Greatest Hunter, immortalized. It helps that the Belt is easy to recognize and point out to people, which makes for suprisingly good conversation material at evening parties.
Perseus, for one particular star that is part of it: Algol, the Demon's Star. It has many names, though. From Greek "Gorgon" over the Hebrew "Head of Satan" to the Imperial Chinese "Mausoleum," the star algol has been identified with devils, death and and monsters of folklore over half of history and all the world. Wherever it is seen, it is believed to be an omen of misery. This kind of universal, common cultural thread of humanity just fascinates the hell out of me.
Astronomy is a great thing to read about. So many stars have fascinating and deeply involved reasons for their names.
On my.... Yet again, another brilliant chapter, and with such a realistic perspective of Luna's return.
Do you create both your own artwork and music?
Well... I mean...
Yeah.
That was a thing that happened.
6663145 Artwork, yes. I mostly spend about 20-30 mins per pic and I haven't figured out ponies that well yet. This last one took... well, I was listening the "To The Moon" OST so I guess it took an hour. (omfg, I just realized I forgot to draw Luna's wings. See, this is what I am talking about. Ok, if anybody else notices this, they are IN THE SHADOWS. Please buy that.)
As for music, no. I have no talent for it at all. I can play on a drumkit decently enough, but the last time I tried to learn the guitar I made the guy teaching me start hitting me with his prized guitar. It took me 15 minutes and I didn't learn a single chord.
And now I'm sad.
I'm sorry for this, by the way, but now that I've thought of this, it just won't let me rest until I do it:
The first, bitter taste of that terrible illusion: hope. :kain:
I took a look at that image. Readgan kinda looks like Captain Falcon
Hope is the first step on the road to disappointment.
Dude...
Duuuuuuuuude...
Holy shit.
i kinda wish this wasn't included with lunar guardsman. i'm appreciative of the perspective, but this opens up side story territory and you could write thousands upon thousands of words of the year twilight is in ponyville.
and while pinkie pie almost died, suicide kinda brings down the previous chapters with luna.
but does this indicate she sorta gave up the right to live to Raegdan? I just want to read the moment they become besties. maybe when they rip out the heart of a cragodiel?
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Well, this story is kinda Dark-tagged.
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Man, I really can't blame Luna for wanting to do that. Wanna give Moonpone many hugs.
6663207 lol. Alright, but don't feel bad. Your artwork is pretty damn good in my opinion. Keep up the good work!
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To your credit, I didn't notice the wings
not being therebeing in the shadows thanks to the emotion conveyed both by the picture and by the story.6663931
This
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Keep up the good work, really, I do enjoy these little artworks you put out. It makes the story feel so much more real. The only suggestion I have is that maybe you should be putting the artwork between the sentences describing said scene. Like...
[image]Said Raegdan giving bery big cums inside Luna[image]
"Raegdan give bery big cums inside luna :^)"
Probably just my own personal reference though since some story did this stuff and I really preferred them over glossing over at the author's notes.
When i see "Interlude", something is boiling inside me. Usually interlude means stalling the good stuff for laughs or to mask lazyness or lack of ideas for the story.
In this story, this is not the case.
I think this is the first story, where i would enjoy future interludes. Especially when you give as interludes, which are parts of the sory, which usually are cointained in main story by regular authors.
Keep up the good work.
I have to admit, I wonder if Luna has actually, joyously, laughed since her return. Or has it all part of the charade. Keeping up appearances out of fear of the elements.
Keeping doing that voodoo that you do sir.
Poor Luna, to be told that so many ponys love her night nowdays and then to hear "i only know the name of one constellation" Ouch, just ouch.
I feel really sad for Luna...
That was a thought provoking piece.
A much needed addition to quell any readers saying Luna is being unreasonable or OOC, and even though I didn't feel like that this still gives me a sense of assurance in that her actions are making sense to at least her, Rae, and us.
There is no truth greater than the grasp and soft final kiss of death. Everything before that final moment is clear and true, life's final effort to keep you there or to ease your passing.
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That one would be significantly harder, since the only natural significant source of antimatter nearby is the sun, and it is near impossible to produce.
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Which is why I specified a spell necessary to produce it. Of course I don't expect them to build a multi-GeV particle collider. But there is no reason that we know of that would prevent the creation of a spell that flips the charge on all the fundamental particles in a given block of matter, thus creating a block of antimatter.
I'm not saying that it's definitely possible, either. There is very little worldbuilding in this story that concerns the science behind magic, so ultimately it's up to the author.
I would very much love to see more interludes or even a side story picking up from where this left off.
6665845 Why?
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Because it sounds like something an emo 14 year old would say is why.
6667172 Rereading it in that light, I'm gonna agree with you. It seemed appropriate when I wrote it. Less so now, but what ever.
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Well, so long as you're self-aware about it. Just don't make the mistake to take yourself seriously when you get all full of pathos like that. That is the dark path to goth-hood.
6667384 Most of the time I look half goth, but that's because a lot of my clothes are darker colours. It's still colours though. Goths don't smile, at least the stereotypes don't. Don't think I'm becoming goth, I already went through that emotionally. It's called depression and it.. I have a few choice words for it, that I'll refrain from saying.
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Falcoooooon... PAWNCH!
(In other news, there's too much green in Luna's eyes in the image. Still, it's actually REALLY good for your average fanfic fanart!)
AWESOME WORK!
6667975 What does LOTR mean?
6669842 lord of the rings.
6670141 Thank you very much.
This actually explains why they are so close to one another better than anything could.
6670344 Yeah.
6683090 First off, thanks for the fixes in the Prologue! I should really go back and fix those chapters that have not been edited, but I have a lack of available time.
I guess there is a kind of divide by people who give different weights to each of the OC's actions. That's understandable and was kind the point. Raegdan was supposed to be something like that, so I take that as a success. There was a quote which inspired me as to what the story is about by Fyodor Dostoyevsky. "Nothing is easier than to denounce the evildoer; nothing is more difficult than to understand him.” Raegdan is by default the evildoer (it is practically called to attention every time someone mentions him *snicker*) but that doesn't mean he can't be likable, or have reasons he is what he is. If there was something that always annoyed me about HIE fics is how the character just shrugs it off after a short while (and many times is kind of a dick without a reason, just cause he is cool like that). Raegdan has been fucked up, a lot, and repeatedly. Even without his experiences, if you found yourself ripped out of your home and family, even to find yourself in a perfect Equestria, wouldn't you feel at least the temptation to lash out violently?
The arena thing I don't want to spark again, but yeah, that was sadistic. He had other reasons and motives in his mind for the whole action, for instance; the same reason his armor is threatening and intimidating, but he did enjoy hurting her in the state he was in.
And lastly, when Pinkie was convulsing, yeah, it didn't rate any high enough compared to the fact that Luna was currently tasting even a single drop of that same poison. Pinkie Pie, at least, is however rapidly going up on the scale of people he cares about, afterwards.
Again, thanks for the fixes and the comments. I hope you keep on reading and enjoy.
I hope Raegdan only knows the atom split part of the bomb. Otherwise, Fallout Equestria might have to be considered a sequel
Welp. Dunno if I should be vindicated or horrified that I guessed right in a previous comment.
I am not one for hugs.
I have never wanted to give Luna a hug more than right now.
More than one.
Luna gets all the hugs, dammit!
Well...That was fucking dark. Like, 'someone light a candle already' dark. Needs an extra-dark tag. Dark like molasses.
7472129 more like the 'darkness consumed the light of the sun' dark.
Damn... dark but... very nice, in a way.
Nicely done.
7504582 That's not enough. I'm thinking cosmic void dark.
Consider that canonically, Luna creates something to mentally flay herself every night just to deal with her issues.
That mare ain't right in the head. This just happens to be a different way of it coming out without the "You know, for kids" bit in the way of some very logical results.