Twilight and Spike lived their childhood in Canterlot Castle under the benevolent eye of Princess Celestia and violent protection of her resident, so called, monster. A monster she returns to to find peace with but also unexpected danger and threats.
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For a bit there I thought it might be Chrysalis. The the photo came up, and I don't see Luna being coy about her, so...
Great, it IS Celestia behind it all isn't it? Or maybe Cadance!
Yay. More drama.
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My money's on Twilight Velvet. Or maybe some wash-out from the Solar Guard.
... but probably Twilight Velvet.
Hmmm.
Why isn't there a 'mystery' tag on this story?
7618641 I do need to give the whole story a reread at some point But Twilight Velvet? I just can't see that at all. I got the impression that on her deathbed was the first time Luna met TV, and given her...rather exuberant attitude regarding Regden...
On a sidenote, where IS Best Pink Pony (Princess)? Did something happen, because I only remember her being in the comedy chapter of the sidestory, shipping Celestia and Reg HARD. And IIRC she succeeded! Sort-of, was unclear why they claim it didn't work out.
Also, ARE Luna and Reg banging? It feels both logical and ...unhealthy? Or at least their reasons are? I mean, I understand it's meant to come off as unhealthy, I just don't know how much it is so.
A secret lover? I find that to be my favorite theory.
Betting it was that Honest Serenade bitch pulling the strings. Unless you do something clever and make a plot twist.
7618296 the idea of it being cadence entertains me.
7618896 You know, I threw it in there to be silly. I mean, why would she ever do something like that!
And yet....and yet she could so easily have the ability to brainwash ponies. Shipped Raeg and Celestia super hard, may be unhappy that they didn't stay together. (Ugh, part of me wants to blame Celestia for doing so, because if she gives up on him who will ever help save him. Another part of me understands why she would, and thinks the first part sounds too much like rape victim blaming.) Toss in how protective she might be about Celestia and Twilight...
Fuck. FUCK. FUCK! It's Nightmare Cadance isn't it!!!! Well, not fully possessed yet, but a whisper in her ear about 'Sweet innocent Luna' being just an act by Nightmare Moon, and to get rid of her by any means necessary! Explains why Luna was so nonchalant about the photo(or appeared to be), because why wouldn't you trust the Alicorn of Love?
Well, outside crazy paranoid individuals.
Noooooo! I wait for it sooooooooo long and there is no interaction with Reagdan in this one.
Terribly sorry for the delay in replies. I posted the chapter and then immediately set to work on writing so I can get the next one out as fast as I can, and now I'm at work having slept none at all. Going to head back home and get some sleep before I head back to work again, but I managed to steal a few minutes for now.
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Thank you! We here, at Crimmar CO. enjoy your patronage, dear sir
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This fits so well it ain't even funny! But it is!
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Oh come on! There barely was any before...
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...Does she really look that manipulative and insane? Though a story with her being evil would be... interesting to say the least.
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I've been thinking about tags. Maybe adding the mystery tag, perhaps even the comedy one. Ridiculously enough, the one I now doubt that fits is the adventure one.
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Cadance will appear when they get back to Canterlot. Now she simply happened to be away at the moment.
The next one is going to be an interlude. And yes, it's about the banging.
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The whole idea is about dangling the answers in the air. I think I have quite some surprises in store yet.
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Oh god, and he didn't even utter a line here, did he? Just fell asleep on his feet. I'm so sorry for your wait. It's been a month since the last update, and that's terrible. I got caught up in WoW once again, like a coke addict falling back into the habit, but I think I managed to fight it off. I'm going to do my best to get the next few chapters out ASAP to make up for it.
And don't worry, the next chapter is an interlude with just Luna and Raegdan. After that we will have Raegdan back, all whole and healed enough, looking for ways to horribly injure himself again.
7619226 don't mention it if my computer would be working I too would fight the burning legion.
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I'm with that thestral. She's fooled the rest of you but NOT US!
7619226 Why not add both?
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You know I was actually wondering if you or any other fimfic author lost themselves in WoW this past month. There has been literally like no updates to any of the stories Ive been following. I'd play WoW as well to pass the time but Blizzard killed it for me and they even shut down Nost :(
Nice mystery chapter btw, with all the pieces falling into place. I was going to say Pipsqueak took it but I do not think Luna has gone to Ponyville to do her nightmare night episode. As far as who it could be... fuck all, I have no idea.
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New title: Twilight Velvet the Deceiver
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I'll do that I think. I was worried that people might think I was planning to go all over the place if I added a lot of tags, and the comedic elements popped out quite unexpectedly.
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Yeah, I mostly lost my enthusiasm for it really fast again. Most of the artifacts are "vrykul weapons" that Blizzard pulled out of their buttocks, and Paladin healing, which is what I love to do, is a dumbed down thing. Gone are the days where you had to carefully preserve mana, using your mana regen skills carefully and stealing melee hits so you could replenish it with your seal. All you need now is a good enough ilvl and you can go through everything spamming Flash Heal, even so called "mythical" difficulties. *sigh*
Props for finally healing with a two handed hammer finally though.
- "Art thou healed or should I stryketh again?"
- "I'm healed, I'm healed! My broken leg no longer hurts, praise the Light, don't hit me again, bro!"
I'm glad you liked this chapter. Kind of worried there since it was all nothing but OC's there, but it worked well enough in the end.
7619681 You know, Ashbringer was mildly tempting.
Then my friends made jokes(Or not) about shunning me if I went back. I remember how we did the first Raid in WoD and I got kicked because I didn't know what was going on in the last boss fight. Had less then 3 FPS. 3 weeks after release, and fuckers were all "You should know this dungeon already." Reading wowhead and they removed Holy Power?!?! For the love of Bahamut why??? Made Discipline the Bitch spec AGAIN??? Remove half their shields, throw a long CD on their remaining one, but 'It's ok they got a gutted Atonement back'.
/rant
So. You say we will be meeting Cadance in the next few chapters? Will we? IIRC the wedding hasn't happened yet. I figure even odds Chrysalis came by while everypony was away, Raegdan killing her for acting odd, Shining Armor and Cadance NOT getting married since she has her eye on someone else, or Tiamat.
Tiamat. Because Discord's odds are too cliche.
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She's going to be there, yes. The wedding hasn't happened yes, but I've been having thoughts about it. Mostly, I decided not to go into it and have it pushed back due to what is going on. Oh, I could have a splendid time with Chrysalis and the whole wedding, but in the end it would simply be filler and delays. So no wedding, though... it WILL be in the story but not in the way you expect. If you like the characters, if you still like them until then... I think you'll become quite sad.
Oh, and as for
It was my first choice, and it was pretty cool getting it.
Then you realize the quest for Mankrik's wife was a far longer quest chain.
Another enjoyable chapter. Good job.
Eventide knows...
But what exactly, remains to be seen. She might know the photographer, fuck, she might even be the one who took it. She also has ideas at the very least on what PL is planning.
Speculation, speculation...
♪♫
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Jed Clampett: "That boy ain't got nothin' in his head but space "
7621742 It's an homage to the Aegis series written by Silvak. It features a character who's well known for flinging chairs at various targets....also frequently involving tasers....and sometimes railguns.
I've read your story and its very well written.
Fun fact: Its a year old now and people are still reading it today.
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I've read that you've read my story and I'm very appreciative :D
Fun Fact 02: I completely forgot it's a year old. Its actually one year old exactly today! Oh man, and I didn't get it anything... (sadpandaface)
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You could think of this Celestia as Superman, who believes everyone deserves a second chance and to follow the rules, while Luna being more like Mog who believes in just killing them all and be done with it.
Both viewpoints have their share of problems. No one here has the perfect answer. There is none.
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I was working. A kid comes up to me, she's a little girl. Kindergarten or first grade at best, so about 7 years old. She talks to me while I work, I answer back. I don't remember the conversation, probably was some simple nonsense, mostly me trying to make the girl laugh. I had knelt down to her level at one point. Then suddenly, who knows for what reason, she decides to spit on me. One big glob of saliva, right up from her throat, spat right on my face, hitting my eye. I pause for a moment, an infinitesimal instant, just looking at her, and she looks so fucking smug, smiling like she did the greatest thing ever. My right arm shoots ahead, probably one of the fastest, unthinking reactions I ever had in my life, and it goes for her throat. I was going to grab her by the throat and either squeeze that soft pipe so hard for one instant that it could potentially kill her or I would smash her skull against the wall. It wasn't what I wanted to do. I was what I was going to do. There was no decision process, no debate. Just a deep desire to hurt her.
How long does it take for your arm to reach forward, as fast as it can go? I don't know if I thought something in that tiny space of time. It was probably something to the effect of "fuck no, you moron." Or not. Maybe that's what I think now in an effort to make myself think I actually controlled myself. Most probably it was a small nugget of self-perseverance. If I hurt her I would be in a world of trouble. So I did grab her by the throat but managed not to bring my thumb up or tighten my hold. Scared the crap out of her, but I laughed it off as a joke and sent her on her way. The actual feeling at that moment was disappointment at first.
The horror took some time to arrive. Never quite left.
7643790 Would you stop posting comments that are the size of an Essay exam?
Looks like I was being kind of prophetic there in that other comment.
I don't know if it makes this more or less funny that I really can't decide if it's perfectly reasonable or silly, with this story being what it is.
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Would you go find a broken bottle and shove it up your snatch? If Crimmar has a problem with it, he can tell me himself. I'm certainly not forcing you to read them or at all interested in your opinion on it.
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And that's how quickly "not quite thinking things through" turns into "holy shit, what did I just do?!"
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That weird grudge match you have had with me ever since I told you that one thread of yours in HIE was breaking site rules, that was pathetic enough already. If you start getting in my face and starting arguments in comments to completely unrelated stories now then I'm reporting it, though, just so you know.
7643912 I don't remember that.
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Well, I certainly can't remember any other time we've even actually talked that explains why you seem to make a point of this kind of comment wherever you see me.
While I do idolize Celestia (because she is my favorite and best Princess), these "Solar Fanatics" are getting on my nerves.
Interessting developments of events... I wonder how the attackers will use the explosiv balls. Perhaps hostages? So far the Poisen Pinkie Pie & slice/stab Applejack... Who will get injured next?