Twilight and Spike lived their childhood in Canterlot Castle under the benevolent eye of Princess Celestia and violent protection of her resident, so called, monster. A monster she returns to to find peace with but also unexpected danger and threats.
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Raegden story atleast confirm his origins. He is not a human from modern times, rather he is a human from fantasy type world.
Na na na na na na na na bat ponies!! And some more glimpses into Regdans past...curiouser and curiouser. Just enough to add more to the picture without giving anything away too soon. And just when I think I have an idea on his past whereabouts and where he came from KAPOW!! Head cannon ruined!! Muhaha! Amazingly cruel and nail biting goodness as always! Awaiting the next chapter with gusto!!
Consider me interested. I'll read this later when I have some more time.
I don't recognize the city of fire description.
Where did you get the inspiration (or is it a reference straight from a scifi and/or fantasy work)?
Nice Tremors reference.
Can I make a request for a monster?
6975148 Oz?
Goddammit, Crimmar.
Crimmy?
Did you write in Graboids?
If so, nice thought.
6975271 I had the complete image for this one day when I woke up. I probably mixed some ideas while I slept though I can't think which at the moment. For some reason it has a Harkonnen vibe for me though I am not sure exactly why at the moment. One of the next two chapters takes place there. I might get a better idea why when I actually do write it down.
6975403 Thanks. Go ahead and make your request! As long as it's not sparkly vampires.
6975521 Oh god NO! If you've seen episode 1 of Hellsing Ultimate Abridged, you'd know what I think of that.
No, I want an Australian creature.
Specifically, I want a Yowie.
And because the 'reports' on their encounters range from hostile to benign, I'd recommend you go for 'will ONLY turn violent if attacked first.'
6975410 Australia?
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He explicitly referred to Lord of the Rings in his previous story time. I'm thinking post collapse modern Earth.
As far as what caused the collapse? Your guess is as good as mine.
Such a joke missed.....
...Almost missed.
Oooooohhhh. So he didn't come alone.
Also, that picture. There is a gun on his back. But from the shape it either looks like a battle rifle or something older. Did that happen in Equestria, or back from where he came from? The latter would make some awfully interesting questions......
Oh. Oh jolly. wow. Nuclear winter or Meteors?
still say luna and raegdens crippling factor isn't there brutality but there only recruitment drive so far as been in canterlot, pretty sure ponies in monster threatened towns and cities would willingly join them, so i'm glad to see there leaving canterlot, but leaf storm has brought up an interesting question.
why not extend there reach to the solar guard drop outs? there have to be more then a few who where perfectly capable but kicked out for something stupidly minor.
6975720 going by the ramrod tube under the barrel (meant for carrying the rod used to ram shot down the muzzle) that's an old muzzle loader, if it's a rifle it's at the very start of rifle technology but it's more likely to be a musket.
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Was this supposed to have happened in Equestria, back on Earth, or somewhere else entirely?
6976044 I personally thought that is a tube magazine, and the gun itself is an early repeater.
Love it mate.
I recall saying this to you. I wonder if it's a coincidence or not.
Love that AJ is Raegdan's babysitter/secret-keeper-that-isn't-Luna. Maybe they'll grow closer as a result.
The pink one brings me joy. Her being sad made me kinda sad. Raegdan needs more cuddles from the pink.
Keep up the good work. I look forward to the next Chapter.
6976099 that's also possible but it's kind of hard to tell without seeing more of the stock. the action is cleverly concealed in the pcture so we can't make out a hammer or a lever. geuss the author wanted to avoid dating the time period
I swear each chapter gets better and better. The intrigue, the suspense, the violence, everything is just so well paced. Also now I'm even more curious about Raegdan's past. Those small glimpses into his own world makes me wonder if he's even human at all...
And it's about damn time the Thestrals show up!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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These terrified me as a kid. The thought of something digging through the earth so fast and able to hear your footstep... dear god. I was afraid to walk on dirt for a week. Dune was not a happy book for me.
6975811 You read my mind!
6975148 I don't think so honestly. He has too much knowledge of advanced science. As well, his story sounds more akin to someone describing a technological city to a group of lesser advanced people but giving it a supernatural air to aid in understanding.
Fuck you I'm bat pony.
Love your take on Rainbow Dash. No tact and can't even be bothered to give a buck.
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Could be a shotgun. I mean, going off of the size of Raedgan compared to the gun, the barrel is way too thick to be firing any standard ammo. Maybe modified to be able to take custom shotgun shells seeing as it's possibly post apocalyptic. It would also explain why the underbarrel is pronounced, the stereotypical double barrel shotgun has a pronounced grip, and they usually have the older rifle style stocks.
Plus, if it was every day is survival, a shotgun would make a lot more practical sense due to not needing as much care as other rifles, and require a lot less accuracy to be efficient. There's a reason Shotguns are so popular with Zombie culture.
Just adding in my two cents.
*EDIT* And the gun itself is too short to be a musket, those things were extremely long to make up for their inaccuracy.
I have really no idea how to take Raegdan's story. Is that supposed to be a refinery? It kinda looks like one. They don't usually have to deal with demonic snakes or fire-walls, though. It's kind of confusing. I was assuming he was actually supposed to be from the real world until now, what with all the Lord of the Rings references and such. This, though? Kinda doesn't match.
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At this point I'm thinking he's an interdimensional/interplanetary wanderer/refugee/fugitive, he does know a lot about our culture but his experiences suggest that he has visited multiple worlds, Equestria could just be the one he got stuck on.
Possibly from our modern/future Earth but from the sounds of it it's long gone and he's been on the run ever since.
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Seems kind of a stretch. There has been really nothing so far that actually suggests this.
I would've expected the bath tub to be larger. Even assuming a small size for the ponies, for the princesses, the tubs would still have to accommodate their wings. A Roman or Japanese bathing tub would've been the expected size for the rulers of the country, after all.
I feel like raegden is from a version of Earth stcuk in nuclear winter. As in after a nuclear apocolypse.
6989392 Patrollin' the Mojave almost makes you wish for it.
6998928 True, true. I prefer the Capital Wasteland though.
6999671 The Capital rewarded spray and pray and close range urban combat, the Mojave rewards accurate shots with manual action weaponry...Which makes clearing a room with a single cylinder of a Sequoia even more satisfying.
I am late as crap, but the city of fire made me think of a what if. What if Howl's Moving Castle was about an earth mage with a predilection towards rare or hard to get ores but only city sized? The result is Calcifer the fire demon being truly massive, Howl being a major mine foreman, the prince being a survey technician, and Sophie being a maintenance head, and so on. Then I remembered Baron Harkonen. Suddenly it looks sinisterly welcoming.
I do this all the time. Don't see the problem.
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... are we talking about Dune? Admittedly I don't remember it very well after all these years.
I DOUBT THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I do wonder... where is Rae from? I am very confused... hmm...
Maybe we'll find out later on.
Nice job.
They came to pay their respects to a dead pegasus.
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Huh, Raegden almost has as many scars as Gunmetal Graves. And almost look alike.
Welcome to the dark side. Have fun.
You missed out on welcome to the dark side cookies are over there.
Dammmn he is more stiches than anything...
Amazing art you have here.
Twilight & Celestia are rock buttom for me.
Go Luna and Raegdan’s duo ♤