Twilight and Spike lived their childhood in Canterlot Castle under the benevolent eye of Princess Celestia and violent protection of her resident, so called, monster. A monster she returns to to find peace with but also unexpected danger and threats.
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Hilarious.
Also, good call Pinkie!!!
Hahahahahaha!
Oh god... More! More!
Chapter 3 was definite worth the wait. If the rest of the story is as good as first 3 chapters i can wait as long as needed.
Actually, humans ARE more enduring than most other mammals, both in terms of athletic endeavors and in terms of healing and recovery. We may be easier to injure and fall unconscious easily, but we heal better and more completely than nearly any other mammal our size or larger. So, yes, Rarity is right.
*absolutely dies...*
The last parts made me die of laughter.
Whoops. There go my sides.
NEED AIR!... LUNGS COLLAPSING!... help...
Best story yet! it's definitely up there with Man of War
Oh my god that ending. I need air!
i think i just pissed myself from laughing
Great character introduction and development here combined with good humor. I haven't laughed this long or wondered this much for a mlp story in a while. I certainly am interested in seeing where this goes. Excellent job.
I noticed a few grammar and formatting errors here and there, but the story and the characterization more than overshadow them. You've got one hell of a story here and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops.
Fantastic! I loved this chapter. And I can't wait for more.
That ending....jesus lol
Also, important bit of world-building in this chapter, in my opinion.
We know this world isn't nearly as idyllic/innocent as a lot of stories. Kudos to that.
.......Lol.
Has anyone seen my sides? Last known location seen was in orbit!
I'm squeeing with delight.
Raegdan's interactions with Twi are the reasons I myself want a daughter. It's just so endearing and cute.
Keep up the amazing work mate. I can't wait to see where everything goes.
This made my day.
Twi confirmed to be a cat pony. I mean, she purr and she's all over all the important papers. Especially when he don't want her on the papers.
The reunion was quick and Daww. Atta girl Pinkie!
And the end was unexpected and very funny.
911, what's your emergency?
My son's bleeding out! Oh, my god! HELP! PLEASE!
Ma'am, please calm down. Where's he bleeding from?
His sides! Oh god, his sides! STOP LAUGHING! YOU'RE HURT!
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
Hmm so more dark world of MLP? Good. Very good. Most of this kind of stories is makeing Equestria some kind of sick utopia and both Luna/Celestia as delusional beings.
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its interactions like this that remind me of my time with my sisters partners daughter whos only 8. bloody little shit when she wants to be but soooo bloody adorable. wish they would just get married already so I can be an uncle.
Serious, to heartwarming, to hilarious. Never saw the last bits coming.
this has to be one of my favorite chapters in any story i have read.
more please!
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It's one of those moments.
But now I need a new chapter, because this story is too amazing.
that ending right there. GOLD i havent laughed that hard in months.
That ending...pppppppftttttbwahahahahahahahahahahahha-head explodes from laughter overload-
Those last two words I suspect are spelled wrong.
... You are a mean writer due to coincidences. I was eating a pizza, and then the entire reunion happened. Now I want my ribs and my sides back so I can resume eating my pizza.
i remember my days of the sink and soap man i hated that and my mother made me wash it down with water
fucking hell that was was awesome, well done
I'm glad to see that there's been great improvement here than the previous chapters. Though there are a few I's that's been left uncapitalized.
Oh my gosh make it stop! I can't feel my side!
I must say that i do love your humor, the way you described Rarity combing Rainbows mane was just brilliant.
Oh god, that ending moment reminded me of something.
My uncle and I were in the back-seat while his partner was driving and my Grandmother was in the passenger seat, my uncle was being a dick and my grandmother looked around to him, pointed and said, "don't make me come back there!" and he jumped.
A Forty-six year-old man still terrified by his mother when she raises her voice.
Don't stop writing. This is genius!
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Cockroaches wish they were as hard to kill as us, all things considered.
Then again at the same time we can be ever so fragile.
What a great chapter and story so far.
6541903 HELP this side bleeding disease seems to spread by reading comments! Hah- haha- hahahahahahahaahajajahaahajaja
I felt a bit of disconnect in the flow when AJ segued into talk of Solar Cultists. Felt kind of forced.
I have drawn a fast sketch of Twilight's first time seeing Raegdan. You can see it at the author's notes at the end of chapter 2 "I wrote a letter home today" or At Newgrounds . I will also add it at my user page if its possible to do so, haven't checked what you can actually do here.
Let me know if you like and want me to add one or two on each chapter with time. Or if its a horrible idea and let it burn in a fire.
I DED NOAW!!
I love this story so much, that ending XD
i want so much more of this
Poor Raegden. Poor Twilight. Embarrassed in earshot of both princesses and all her friends. She's never going to live that down.
Plus, of course, his creative punishments. Poor, poor Twily.
This chapter was a real pisser!
I'll show myself out the door....
I literally fell out of the chair laughing at this.
I also passed out. no joke.
did I read that correctly?
I've never read a story where a pony peed on the human.