Twilight and Spike lived their childhood in Canterlot Castle under the benevolent eye of Princess Celestia and violent protection of her resident, so called, monster. A monster she returns to to find peace with but also unexpected danger and threats.
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HAZAAH!
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Who loves ya, baby?
Is good seeing this story back and is nice seeing the other sides perspective.
Raegdan is going to murder those guys in a very painful way I feel like.
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That cat's expression says, "There is plenty of RED inside you--and I'm about to release IT ALL!"
I always like to read with music... THAT BEING SAID!!! I did not enjoy feeling that my heart was about to explode when I was half way through an energy drink, while listen to intense music and reading this.
How are you able to make an epic come back like this one, I am even more hyped for the next chapter.
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This perspective just made Raegdan even more terrifying in perspective to everything else.
I'm so fucking happy to see that this fic got a new chapter!
I was almost going to comment on how I don't wanna know about these walking corpses, but now that I understand it was just some spice to throw on their funeral pyre I feel much happier about it all.
Good job on making them seem the slightest bit like people and not just soulless bags of meat. Even if that is what they'll get turned into by Raegdan.
Been waiting for more development with these guys. Loved every second of this chapter.
You know, in my nearly 10 years of being on this site, there have only been a few stories that have really scratched the extremely niche itch that only HiE's can scratch. Even amongst my puny favourites list there are only about 5 stories that i'd ever really been 100% into, and even then some of those have been abandoned (please come back Last of the First), or have ended rather unsatisfyingy (why oh why did Ballad have to end like that.)
Out of that tiny list of fantastic stories, surrounded by an ocean of mediocrity, and nestled into an unmistakably small genre... if there was one that I would do whatever I could into making completely sure gets completed, it's this one.
I don't even fully understand why. I'd offer to be an editor, but I care about this story too much to spoil myself on the unfinished product.
Ok, cringe asslicking over. You're a great writer, keep it up. Looking forward to next chapter, your world-building skills are incredible.
I would've loved to hear how the Captain would react if Spike had said "Father you shoot all. Father you knife all. Father you fuck all up. "
ITS ALIVE!!!!
hehehehehe... hahaha hahaha; his new nickname is gone
WOOOOOOO YEAH BABY UPDATE YEEEEAAAAAHHHHH AAAAÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
These fools are expecting a dragon, and they are getting something 10X worse.
YES! YEH-HE-HE-HESS! I love seeing more of this story! I have been checking in on it for a couple months, hoping for it's dramatic continuation. Thank you, Crimmar, for more of this beautiful work!
oh schnitzel, a new chapter!
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Hey man guess what... the next chapter is out now.
Thank you for your update, this is one of my favorite stories in the last 10 years. :)
The funniest thing is that the Janus administrators would absolutely love Raegdan's ability to get things done regardless of the cost. After all, he already took down Charibdys and could probably murder Everfree if he had known what he was going into. Too bad that they pissed him off.
Whoop whoop chater yay!
Someone gon get beaten up
It’s been 84 years...
But it’s a great chapter and I’m glad to see it!
The hype train just keeps chugging and I’m very ready
Hell ya, so glad to finally see an update to this!!!! Crimmar you been holding out on us!
Overall I loved this chapter and how ignorant they all are, resorting to violence as usual instead of communication.
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And i am aswell Another reason to like this fic even more
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This is early on into the story and if this story has taught me anything its that not everything is as it seems
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I Came on here expecting a hatefilled message but what i got was a clear and precise explanation
(Great story except for the Bumps in the road)
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Honestly thats is probably it
Just finished re-reading this entire story plus the 3 chapters I've been saving to read. Words can't express how fucked they are. I thought for sure they just panicked and grabbed hostages but the fact that they are straight kidnapping for answers? They could have talked this out but now? They've signed their own death warrants.
I am just constantly refreshing the page to see if they posted a new chapter
let me fill that in for you bud
Hey Crimmar just wanted to say thanks for your continuing work on this story of yours. I’m now fully caught up from where I last left off in 2016 and I’ve got to say that I have really enjoyed what you have written so far. This story really is fantastic so keep up the great work!
I would think the lives of random aliens dont matter at all compared to the benefit of you and yours, regardless of it being the only way or just convenience. But thats just me. Think about it. You agreed to traveling universes and dystopias, but you want to be nice to rainbow coloured ponies? I mean, how do you reason the minotour? "He was helping his pals so you should have let him hurt you all"? Ridiculous. I suspect Jackie is morally unfit for future missions.
love your story you are doing a great job
This story is now my favorite story above that of even Diaries of a Madman. It gives every character far more depth, and therefore gives every moral conflict, violent conflict, and story conflicts far more meaning. Even the villains have a lot of reasons for being a villain beyond just their perspective. For example, take the Celestia of Diaries of a Madman, if that version of celestia were in this story, I would understand far better why they became the way they were.
It's why when we have celestia this story being willing to threaten Nightmare Moon level things, I almost root for them. In fact I feel like if the authors were to have swapped stories, the main character of Diaries of a Madman would have ended up regretting running away from his first "bloody" encounter with Luna. The one where he runs to Celestia afterwards. You know the one if you've read.
Whatmustido as an author treats grim dark as circumstantial to events. Terrible thing happened because of opportunity and/or potentially wrongful reasoning of individuals.
Crimmar as an author treats grim dark as a by-product of events. Terrible thing happened because something else happened before. No character in the story feels like they're above human nature. No character feels like they can't turn into something evil. Yet despite this, the characters also somehow feel more self-sacrificing.
Crimmar's writing feels more real.
Why did you have to make the only asshole on the team Hispanic?