Twilight and Spike lived their childhood in Canterlot Castle under the benevolent eye of Princess Celestia and violent protection of her resident, so called, monster. A monster she returns to to find peace with but also unexpected danger and threats.
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Wow you actually made me like angel bunny with this chapter and I usually hate that lagomorph.
I too often tend to forget Raegdan's modus operandi: always have a contingency.
Raegdan and Angel should go on adventures together. Maybe get their own spin off series.
Amazing chapter, as always!
I hope you're going to properly finish this story and won't just simply abandon it at some point, I have been reading it since the first chapter and it's honestly one of the best if not the best story I have ever read.
I would honestly be throwing money at you/my screen if my finances could afford that...
Anyways I just wondered if you got some degree related to writing or it's self taught.
I'm still waiting for the moment Celestia finds out how many times her own subjects have tried to assassinate Luna.
7869758 7869828 It made sense that if there was one human who would appreciate the little bastard it would be Raegdan.
Chibi-Raegdan and Angel Bunny!
One of them has guns and grenades, the other's a bunny.
7869815 And a window nearby to jump out of.
7869890 No worries. This is not getting abandoned at all. Least of all because I don't intend to make all these hours writing come to nothing. I have the plan, I have the ending, I have a bed to hide under after the ending, it's all arranged. Thank you for the vote of confidence in the story. How could I abandon it after hearing people enjoy it anyway?
No, no degree. At all. At anything. I skipped on any form of higher education out of necessity. It's all self-taught. Heck, this is my very first story ever if you discount a couple DnD Campaigns.
That is all.
Well, I about died laughing at the image of Raeghdan and Angel hip-thrusting like that. Great chapter overall!
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You had me at DnD campaigns. I've learned that both playing and DMing help with writing in their own ways.
That gif though
7870110 Playing helps you learn how to get into a character's headspace, but I think DMing helps you learn better and far more, if only because you have a bunch of people trying to turn everything to their advantage. Making an interesting and exciting campaign is one thing, keeping it so while holding them on the rails without making them realize it and still having fun is another, and by god they don't help at ALL.
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I fully understand. I once had to work some major damage control in a campaign because a Chaotic evil player decided to burn down a village rather than hunt down their person of interest.
Wait... I'm confused. What was with that scene of Twilight teleporting onto Celestia's office?
Yay, new chapter! The bit with the king went better than expected. He should keep in mind though that humans rarely fight fair. Not if there are important things on the line.
Somehow, I don't think Twilight's panic attack was from that fight though. Guess I'll just have to wait till the next chapter.
Oh, almost forgot, the part with Angel Bunny was great. Trying to hold in the laughter wasn't easy. People at the gym look at you weird if you break out into a laughing fit.
Leaf Stream is my spirit animal.
corrupting little bunnies. Priceless.
Im surprised Raegdan hasnt made a hidden blade like the assasins or wfist mini crossbow or even flintlock weapons. Also i hope my OC gets picked he has a twist with his back story.
7871517 Honestly, the Assassin's hidden blades are incredibly impractical.
A retractable punch-dagger would be more appropriate.
7871517 7871660 I have to agree. The concept is badass, but I simply can't see them working well enough and they are very limited in their way. Same with punch daggers though not as much, but I believe the versatility of a normal dagger would outweigh any benefits either of those have. A mini crossbow might have worked as a surprise concealed weapon, but having one constantly cocked (heh) would ruin the bow and the string, and it IS kind of fragile (if it's small enough) to endure the kind of things Raegdan gets through. I think of him keeping one of the griffin's crossbows on him when he's expecting trouble, but relying on more... reliable items for that extra edge in case he needs it.
7871517 No promises, but it looks like it will. I needed some way to delve into a subject and this might be just what I need instead of doing it out of the blue. I will do some changes, where he appears and such, as well as power him down a little, but yeah. If I do go that direction, he's in! He got me changing the plans for chapter 33 or 34, if only so I can also include some other OC's as well. I haven't taken a thorough look yet, but dear god, many of them are SO good!
7870268 That scene, as well as the one with Rarity and Applejack take part a couple hours into the future. Next chapter you'll realize what it was all about. For now just think of them as a spoiler for what's coming :D
7871949 oh okay. I was going off on this tangent where that wasn't really Twilight, but a changeling or someone disguised as her, and that they were trying to separate the two princesses for... reasons.
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On the OC's i know right a lot of good ideas.
And if you need to change a thing or 2 on my oc let me know. Forgot to mention but my oc's mom is a pegasus black smith, and the father is a thestral warrior. So he is a cross breed.
I'm pretty sure that the Twilight that showed up with Celestia is NOT the real Twilight. It looked like a way to force Luna to go to the tower before Raegdan even had a chance to check the place for traps. King Crucible was holding the human back for that very reason.
So either I'm dead wrong or Celestia is going to burn somepony alive for hurting Luna... Or worse
Of course he'd get along with the furball.
That gif. I could watch it for hours and not stop laughing.
7870268 its probably the seccond part of the chapter. Meaning shits goin down a few moments after this first part
7872783 viable theory, hell i feel its spot on but... what unicorn could mimic twilight while teleporting twic the seccond one with the very princess that threatened to glass the country that dares take luna from her.
He should try to turn Angel into a Vorpal Rabbit. Great chapter.
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7869939 Heh! You magnificent bastard! I agree completely with Mr. Cold Ghost--this is the first story I've read where I actually could like that white rodent!
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Ditto...
7873093 7875789 7877398 Oh man, wait until these two meet again. It will be glorious!
7879016 Tis' a labor of love... and a sense of humor that relies on misfortune.
I hope tomorrow won't be to late to put a character in. I've had a busy few days
That first pic is going into my favorites. Put that up on DB if you haven't already.
7882528 That's exactly what DB needs. More humping pics!
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To be fair, it has a notable dearth of humping Angel Bunny pics.
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Somehow i expected that. Not the pelvic thrusting, but that he would find Angel hilarious and bond over a mutual dislike of others.
That animation in this chapter...
7869937 I can imagine her being calm at them, so calm that it's very, very, very unsettling.
Are you enjoying the view from your glass palace, Lady Rarity?
7902357 Congratulations! You've found the Predator Easter Egg.
You've earned 1439/2911 Indy Quotient Points, and a very manly handshake.
Hiiya it's me again here to say that the human did nothi g wrong and ponies should piss offok lol
I fucking died... That gif... I laughed until i run out of air and my stomach hurt. I love it ♡ 👍
Celestia or Luna will probably be very displeased about the King almost taking his head off...
I don't think I will ever forgive Twilight for her decision to keep Spike from Raegdan.
I don't think Spike will either.