Twilight and Spike lived their childhood in Canterlot Castle under the benevolent eye of Princess Celestia and violent protection of her resident, so called, monster. A monster she returns to to find peace with but also unexpected danger and threats.
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Holy shit, those things are Latias’ journey deoxys level of “kill on sight”
ooook, this was something. Brutal, and to be honest unexpected, i knew many would die but i thought the humans were going to be the killers, heck that would have made everyone trust or mc even less. but non the less good start to a story that can go 2 ways now in my eyes.
Also can we get a list of night guard who are -KIA-, -MIA-, -ACTIVE- in the field as of now like a list if im not asking for too much.
Not including Luna and Mr.Kills a lot.
Well, F###!!! Did not expect such a brutal update.
That’s almost the entire Lunar Guard gone.
I do hope, by some miracle, that Leaf Stream, Broken Gust, Trixie, and a couple others manage to survive.
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Casualties: Tack, Short Order, Leaf Stream, Blank Slate, Stalwart Shield, Snared Wish, Eventide, Limit Breaker, Red Dawn, Tidal Wave(?), Smoke Ring(?), Cast Iron
Fatalities: Short Order, Cast Iron
MIA: Tidal Wave, Smoke Ring
Active: Leaf Stream, Tick, Blank Slate, Sea Breeze, Sunrise Storm, Shaded Swirl, Gobrend, Raven, Broken Gust, Trixie, Trailblazer, Captain Stampede, Steel Edge, Solid Charge, Raegdan, Princess Luna
"Hopefully not that long," he says. It was longer. Lol.
This has me awed. Your world is incredibly vivid. The scale and depth is not something often seen, let alone handled so well. I feel sick thinking of its horrors, and their possibilities, what it all means. But I am happy to keep reading.
Ooof
I hope Tidal Wave is okay. He lost too much and I already killed him in one of my fics. Don’t want seaweed boi to go for 0 for 2.
Got to wonder what the hell happened to make this world have this level of `Shit's Fucked up yo`. Did a Greater Chaos Daemon take a shit in the center of the Everfree or something before going on its merry way to kill more Imperials?
But I am curious, cause you got all these horrors but no explanation of why. Not even enough for one to make guesses, I want to make theories man.
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Wait, is that a pokemon fanfic? If so... A My Little Pony and a Pokemon fanfic have both caused to go 'holy shit'? Talk about misconceptions, hey?
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I kept saying the Everfree is dangerous, but did anybody listen to me? Nope. There ya go now.
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Oh yeah. Some did, some did not, some might succumb to their injuries... SirReal's got the list pretty good, though I believe he forgot about two thestrals, Drum Beat and Cradle Song.
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Keep having me back, brah.
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I... I think that... that the next chapter will be a shorter wait... (don't get jinxed, don't get jinxed, don't get jinxed, don't get jinxed...)
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I like to think I got of my bases covered, at least enough to pass a test if you don't go at them with a fine-toothed comb. For all the rest I haven't thought of, Goku has nothing on the ass-pulls I can achieve.
Horror should horrify and sicken, I think. Monsters, real ones, shouldn't make you think that they are cool but make you wanna nope with all the strength of your soul. I mean, even if you had a gun, would you take a chance on landing in MY Everfree Forest now that we see something a bit riskier than manticores and timberwolves?
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Awk-WARD!
To be honest, I'm undecided as to his fate. I got points for both and ways for either living or dead to work, though I think I will be taking the unexpected route instead. I was going for extremely dead before.
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Now, I want you to remember that first paragraph on your comment for the end of the next chapter, where you will raise your hand in victory while doing 'picking up the phone' motions. Just keep it in mind. For unrelated reasons.
Half of the answer will be given, spelled out (heh) actually on the next chapter. The other half on the one after that one. However, if you want to theorize, we already got a hint of how and why. Remember Ch.41, part 2? What a little cast magic can do to an embryo? Now think bigger and fiercer.
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latias journey is a fic on fanfic.net and the primary villain deoxys is viewed as the absolute most hardcore villain in all fiction, as in beyond god the devil and anything inbetween and has a habit of using fubar shoggoth monsters like those in the chapter and is generally used as the standard for villany in fanfiction
9048996 Knock on wood.
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So, this much magic? Then Tirek would come in handy. A pity he's a villain.
By the way, are mutations caused by high amount of magic less likely to be lethal or cause other impairments, or there is a sheer amount of those monsters? Also, what do they eat?
Landing in this forest with a gun? Bad idea. They don't know what a gun is and thus are not afraid of it. Also, there is only so much ammo. And you need to reload. And fire discipline goes to hell, because you just don't know how many bullets this monstrosity needs.
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“Unexpected route”
Don’t know what that means, but I’ve been hoping he is able to get justice for his sister at some point. That’s why he joined the Lunar Guards, so he can get close to Luna and Raegdan so they can assist him in finding his sister’s murderer.
When I said he’s going 0 for 2 is that he hasn’t really done anything very significant before dying, though I do plan to write more about him on the other fic despite his death.
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NO STOP STOP PLS. Rewrite the chapter! I don't need a dead Trixie in my life let alone AJ AND Fluttershy following them. Stop pls. *cries fucking heavily*
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I've blasted a whole tree.
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Mutations by magic are less likely to end in death to almost impossible levels. Quality of life is subject to... different standards.
Each other.
I imagine all the poop in your pants would be a delaying factor as well.
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To be honest, I don't think I have the time or space within the story to implement every guard's sub-plot, though I do if I can weave them in. If I remember correctly Tidal Wave knows who that is but I don't know if—
Computing. . . . . . . .
I think I might have something, which solves a minor issue I had and gives character progression to three characters simultaneously with minimal trouble and/or time. See, this is why I love comments!
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Oh, come on. I've said it before that the main six are safe. Bodily. Sanity is another thing. And I'm sorry, but Trixie is dead. In a next chapter we will see her death through another's eye, how she burned to death by her own spells, screaming in
Ok, I'm kidding, Trixie's fine. :D
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Looking like from an LSD trip is one matter and may even be a positive mutation, having bad-angled or small fangs means you're meat, and good combat but zero reproductive ability is really good for dwindling the populace.
Total biomass constantly decreases, as some of it gets too mixed with dirt and rots, some is used for movement and digestion - so there should always be influx of fresh meat from somewhere - like in the sea there is micro algae and plankton.
The otherworld ops group is fine, no horrifying encounters. So I assume that if I get to shooting, I had a task to go and shoot and thus given at least a quick rundown and some Dead Space VR training, because in general just climbing up a tree or not getting spotted seems safer. Monkeys, right?
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Well from what I was thinking is that as a Lieutenant of the Royal Guard, he was around many nobles and are familiar with them. He knows them perhaps better than Luna and Raegdan.
So he strikes a deal, help him narrow his search and he’ll help them find any nobles conspiring against them. You don’t even have to show him finding justice, implying it like Tidal Wave about to breach the bedroom door of the culprit would be enough.
I don’t know, in the end you should show all of the OCs after it’s all done. Like Tidal Wave having a conversation with his sister on his grave after finding justice before leaving to report for duty to Luna.
Maybe he’ll even help the other OCs with their issues.
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Waaiiiiittt...if that's the case. Magic being used on an OP level without care of how it might ruin other's lives, a massive amount of eldritch horrors that been around for a long time....-sigh- God damn it Discord, I got a feeling during his little past reign of chaos. Him casting his chaos magic left and right to have `fun` reallyyyy fucked up a lot of developing babies from all sorts of creatures. Be they ponies, minotaurs, griffins, and even just random animals.
Least what I'm going with, I mean his reign of chaos before the royal sisters kicked his ass could have been a LONG event that was going on for a good long time before the sister's got involved. So who knows how much time his insane level of magic had to screw up an entire generation of life in Equestria. Besides the twisted nature of the beasts are....chaotic in a manner.
You did warn us. I even took you seriously. I was expecting a "Kobayashi Maru" scenario, but that casualty list is... well it's just longer than even I expected. This is going to devastate Luna, even if it is: Mission Accomplished. You do horror very well and I wouldn't want to go anywhere near your Everfree Forrest unless I was riding in Crusader otherwise known as Unit CRSD of the Line. A Mark XXXV Bolo, Model G Planetary Siege Unit. A Dragon Assault Tank wouldn't even be good enough for me to feel secure. I'm going to read the chapter again to take in anything I may have inadvertently missed the first time around. I really hope you hold down the casualties a bit more, though. I know the mane 6 are "relatively safe" but I really like some of your OCs and don't want them to bite the dust.
So much RIP AND TEAR. So many dead OCs. Nice job highlighting the weaknesses of the Lunar Guard, by the way.
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Getting a flashback to the question of whether I've read Berserk and know of the Eclipse that I got after this chapter was first edited.
The answer is no.
The answer when I don't lie is that I'm a fan of both Berserk and Lovecraft.
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Yeah, we don't want to overdo it. I got more to go. All in all though, for real, this also served the role of displaying that more than just the 'bad guys' are at risk. The girls might bodily be safe, but that doesn't mean that others or even my own OC's are safe, and yes, that includes Raegdan himself.
Also, I thought at first to say that a Land Raider Crusader might make you feel safe, but if this tank won't then nothing will. Jesus Christ, that thing can give a Baneblade a run for its money!!!
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Thanks. I always appreciate a good Doom shout-out. I don't want to fall into the trap of making flawless or unbeatable characters/forces. Where's the fun in that? As I was talking with one of my editors, the Solar Guard would more likely have far more success in the same scenario than the Lunar Guard. Heck, the Royal Guard might have done better if only because of numbers. Different strengths and strategies.
Najee, huh? It's probably relevant.
Thanks for the update👍
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I usually prefer to let these things lie in the background as a joy to be discovered, but I'll make you a solid this time. Chapter 35, look for the paragraph that begins with "Sea Breeze was tracing the blackened stump that was all that remained of her horn with her hoof, her head lowered and eyes lost in view of another place or time."
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Yeah, it felt like it might've been mentioned. Wasn't sure where though.
So do they have an eldritch nightmare factory connected directly under the Everfree? I have to say, this story is certainly not slowing down :)
That thing looked horrific... I like it. very Lovecraftian in design.
I know I don't comment on the story as much as others but Crimmar you continue to amaze me. So many twist and turns and disaster and death and trauma that I can barely keep up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Also, though I doubt they'll both make it out, I'm shipping Trailblazer with Trixie right now.
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Thank you. I live to serve (nightmares).
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You're right, I simply ooze positiveness in this fic. Maybe I should try to darken it a bit.
Trailblazer and Trixie? Huh, I had never thought of it, but you know, it does make a certain kind of sense. They're both showy in a way (can't help it when your talent is fire spells) and they both have experience in... let's call it being a hobo for funsies. That would actually be quite a viable pairing. You know, if they stay alive.
They're alive.
it's been an wile seens you last updated. and intresting design off that obobination
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Ye, I had to redo a lot of the writing, and work has just been piling on. Can you believe that in the first draft everyone made it out relatively okay? I might as well had made them the Justice League. Still, summer vacation creeps closer and along with the fact of how excited I am for the next chapters I am hoping for faster update times on the next 3-4 chapters.
Hoping.
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well it's good something comes out and i onder stand that some times it can get sligtly tedius when you fell like you geting no where. but this univers witch you have created is exstremly intresting. and i really hope it get's an litel more motion. allso so far so good it looks so stay strong!
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So all they have to do is make a true and complete friendship with her and get over her past blunders and then blast her with the rainbow again that should fix it.
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It is more complicated or hard than that. For instance, one of the conditions is We want her to no longer be a threat’. This could potentially mean that Luna would have to never be a threat in a similar way again even with the return of her powers which would require more than getting over the blunder of her past. Realizing and being regretful over a past mistake is one thing. Making it so you can never again repeat that mistake requires far, far more. It's a similar path but one that has to be walked for a very long time and with no deviation.
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well it was just a thought. Too bad Luna made some bad choices out of ignorance and was tortured, raped(metaphorically), and permanently crippled. I imagine never being able raise the moon again and fulfill her cutie mark will drive her to the point of being insane. And no, I don't think she is insane at the moment. I mean more like a living plant insane.
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Are you kidding me, dark is my favorite color!
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I really have to commend your rendition of Pinkie Pie and Luna too! Quickly turning into my number 1's.
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Damn, I hope Broken Gust is okay. She's my favorite bat horse.
Been a while since I last read this story, and I'm so glad to see it is still as amazing as ever. I enjoy what you did with Najee by the way, keep up the amazing work!
This story went through too many rifts
Whens the next chapter? Because the last chapter was on my b-day, and that was a while back...
who is Najee???
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Chapter 35, the part where Sea Breeze talks about her own experience in the Everfree Forest.
Yes, it's obscure, but I like to think of these as little surprises for those who re-read. There's some stuff that becomes more apparent after the whole story is known.
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Oi
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Alicorn OC
Oh and ponification.
New fav story
Finally found time to read this chapter. The OC I submitted got eaten . Not sure how to feel about that .
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Proud? He went out like a real hero, that was the point. You think he didn't see that coming?
#alwaysremember
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I can only hope he went down cutting all the way!
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Love so far hope to see more.