Twilight and Spike lived their childhood in Canterlot Castle under the benevolent eye of Princess Celestia and violent protection of her resident, so called, monster. A monster she returns to to find peace with but also unexpected danger and threats.
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If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
8711106
psychotic
Luna said "Stream Leaf" instead of "Leaf Stream", does she not know her name?
8711106
Probably disturbed really considering he went through a lot of shit and he didn't came back in one piece. He is trying but what has happened to him left its mark on him that will never go away.
pretty sure this was ment to be luna in this context.
That was a rollercoaster from start to finish. Kudos.
Lyra made me laugh more than I want to admit.
Deep.
this is one off the greatest chapters so far an defently an improvment for there caraters development. keep upp this great work and i might die off how well it's planed out
8711106
raspy and slow, as if he constantly needed water. Carefully choosing every word with either one of his two voices: Monotone or Anger. That's how I think he'd sound anyway
Yes, but even steel can be bent with enough force. Honestly, this chapter was good. But, seeing Raegdan break down was heartwrenching.
8711715
I disagree. I think Twilight was referring to when Raegdan was upset with Celestia.
Raegdan really needs to be fixed up. He's gotten so many injuries that it's a surprise he's even walking. Besides the obvious things like the eyes and the finger, I'm amazed that there doesn't seem to be any apparent permanent effects.
8713267
fuck sake. let's just chalk it up as the sorta shit my sleep-deprived spews out yeah? words stop working at certain stages of exhaustion.
8713733
Thats understandable, though I just voiced disagreeance. You're fine my dude.
8713747
nah it's just the dumb shit i get up to when i'm tired that really pisses me off, once i ripped up my curtains into strips to form a cocoon and tried to hibernate like a fucking bear in the middle of summer.
this was just the start of one of my latest tirades.
8713911
That sounds like a lot of fun. I'd just embrace it.
8713926
trust me, you're not the one paying for the shit i break
8714716
Ive done my fair share of breaking
I cried a little. Which is problematic as I am at work reading this. I just want Raegdan to be happy.
Also three mistakes I believe?
Man he's got severe PTSD.
Finally! She came to her senses. I am really glad Luna finally realized the value of the individual. Next step, guilt management and the art of giving and recieving forgiveness. Hopefully, someday, Raegdan will be humble enough to listen to those who care about him. Good chapter Crimmar, you really out did yourself. I myself couldn’t help but cry at reading the last part of it.
8735433
I shared the line with a friend and his response was about the same as mine. But he went further and tried to explain what it is exactly:
"I guess the closest thing to speaking in cursive is to turn your tongue into a calligraphy pen and filling it with magic air-ink that spells out the words for you."
Also, I'm loving the story so far! Though I almost dropped it a couple times cause there was so much dark stuff without any happy stuff.
Needs more Pinkie, though.
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Yes, gradual change is best change. Definitely more grounded in reality. And I do agree that the only way any change can happen at all would be with liberal use of attitude adjustment in paralel with a guiding hand to gradually correct misconceptions and show the alternatives they were not aware they had.
I was just arguing that the interactions themselves were too one-sided. You'd at least expect Luna to snap back in a royal dignified manner or some other kind of complications along the proceedings of oblivious, naive teenagers presuming to know what they're talking about.
8736744
If I remember correctly, there is a part coming your direction where Luna does snap but not exactly dignified or anything like that.
8736750
Oh goodie!
Huh, it has been almost a year since I finished my initial binge of this story, and 16 new chapters await. Once more, I go into the breach.
Just starting. Hope its enjoyable :)
If that rating says anything, ive found a new story to read
This made me laugh.
Sometimes words speak louder then actions
Twilight has strange Bad Dreams...
PRICELESS
Beautyful date, trafic end. Both deserve more...
Luna has a lot to life with, i think that is punishment enough...