Twilight and Spike lived their childhood in Canterlot Castle under the benevolent eye of Princess Celestia and violent protection of her resident, so called, monster. A monster she returns to to find peace with but also unexpected danger and threats.
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It's back, neat.
Will we see the perspective of the other human group any time soon?
Oi you’re back...and now we all have to wait what happened to our OCs.
Sometimes I just wanna smack both Raegdan and Luna for their constant arguments
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Oh, I almost forgot I followed this story.
Thank god I remembered, because now I can start reading this again... hmm... what chapter was I at..?
Oh, right, chapter Three. I’ve got a ways togo.
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Yay, it's back (It was actually here, just working on it)
After they get out of the Everfree, yes. The whole chapter (or two) will be from their point of view in their entirety.
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I'm back, yay!
From the looks of it, they wanna smack each other for the same reason too.
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Well, don't let the sight of this chapter being titled as number 48 scare you.
I don't count the interlude chapters in the numbering, and I've got close to a dozen of those suckers too. Let that scare you. :D
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Hehe, guess it does. A little anyway.
I was very happy to see this! I was hoping you were alright and weren't lost in Virtual
Reality forever or sick or... well you get the idea. The good thing is nobody died in this chapter, but we don't know what happened to the other characters we care so much about that haven't been given canon death immunity. Poor Fluttershy is all I can say. Broken bones hurt, especially compound fractures.
I really like the squabbling between Raegdan and Luna. They quarrel like an old married couple. I know other people might not like it, but I find it rather endearing. It shows how much they really care about each other.
This scenario reminds me of the mines of Moria from Tolkien's The Lord of the Rings. That gave me the creeps too. Good job.
An update! Thank you very much! I desperately needed something to get through the day and you’ve given it!
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I had a fair bit of this story read but now it's as if i never read it...did you rework the chapters at some point or is this site just being weird again?
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No, I was mostly wrangling the chapter. This is only half of it really, I just wanted to finally post something that was done and not wait until it was all edited in its entirety. The plot, especially after this chapter, changed dramatically from what I had planned.
In the second iteration of the chapter (this is the fourt/fifth), Raegdan kicked Gizmo of Gremlins and then they all calmed down monsters with bananas.
No, I'm not joking.
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Np, bro! I got your back for sometime in the weekend/just past it!
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(☞゚ヮ゚)☞
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No, I haven't mucked around with it, apart from giving chapter numbers to each chapter but that was ages ago. Like, over a year+ ago. Maybe you deleted your browser history, cookies, or changed browser? (I have no idea where the history of what you read is stored so this might be wrong)
sweet, thanks for continuing this. its easily my favorite "serious" story here. i hope you continue until the story is finished, because this is a gem.
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Pretty sure the site messed up then which does happen from time to time and while annoying it does give me an exuse to read the whole thing again ^_^
Oh god, the drrr. You evil bastard.
That wing break...why are you so descriptive?
I mean, the descriptive is awesome but still
Damnit, Raegdan is just being really stupid. They don't have TIME for this shit. Just break AJ's and Fluttershy's Legs, and cut Flutter's eyes, and then move on, letting them bait and slow down the monsters. Why is he being so stupid and wasting time?
biggest fucking lie ever!!!
I really hope someone gets hurt really bad because of Applejack. I really love to hate her in this story, she is the only one who doesn't learn from past mistakes and that makes me angry. And even worse, Raegdan doesn't give her a reality check. Just because she is one of 6 ponys that are needed for the biggest magic nuke this place has doesn't make her a hero or anyone competent! Rainbow learned after a while! She joined the Training of the Lunar Guard to get better and be prepared. Pinky wanted to be better and help more, but also learned to stay away from places where her lack of experience and competence and training could cause harm. Same for Twilight. Fluttershy will have her experience now. But Applejack doesn't want to learn or change this bi...! Wasn't enough to kill a Luna Guard before she could even go in Training, NOOOOO, she needed to drag her friend down to a hellhole to die because she thinks herself a fucking hero while all she really can do is be a distraction and a fucking risk!
The CMC got a wake up call for less, you should think you could expect something better from an adult, bit not from AJ. Oh how I hope in some corner of my mind that they will be to late because of AJs stupid idea and can only see the others vanish in the rift! And then AJ learns that all the Luna Guard died for nothing because of her! But I don't believe this story will do this, whelp no bad endings for the stupid ones.
Uff I wanted to get this off my chest for a while now.
But beside this? This story is awesome!!!!
There are some real great wake up calls for some people who are to naive, would love for Twilight to stumble upon one of this Ponys she could have ended up with, not one of the dead ones, no another one in another city, learning about the chained up foals and then trying to get the guard to do somethings only to find out they are all bribed Oh the irony would be so sweet, seeing her beloved law fail her !
But for real, this story is like a drug! I CAN'T STOP READING!!