Twilight and Spike lived their childhood in Canterlot Castle under the benevolent eye of Princess Celestia and violent protection of her resident, so called, monster. A monster she returns to to find peace with but also unexpected danger and threats.
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Unnamed thestral is the real MVP. I reckon she'll make it into the Lunar Guard.
Being sheltered works wonders for knowing everything about magic at the cost of awareness of the outside world. Also, I'm not surprised that Rainbow Dash isn't taking this well since ponies aren't used to death.
I'm going to go out on a limb and say Applejack's parents were some of the ponies that helped and something happened to them.
terrible things would befall them, often at the end of a household item like a large wooden spoon
Swear to God my mom had stock in that company!
7481025 I think Velvet's relationship with Raegdan is a pretty screwed one, but it actually works great.
7481031 I just press the keys pretending I know what I'm doing. This is the crap that comes out!
7481046 She must have been a real badass, right?
7481131 *Deep, hesitant breath* or... perhaps not.
Now I really want that unnamed batpony to get a name.
Twilight Velvet is such a great mom.
Fuck that was awesome holy shit give me more.
Brown sledge? What did he do, shove it up the dude's ass or something?
I wonder if Twilight Velvet was/is one of Celestia's agents.
Good Guy Raegdan. Smashing a corpse to save rainbow some guilt.
So Raegdan faked killing this unicorn to spare rainbow-dash the guilt?
Also since im actually commenting for the fist time(love the story).
Weird how Charybdis had the primary ingredients for rocket fuel stored in its body right?
7481180 I was just working on that part. Named her Eventide.
7481343 I actually think the next chapter won't take that long all considering. I've got quite a big chunk written already.
7481355 Non-oxygenated blood is dark red. Mush it up with, uh... other... liquids or, eh, soft parts and -tadaaa-
7481691 Not really faked. The guy was still alive.
Wasn't it just the weirdest coincidence? I could hardly believe it myself!
The tanks' opening where placed in a straight line across similar openings that probably led outside. Almost as if it was made so something could plug in and drain them.
In a world of black and white morals, everyone is beginning to see in shades of grey. How this will change them is more than evident.
WoOOoOOoOoooOOOOooo.. Wooh yeah. Didn't need no sleep anyways.
7481131 is possible but i bet either candance or blueblood or maybe both are on it, no matter how careful or skilled you are. You cant get too far against someone really powerful either economically or politically without anyone with both power and info to help you to keep it under wraps
7481355 crush his intestines, that stuff is lethal when you are healthy, in the middle of a surgery...not even magic can save you from the brown
7481891 human stamina he can keep going and going
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We gonna find out more about the Leviathans and Charbydis? You basically all but stated that they are engineered monsters that came from the various dimensional hells out there, but I'm really interested in having the exact characteristics of Charbydis explained.
Another side of Velvet~
7482048 Hmm. I needed some time to think about this question. See, it is inevitable that I think up consequences and situations that take place apart from the main story, before it, or after. Because the story is semi-free in how it's being made, I am not sure if these will show up or if I make use of them, and I fear spoilers, both because they are rude, and because then I cannot pull my ass out of the fire if I realize I screwed up there and need to retcon before anyone realizes what I did. Hello! Anyway... yes. I think I'll put a blog up in the following days detailing Charybdis along with some sketches, if only because I semi-promised to do so before and I haven't. I'm confident that I can do so without burning bridges*.
*Famous last words.
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I like to refer to the Apple's mother and father as "Thomas and Martha Apple" ever since someone commented on an old fic about how the Apple's deaths (in the fic) were so much like the Wayne deaths.
...sometimes you just have to hammer a point home.
...all this horsing around has got to stop.
The door is that way, right? Don't worry, I'll show myself out!
7482278 Good friends should always stick together.
Hold the door please
7481915 So...50 shades of morals, basically.
Did he just kill another potential source of information? Seems rather short-sighted, and lets whoever is pulling the strings get away pretty clean, all things considering.
You're being absolutely rediculous, stop jumping higher on my top 5 list.
Seriously though, this story just keeps getting more and more real. Will we get a chapter about Twilight Velvet finally hardening her resolve in helping Raegdan purging Equestria of the fillynapping filth? Hell it could honestly be a complete side story. You're too good at this writing thing.
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Awesome! Thanks for that. You should consider blog posting more often.
And they thought he didn't care. Also I really, really like this doting mother, hidden badass approach to Velvet's character.
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The Order of Philomena?
I didn't need sleep anyways ;-;
7482442 The assassin was dying and couldn't be saved. They went in to intimidate and ask a final question if they could. Otherwise he was already dead. When he saw Dash's reaction he decided that he could just pretend to kill him after having the doctors play along to claim his death as his own, freeing Dash from the guilt. He kind of made a big deal about getting his hammer. Then, after "killing" the guy, took the time to exaggeratedly explain why Dash "Should of done a better job" to make it seem like the fall wasn't ever going to kill him. That's the impression I got out of this chapter at least.
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Well, it is not like Celestia was going to let Raegdan question the pony anyways. Thank you for clarifying that though. Find it a little amusing though that if the pony killed someone, they freak out, but if it Raegdan, they are relatively okay with that, though.
Twilight Velvet uses Clue-by-Four.
Twilight Sparkle is dazed. It's super effective!
Fucking finally! Was getting tired of Sparkles sanctimonious shit. Yes, what Rage did was terrible, but it needed to happen. Faster even.
I take one look at Raegdan's character and all I see is a terrible person. A true piece of absolute filth. Honestly, the absence of morality and sanity. A character not worth the light of day.
That being said, none of that will stop me from respecting someone who can make hard choices.
I just realized " Raegdan " can be rearranged to
" A Danger "
Which can be defined as "a person or thing that is likely to cause harm or injury."
Very clever
7487904 Thats more than likely a coincidence.
7487877 The beauty of this story is that it challenges morality in a way rarely found in any other fic on this site, excluding clop. It deals with a lot of grey area where there is no real right or wrong, or just wrongs used to make rights. To me sanity would be very hard pressed to find in someone who's gone through so much, he wasn't always the homicidal lunatic he is, but given the circumstances he's had, and the cards he's dealt, and the people he's lost, he isn't so bad. He didn't choose the opportunity to show humanity when could've, and then for a long time he didn't get that choice because he chose to be insensitive and stoic. taking the safe route is what kept him alive, and he chose life over humanity.
7490772 Yeah, it's some really intelligent writing, definitely. I just really really really dislike his personality. Yes, his actions explore the moral compass quite heavily, but his personality is crap. Too sure of himself. The arrogance just gets a little aggrovating, what with him being proven wrong so many times before only to come out on top once or twice and expecting that to justify 'every' single snard comment. If he hadn't been hit with all that suffering and immortality, I'd say he's a total cunt. But, given that and his soft side, I'll just stick with not perticularly liking him. Good thing he's not the only character in this though. Supporting cast is fucking amazing.
Ew, dude.
Well, you are. To sort of steal a line from the show, "monster is as monster does." You can't blame people for what they are, but you can blame everyone for what they do.There is no one you can blame for your reputation when you do some things, because deciding "the ends justify the means" is something you have to actively choose to believe is true. This isn't just circumstance. You are the evil one because you chose to do evil things. That it may have ultimately been for the best is just a reason, not an excuse.
Wait, what? When did that happen?
That your mother is a very pleasant, domestic psychopath who is excellent at cooking. Still a psychopath, though. The thestrals really have it right.
You know, while I understand the sentiment, it still seems counterproductive. They had someone right there, in their hands, who they could have asked about his employers and sources and such. They could have still killed him afterwards. What was really gained by doing it at this exact point?
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She refers to the disease contracted by the Leviathan's corpse, which she now understands is not an Equestrian native, and the antibiotics which is, from her point of view now, something that they gained through what she now knows to be alien knowledge.
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Huh. Must have been cured quickly alright. I never even noticed that.
I like to imagine that Twilight Velvet sounds like Ana from Overwatch.
"Mother knows best."
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nzTXeKCn5lo
No offense to the artist, I'm a terrible illustrator, but I'm not sure which one of those faces will cause more nightmares tonight.
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Not the best of pics, but they look fine to me. the thing that bothers me most is the length of the letter opener's handle. That thing is super short and I know some of them are sharp enough to bleed a person like a steak knife would. I certainly wouldn't put it in my mouth at least.
Velvet is such a badass
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I was going to post this.
Seconded
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This lol
Velvet is an accessory to multiple torture-murders. Smh if Twilight still snitch
Murdering a pony in a hospital bed with no trial, alongside the ponies he killed and ate i would assume he wont get a fair trial at the end of all this.
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To be fair, if you read between the lines of what is actually said and actually meant, you will see that the guy was going to be very shortly dead with the best outcome for him being "might stay alive for a question or two if he can even talk." In a way it was as much murder as pulling the plug 5 minutes earlier is.
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Agreed it's my understanding the only reason Raegdon bothered was to take the blame for causing the death away from rainbow dash