Twilight and Spike lived their childhood in Canterlot Castle under the benevolent eye of Princess Celestia and violent protection of her resident, so called, monster. A monster she returns to to find peace with but also unexpected danger and threats.
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I laughed harder than I should have when Gummy bit Raegdan's nose.
Sheds a tear Celestia has made me proud.
Your chefs went, ‘we can improve her. Bigger. Fatter. We have the cakeology!’ "
Oh God! My sides were destroyed.
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You know I could see the canon rarity reacting in a similar way if this happened to her on screeen. I loved this chapter sir!
Oh man the rollercoaster of feelings. I wanted Rarity to bludgeon both of them but then you not only make it ok but you make me feelings feel so insignificant in comparison to Celestia's rage. Celestka was right, it went from zero to Rainboom in seconds.
Also AJ's hat, my mind literally played AJ's reaction in my head and it was hilarious. Normally I'd say, "I can't wait to read what happens." but I don't have to! Thank you! You glorious bastard!
Hoo boy, can't say that this chapter didn't open up even more cans of worms. Where to start?
Well, first off, let's hit the obvious:
The thievery. Even if it was to train the guard, Raegdan and Luna just dug themselves even fucking deeper by prying into the personal belongings of the very same ponies that they quite harshly punished for doing the exact same thing. While I'm glad that Rarity set them on fire, I am further disgusted by Luna's reaction to Celestia's comment about it not to mention how Celestia just passes it off as okay.
Now, I can forgive Celestia, because she hasn't been known to wipe people's memories after scarring them for life and then turning around and being a massive hypocritical cunt a few months later, but Luna and Ragedan? Bullshit. Sure, it was just a 'harmless' fanfiction reading, but the way Rarity reacted to having it pilfered and read shows just how much she cared about it being kept secret. I'm also not happy with how Rarity did an almost complete 180 towards the end of the scene after she was faced with having both of the rulers read her dirty secret, but it's a lesser evil amongst the monstrous overlord that is the pair's hypocrisy.
Hoo boy though, if that pissed me off, then you have no idea how glad I am that Cunt-face McSolarGuard got his shit kicked in by Celestia. That dirty fuck has been asking and begging to be murdered since the Solar Guard came into the picture and this was so satisfying. Also, Gummy destroying Raegdan's face was quite comical as well.
tl;dr for this chapter: If this incident with the stolen shit doesn't add to the heaps of garbage that needs to be thrown on top of those two, then there will be hell to pay.
Also, obligatory 'ew, straight and ew Luna x OC'
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Uh...
This was a new Captain, just as dumb as the prior one. You know, the one that took Raegdan's eye and got his legs broke, among other things, and was lucky Celesta gave him a pension after firing him for his foolish zealotry?
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I am actually pretty proud of that line. I like the idea of actually speaking in cursive, but also that it might mean curse-ive. Good times.
BEST CHAPTER YET
Rarity clop fic was absolutly PRICELESS
Gummy is brilliant. The guards are retarded.
Demotion and bootcamp. You do not ignore direct orders, they are direct orders and not friendly suggestions.
This chapter right here is going into my top 5 favorites