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TheNewYorkBrony


The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.

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Unbeknownst to Sunset Shimmer, someone's making booty using her booty.


Now with a reading by Wubcake! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d3mlXOoHbaQ&t=390s

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Could be worse.

Oh, NewYorkBrony, you do have a wild imagination.

So what's this app called again?

Seriously? This can't be a real app. I can't even put into words how hilariously amazing that is. Mind sharing the exact title or something? I can't seem to find it.

Oh, and besides some minor typos, this was spectacular. I loved it

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For those wondering, yeah, this is a real app, you can find the links to download it here.
You're welcome ! :raritywink:

Smack Dat Sonata.

... Mother of God...
You already know what picture this is :
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Did i mention that this is a real app. A real app you can download to your phone right now? Because it is. And I have done so.

*Brain process information*
WHAT!? You must tell us the app name. I can't find it.

And Twilight you crafty bitch.

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Thanks man!

:rainbowlaugh: I can't even... Wait ,Twilight? You sly bitch! :rainbowlaugh: What's this app called again? :twilightsheepish:

You have no idea how much I needed this in my life! :rainbowlaugh:

...never wished I had a smartphone until now...

Dat ending..,

"Heh heh heh. Ain't I a stinker?" :trollestia:

Please make a sequel maybe they finally learn who it is and tracking Human Twilight down, Maybe Sunset gets even by spanking her?
Of course gets sexy as Twilight likes it and Sunset finds herself liking it as well.

Stop smacking my ass before I kick yours!

6347914 What... the... HUH?! :rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh: Oh mah days!!!

6347901 You don't need one to enjoy this!

According the description in 6347914 's link, there are also Windows and OSX ports of the game linked in that description for download! (along with an APK for all your Android based needs)

Thanks TNYB :yay:

poor Sunset Shimmer. this is hilarious, dialogue makes my day. How do you get a high score on that??
Adagio seemed to know what she was talking about does that means she downloaded it as well? :raritywink:
I'd like second that motion for a sequel where Sunset finds out who it is with Sonata and they punish Twilight. :facehoof:

you seem to have a bit of a quote-ending problem, capitalizing the attributing word...

"Uh, hey, Sunset," He told her with a smile.

for example, 'he' would not need to be capitalized

6348039 ah. I'll fix that right now. And maybe there will be a sequel.

Well, that's one way to get revenge.

6348082 A sequel? Like an actual "Smack Dat Sonata" app?! :pinkiegasp:

Or do you mean a story sequel?

WHICH WOULD ALSO BE AWESOME :yay:

Thanks for letting me know it's actually a game, as well as for writing this. :rainbowlaugh:

6348082 whether you learn something new about convention or about what little things to pay attention to, I'm glad to help :pinkiehappy:
no pressure, I know you have a lot on your plate :heart:

6348101 both. I think haha. Maybe a sequel and yes there's a sonata app.

6348212 Is it also easily downloadable like the Spankset one? :pinkiegasp:
Would you happen to have a link?

Oh yes. A sequel story MUST be made!

BWAHAHAHA
I DEMAND SEQUEL NAO:rainbowlaugh: rainbowlaugh: rainbowlaugh: rainbowlaugh: rainbowlaugh: rainbowlaugh: rainbowlaugh:

6348507 :yay:
I can now die a happier man. Though I think I'll stay alive for quite a bit longer if you don't mind :trollestia:

Thanks again!

Former bullying victim here. Not funny at all. Hope Sunset finds out the responsible and punches them HARD.

Not funny at all. Sunset is the victim of bullying and sexual harassment and you try to play it for laughs. Her "friends" are horrible people for downloading this app and playing it around her like it's nothing, Sunset should take down the name of every person who slaps her ass and turn them over to the police, and I hope Twilight is found and charged with what she's doing.

When will this app be for Android omg :heart:

6350331 it is for android my friend.

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6349759 you guys need to learn to take a joke. It's just a story. I've seen way worse stories than this that everyone has sung their praises for. It's not real. And this is coming from a victim of bullying.

I'd like to know the rules of the "Spank Sunset Shimmer" game. Do you just get 10 points for every tap? If so, seems more like a measure of obsession than skill to be on the leaderboard.

6350538 I can easily take a joke (and in fact I often make them myself, sometimes at my expense), but not on an act of bullying. Real or fake doesn't matter. Had this happened in real life would have meant humiliating a girl who already has serious self-respect issues AND cause her grave injury due continue spankings. Or physical assaults, to say it in legal terms. People have killed themselves over much less. Or killed their tormentors (I know for a fact I'd have reacted violently).
As for you being a bullying victim... I'll better not say what I think. This is not the place for that.

6350733 whatever dude. I have my opinion and you have yours.

6350538 I can take a joke. This still isn't funny. Take something like Sunset Shimmer's Naked Marathon. Sure, everyone is running around in bikinis and stripping each other, but there's an internal insanity that makes it work. The girls have fun doing it, we have Flim and Flam's silly commentary, and the story is so over-the-top with its depictions that yes, it is funny.

You know what would have made this funny? Have Sunset find out Twilight did it, and Twilight reveals how much money she's made from the app and shares it with Sunset. Then Sunset is like "meh, no big deal" and gets into it, encouraging students to try harder and talking to the Humane Five excitedly about the royalty payments she's getting for the app. That would have humor in it. Or maybe Sunset makes a "Spank Fluttershy" app to get back at her for playing the thing, and then someone else makes one of Rainbow Dash, and it spirals out of control into there being a Spank app for everyone and they stop caring because everyone is even. Maybe you have folks argue over which variant of the game is superior for whatever reasons you wanna make up. Or one of them (Pinkie, maybe) makes the variant with her on her own because she thinks it's funny. Something to take the edge off Sunset being the victim, so we can just enjoy how silly the situation is, and then take that silly situation to the realms of absurdity.

This story does not have that, and for it, Sunset is the victim who receives no retribution or closure come the story's end. This is a story about a teenage girl being sexually assaulted repeatedly as she tries to find out who made a humiliating app of her, and the person behind it gets away with it. You, as a victim of cyberbullying (and my sincere sympathies to you for dealing with that) should understand exactly how she feels and empathize with her, and understand why seeing her go through this stuff isn't funny.

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Despite how much I like your profile pics, you need to stop being stuck up douches. He's doing this for fun. My motto is 'Don't like it, Don't read it'. It's THAT SIMPLE! I used to be a victim too. But I take it as a joke. Now, get your ass out of this story, faggots! I seriously love the Sunset Shimmer profile pic tho!:raritywink:

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Don't listen to those douches. They suck ass for a living!

6351046 thank you for the support but i don't appreciate you calling people faggots. I understand that we don't agree on the outcome of the story, but nonetheless it's a word that shouldn't be used.

Oh my god the comments XD Dash, man, how do you deal with these people.

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Understood, sir. As always, good soldiers follow orders.

6351046 See, the inherent problem with the idea of "don't like it, don't read it" is that if I don't read it, I can't decide if I like it or not. Silly thing. Otherwise, if being offended by a girl being sexually assaulted and it being intended as humerous makes me a douche and faggot to you, then I'm proud to be one.

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I'm not going to argue anymore. I'm sorry for insulting you, but I still stick with my motto. I'm gonna get so many downvotes for this.....

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On the playstore? I don't see it.

6351320 gotta go to ponut joes tumblr i think. Hes the artist

6351046 You forgot to chew your soap, son.

This is my new favorite fanfiction.

By the way, I got the app and I'm addicted.

Help.

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