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TheNewYorkBrony


The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.

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Must have more plots to point on that graph! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

Yeah! Science, bitch!

Heh heh. Next thing you know, they'll do something like this:
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You forgot the character tags.

FOR SCIENCE!

Finally some fanfic inspired by that image! As always, amazing. You never let me down! :rainbowkiss:

Goddammit, Twilight. You of the scientific method has left yourself become distracted.

The older girl straddled her, pinning her arms above her head with one hand while the other snaked underneath Twilight’s shirt and raked at her bare stomach, causing Twilight to let out quick staccato breaths.

Twilight pulled Sunset back down to her lips by the nape of her neck, nipping at her bottom lip. An electric shock flowed through her when she heard Sunset let out a loud moan. It made her want to do it again. Becoming braver, she tugged at the older girls lip, while ghosting a deft hand up and down the middle of Sunset’s back, causing her to shudder.

Interesting that with her hands pinned above her head, Twilight's still able to pull Sunset down on top of her.

5777102 i did not revise this. :twilightoops: i will fix it!

And yet another SunsetSparkle shipfic that ends before the real fun... :rainbowlaugh:
I still love it though ! :heart:

Oh well that happened...:rainbowderp:

good, cute, sweet, give you 7.5 because no Discord, and you didn't mention his name

Sweet Celestia... AWESOME! :rainbowkiss:

Make a sexual sequel please Q_Q

5778665 What this person said!
That would be so awesome! :rainbowkiss:

5778665 I agree with this person. That would be great! :pinkiehappy:

You don't remember writing this?

Maybe someone broke into your house, logged onto your Gdocs, and wrote a pony ship-fic, probably thinking you'll be judged by your family and friends. Instead you get the features list. So... Thanks creepy guy?

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Oh please. He didn't mention propane but I wouldn't give him less than 8.0

5779127 I feed from your hatred

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I don't hate ya. If I did, I woulda destroyed you like this:

5779270 You should leave him a thank you note.

Things heated up real fast. This was an enjoyable little one-shot. Nicely written. Good job!

"Oh, there's no sex tag, so I guess this will be a cute little shipping snippet..."
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"WTF Twilight?" :rainbowhuh:
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"WTF Sunset?!" :pinkiegasp:

Dammit, stop making this pairing so darn cute. You're making me start to not dislike Twilight.

Still, I love how Sunset is the one who takes the initiative in this. Usually in these kinds of stories it's the other way round.

5779276 XD okay you win

This story is featured??? I feel like im making a lot of people angry with all these features :rainbowlaugh:

HAWT. :rainbowdetermined2:

morbid curiosity

:rainbowhuh: Uh... I don't think that's actually what you meant, there... at least I hope not...

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At the risk of being downvoted into oblivion, I respectfully disagree. The story's already plenty sexy enough, just continuing where it leaves off seems unnecessary. On the other hand, a sequel in which Sunset "volunteers" Flash Sentry* to further expand Twilight's anatomical studies, that I think I could get behind. :rainbowwild:

* - Or one of the Sirens, if you'd rather keep things sapphic.

Seems like Twi's has a fast progress rate :rainbowlaugh:

5780898 Flash Sentry touching Twilight or Sunset? N-nnnnnnnnnoop u_u

:rainbowlaugh:marvelous m8 i r8 gr8 8/8 would read again
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I found it kinda tough to parse what was going on in this story. The desires and motivations of the characters are extremely murky. Like, there's a mountain of evidence that Twilight is propositioning Sunset out of some sort of romantic feelings, but at times Sunset seems completely oblivious to that (believing that it's just science) and at other times she seems completely aware (overtly teasing Twilight about it). The story doesn't provide any concrete indication that's she's fooled by Twilight's ruse, or that she's just playing along.

Is Sunset nervous? Is that why her breath is trembling, or is it just lust? I would be delighted to see a confident and bold Sunset teaching a young and timid Twilight the ways of lesbian romance, but I literally can not tell if that's what was happening here, or if they were both scared, or even if they were both confident. Twilight might have been very bold in her attempt to acquire some science, and this might not have been a romantic ruse at all.

Or perhaps, is Twilight the confident one and a timid Sunset is being boldly seduced? Perhaps Twilight set her sights on Sunset with the dispassionate focus of a scientist, and came up with a simple plan to approach Sunset and say whatever it takes to get to feel her up.

How does Sunset even feel about science? She was Celestia's student too, right? Maybe she's just as bookish? I mean, she's not asking any questions about 'Data? What exactly are you going to write down?' So maybe that means that she understands this kind of experiment and it somehow makes sense to her?

I genuinely do not know the answers to these very basic characterization questions. Everything seems completely arbitrary and muddled.

5779986 My thoughts exactly. I was honestly surprised to see it escalate as it did.


5777065 I would write a fic about it, if I had the time.


also why is there no "Sex" tag for this?

Yeah why is there no sex tag or at least a teen tag.
Loved it over all nice fic.

Give us chapter 2, dammit!

5780732 Well to be fair, you make some excellent stories.
When you're not teasing us that is.

5783557 I'm not heterophobe D: UwU, i just like Twilight more with Princess Celestia, QChr, Sunset S. and Trixie D:

I'm even like FlutterShy x Discord and Sparity :3

Make the next one a threesome so Twilight's 'experiment' has a control group. :rainbowlaugh:

Meh. Pulled in by the title, apathetic to the dialogue, but irretrievably lost by improper use of the word 'exponential'. It's not an amount, it's a rate of change!

Also, Twilight, humans have already compiled quite a bit of data for you already. You can find it in things called libraries and the internet.

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Twilight likes practical learning.

5784087 so...you want Twilight to Google female arousal? :duck:

Sounds like a sequel.

Yes. Science. For the science god.

Could you do another chapter?

Twilight likes a visual understanding then a mental understanding.

All I have to say that was interesting and cute :twilightblush: Though how you ended it was a tease :trollestia: Nice work. :twilightsmile:

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