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The Abyss


The best gift you can give to someone is your time for you are giving them something you will never get back.

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This story is a sequel to I'll Always be Here for You


A budding love, a new family.

Rescued from her horrible parents by Twilight and Rainbow, Scootaloo begins a long journey of recovery from the years of mental and physical abuse. Now Rainbow’s and Twilight’s adopted daughter, she looks forward to what the future has in store for her. However, Scootaloo's happiness and her life are at risk now that her parents have escaped from prison, fully intent on revenge.

Meanwhile, Rainbow and Twilight try to make their relationship work as they face the difficulties of raising a filly together. To accomplish their dream of a happy family, they all must face numerous challenges that will test the strength of their love and friendship.


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Chapters (17)
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Comments ( 1362 )

YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! I've been waiting for the sequel, and it's already starting off great! :twilightsheepish:

ITS HERE! WOO HOO! Its time for snuggles.

Damn...you certainly know how to get the tension going right off the bat.

Wow that didn't take long for them show up.

Also TWILIGHT:twilightoops: RAINBOW:rainbowderp: get you furry assis over there and save Scootaloo DAMNIT :flutterrage:

Why does your art always give me diabetes

Wow this chapter was pretty amazing and now Scootaloo is at the mercy of her former parents all because Twilight and Rainbow Dash didn't tell her up front about not being able to fly though I can understand there reasons for doing so.

I hope you have the next chapter soon but I really look forward to reading the sequal as much as I did the first story.

Oh ,this is going to be good

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo that bastard!:twilightangry2:




And I stayed awake. Yay!:yay:

I should probablly read the first one huh.

6369433 Yeah, might be a good idea. :twilightblush:

*BREATHING HEAVILY*

*BREATHING HEAVILY*

*BREATHING HEAVILY*

*BREATHING HEAVILY*

*BREATHING HEAVILY*

*EXPLOSION FROM JOY*

EDIT AFTER READING CHAPTER ONE: Fuck you, fuck you, fuck you, you fucking cliffhanger!

Great start. Now save the day Rainbow, quickly.

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Oh please, save the day quickly, rainbow.

I'm suddenly reminded of that scene from Lilo Stitch where after the initial interview with Cobra Bubbles, Lilo screams and runs for her life to get away from Nani who is chasing her.

I imagine this is virtually the same thing.

Okay first, a little thing I noticed while reading.

“Preening, huh? You’re supposed to do that only do that when feathers start getting out of place, right?”

So that's an easy enough fix, yes?

Okay now on to my first impressions. I freaking love it so far. I was happy with Twidash cuddling, I smiled at the brother sister relationship Spike and Scoots are developing. I wasTrying to talk to Scootaloo and tell her that Dash thought she was strong enough to overcome the doctor's diagnosis, and I am right there with Dash when it comes to doing physical harm to Brick and his wife... sorry I forgot her name.

Anyway, all in all I am ready for more. You get a gold star for making this sequel already everything I could want from a sequel.

I'll see you at the next chapter.

Awesomeness? Awesomeness.

6369381 his coverart does the same to me. But I die happy :scootangel:
6369433 yes, you should. It's that good that it is in my Best of the Best shelf
6369478 that was basically my own reaction :pinkiehappy:

*Starts reading chapter* "YAY ITS HERE!"
*gets to cliffhanger ending* "You glorious son of a B****!"

*draws sword* scuse me scoots..i just need to have a word with your parents.. it wont take long and soon they will get the point and never bother you again

YAYYYYYYYYYY SEQUEL HAPPINESS!!! I BET YOU THIS WILL BE ON THE TOP RATED FOR DAYS!

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Why the fuck. What in the actual fuck did we do to deserve this?
A fucking cliffhanger?!
You've GOT to be shitting me right now.

You better not do anyhting bad to Scootaloo!!!!!!!!! OR I will be mad!!!

At the risk of sounding like a heartless jackanapes. I'd draw this out a couple of chapters. No need for the story to end too quickly.

Brick Lump backed up against the wall, eyes quivering with terror and disbelief. Twilight, Rainbow Dash, half the Royal Guard of Canterlot, the dragon from Dragonshy, Luna on the verge of another Nightmare Moon sanity ragequit, Discord smiling evilly and rubbing both hands together with a promise of devastating wrath, and a tiny flutterpony munchkin with a toy hammer advanced on him, step by step.

And then, from the sky streaked down a single point of light, a fiery bolide which slammed into the earth, revealing the iron-clad frames of five Imperial Space Marine Terminators. As one, their red-glowing eyes locked onto the worst daemon of all.
"SPACE MARINES! PURGE!"


This chapter... has so, so many heartwarming D'awww moments in it that I could just die...

... No one takes away my D'awwws. NO ONE.

I really hope they get hurt. Badly.

It's taking all my self control to not read the story right now. I really want to but I know it'll be torturous if I read the first chapter now.

*cocks 10-gague* I just wanna talk to them. I swear. I just wanna have a conversation.

*Sigh* I hope Scootaloo's parents get fucked up bad. But the d'awws. But the parents... and the d'awws. I'm nut sure what to feel right now. I'm fluffy and ice-cold at the same time.

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*Cracks knuckles and begins to transform*
They are not going to touch Scootaloo and if they do, well I guess they will enjoy living in my domain.
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Thanks for the story. can not Wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightsmile::scootangel::rainbowdetermined2:

Too quick dudde, far too quick.

Thoug i have a hard time buying that they could get there so q uickly. Saw another story about some random so and so going after someone connected to the mane six, and they mobilized in an instant.

Finally the sequel. After a shitty day of work you have made my day. instant fav

Happiness flooded into her, sending tears of joy into her eyes. She cleared her throat and wiped her eyes,

Extra space.

Well, we are off to a exciting start. And now we all have Twilibeetus, Dashiebeetus, Scootabeetus, Spikeabeetus, and Brickwillbeatus. That last one is the most malignant.

I look forward to reading more.

~KBO.:twilightsmile:

Start of chapter: Aw this is so adorable :heart:

End of chapter: NOOOOOOOO!

Things excalated...rather quickly...

if even one feather on scootaloo is hurt her parents will answer to the adeptus astartes ultra

6369734 i think you responded to the wrong comment

More please. Like always a very good start. Liked.

You know what this has to stop! Look at this:

There no more lesbian Rainbow Dash.

Twilight Yes dance for sequal.

and Dash, Twi, this is what you get for not telling her.

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You don't have to be so vile about it. I realize that by showing this I may have been rude but I see it differently. First off I was falsely called guy for many years and still am. When I see some one or a character labeled as a homosexual falsely I naturally take action. Seconded I'm religious and in my religion homosexuality is not permitted. On top of that we believe that the rainbow was a gift from god and not a log for something agents his laws.

By Draco's Beard Yes! Yeeeeees!

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Read my reply to Airee and you'll see why I do.

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Does it hurt being that stupid?

6370091 You imply that a fan made video is point proof that a character cannot be lesbian. That alone is laughable. The religion you so choose to follow is of no interest to me—having studied Catholicism and various other religions for 12 years of my life, I could not possibly give less of a damn for whatever invisible sky man drives you to decide that various men and women cannot find love regardless of gender.

Edit: Spell check is your friend. I had to run whatever that was through a friggin translator.

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