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Dashite forever!


This story is a sequel to Please Forgive Me

Its been a few months since Scootaloo found out that Rainbow Dash was her mother, and the two couldn't be happier together. However when they find out that Scootaloo's condition is more complicated than they knew about before and Rainbow Dash receives a letter from an old "friend", things start to get hectic.

At the same time, a looming threat still remains on the horizon, one that can offer you your deepest desires, for a price.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 68 )

7293976 Patience, geez, I just started writing it today and I'm still not 100% where I'm going with this.

7293978 It still sounds promising. Looking forward for more. :twilightsmile:

7294029 Thanks, I look forward to writing more :twilightsmile:


Oh, the book excerpt in chapter 1 has been edited, so re-read it if you want.

7293978 ok, sorry it's just a really good story so far

Oooooooh shit. THIS IS AWESOME!!:pinkiehappy:

7296077 Always glad to see people enjoy it.

7296114 loved it! The feels man! The feels!

7296126 Well yeah, I always try to aim for the feels in these fanfics, glad I hit the mark.

7296165 right on the dot

Hey, that's pretty good!

Oh my snooze its already intense! I can't wait for the next update, great job! :pinkiegasp:

7305007 Oh my snooze?

And yeah, I'm getting there.

I got a reeeeeeeeally bad feeling about this.....:twilightoops:

Yay an update! Great job with the cliffhanger too! :pinkiehappy:

"Tirek," Discord said. "Or perhaps look into the writings of Love Craft, I'm sure that you can find them easily."

Heck yeah!, Some good ol' Lovecraft style horror is just my cup of tea. :twilightsmile:

7324318 Yeah, I used that name as a joke, but eldritch abominations, so, yeah.

it was war my dear Princess, and in my experience, war never changes

I see what you did there :ajsmug: Fallout

"Oh wait, wrong universe, I really need to stop getting them mixed up."

:ajbemused:... Really? Pointing out you own reference? :facehoof:

Final verdict: :moustache::moustache::trollestia:

7325394 Yeah... That was supposed to be an attempt at meta humor... Now you see why I write this kind of fanfics, not comedy :twilightsheepish:.

just teasing, it wasn't that bad...
actually enjoyed it

CALLING IT ITS FUCKIN... Something. I don't really know. Great story.

Awesome! Can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:

7405085 Yep, very much so, this is going to be fun.

I sat down next to Fluttershy and gave her a kiss on the cheek. "I'm always happy to have my marefriend over, and Scootaloo is always happy to see you," I said, nuzzling her gently.


FlutterDash = Best Ship.

7407486 Agreed, they're so cute together.

7407685 It wasn't really that necessary to the story, but I couldn't resist.

One does not simply just watch mlp and not ship Flutterdash.


You just earned a sub, pal.

Well now talking to Tirek this is gonna be a interesting conversation.

honestly twilights asking a bunch of questions that could be better answered by the Necronomicon. it's actually impressive that equestrian has managed to kill and/or seal so many eldritch horrors as most of love crafts work stated they couldn't be permanently killed. still to stop an eldritch horror you need an eldritch abomination and there not exactly helpful sorts either.

7508747 Honestly I haven't really read Lovecraft that much, it was much more inspired by the Ones and Abeloth from Star Wars.

It's cthulhu, isn't it.

So, you turned Lucifer into a queen? well t least you did a better job of it than the Powerpuff Girls did.

7583657 Actually was inspired by Abeloth from the original Star Wars Expanded Universe... so, kinda.

7583668 That's a long story actually. Originally my Morning Star was going to be a Stallion, this was originally created for a Lucifer crossover, then a friend of mine convinced me to instead have Morning Star be... well that's kind of a weird story in itself... so long story short I made them a mare instead.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work.

You are indeed evil. Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

Well now I am looking forward to the next chapter. :pinkiehappy:

"WHO DARETH COME BEFORE MORNING STAR, THE GREAT QUEEN OF TARTARUS!" She said in the booming Royal Canterlot voice.

Hi season 1 Luna! :pinkiehappy:

7820855 Yeah, for some reason I pictured the Equestria version of the Devil being an overdramatic sounding mare with a Trottingham accent.

Are you ever going to finish this (because you really should, I just hate all incomplete stories)?

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