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The Autumn Princess


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After a night out on the town, Vinyl ends up filling Octavia's inbox with voicemails.

...This should be entertaining.

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Ahem. I REGRET NOTHING!

There. I have said it.

Ahem. I REGRET NOTHING TOO! Wait why am I yelling. Sorry, felt like being random. Great story. It sounds like something that would happen to them.

*drunkenly*Are you a wwwwizard?

This made me laugh.
"huehuehue"
See?

Vinyl and Tavi. Two of a kind! I love the swings in mood!

I was just wondering how do you guys cowrite together???

haha! who doesn't enjoy the drunken ramblings of one of your friends left on your phone at 2am?! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Not much to say other than that was very amusing

I'd totally imagining Vinyl drunk. Instant fave.

Ha. Brings back memories. Thumbs up.

This is so typical of Vinyl Scratch. Ha! Rather enjoyable and fun.:pinkiehappy:

Don't have much to say other than it was funny. Good job! :rainbowlaugh:

Thanks, this was a hilarious story. I've seen people like that. A few drinks and he/she becomes (supposedly) super sexy, can write the best song ever, and excel at everything. In reality the drunk is just obnoxious. Haha.

:pinkiehappy:

Reeve #16 · Apr 5th, 2014 · · 8 ·

Um... no, this isn't very funny :ajbemused: it doesn't help that everyone's done it better

4183942 one of us starts, write a few sentences or paragraphs, then send it to the other so they can add more.


4188518 That's nice. Find someone who cares, mkay?

It was a cute story, but one has to wonder... where did ponies get cell-phones with voicemail? It'd be more sensical if you just used their human forms, they have some pre-made and canon thanks to "Equestria Girls" now.

Yes I realize this story is supposed to be silly nonsense, but still, it can be canon-friendly silly nonsense with one tweak.

Reeve #19 · Apr 6th, 2014 · · 1 ·

4189925 God forbid the author might care that not everyone who reads his story is going to suck his dick (you know, that guy my comment was directed at) If I dislike a story that looks like it had some semblance of effort put into it, then I'm going to have the courtesy to say why.

4191235 Hey, guess what? Co-author account here. I'm 1/2 the author honey. Also, neither of us exactly have dicks to suck, you know, being girls and all. A little bit of research goes a long way. And if you want to say why, here's an idea: tell us what you thought was wrong with it instead of just saying you didn't like it or that you didn't find it funny.


4190484 I thought about that after we'd finished writing it, but at that point it was too late to go back and change everything. It was easier to just publish it with ponies instead of EqG verse.

Reeve #21 · Apr 6th, 2014 · · 1 ·

4191957 I did tell you why, this story is a comedy which I didn't find funny, for the simple reason that a bunch of broken up voice-mail messages with no connectivity or humour beyond 'my voice sounds silly because I'm drunk' just isn't funny to me.

4192072 Well, it's funny to us and the other fifty-six people who favorited this story, so you can take your opinion and try to straighten it out a bit, yeah?

4192072 You saying 'no this isnt funny' and 'other people have done it better' is not an explanation as to why you didn't find the story funny. Try to give more in-depth reviews instead of just saying you didnt find it funny. Tell us why it wasn't funny. Tell us how to make it funny. Don't just tell us it wasn't funny because that doesn't help anybody. That just causes irritation, and nobody really cares what you have to say since it's not helpful in the slightest. Next time, just tell us what was good or what wasn't good so we have more to go off of than just 'it wasn't funny'.

4188518

...Wow. I mean, no constructive criticism? No suggestions on how to make it better? And probably a dislike too, to go along with it? As far as I'm concerned, you're no better than the people who anonymously thumbs-down a fic just because you feel like it could be a bit better. Why even bother saying anything at all? You bring nothing but negativity to the table. You say people elsewhere have done it better. Who? When? How? Explain your reasoning. What makes you think that/those works are so much better? What do you have to offer in terms of how the author could improve the work?

My guess is nothing. So stop being a jerkass and just move on.

...Oh! And have a nice day! :scootangel:

This is great:rainbowlaugh:

I :heart: you two for making this!

did you catch the typo she mostly frowned it upon it

What a riot. :rainbowlaugh:

*sigh* This site needs more laughing emoticons.

I'm never getting tired of drunk ponies.:pinkiecrazy:

:heart: This made me giggle so much :heart:

4192274 Why on Earth should he have to change his opinion? Just because you and fifty-five other people like this doesn't automatically make it funny.

4199810 I didn't mean he had to change it, he just didn't have to be rude about it.

4201692

so you can take your opinion and try to straighten it out a bit, yeah?

Really? Because that sure does make it sound like you want him to change his opinion.

I have. Feeling this is how most of their conversations go.

Hi! I just wanted to let you two know that I did a dramatic reading of this story. Side note: this might be one of my favorite readings I've done... Thanks again for writing such a hilarious story! :rainbowlaugh:

4472009 Aaaah, thank you, dearie! :heart: *glomps*

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I can't think of a more tasteless fic. You had a great narrative trick here with the interconnected voice messages telling the story, but while I'm all for "people being drunk" being the sole vehicle for humor, well...

After the first call, my initial reaction was "Octavia is a terrible marefriend for not picking Vinyl up when she's drunk". Then I reasoned that, well, assault and so forth aren't as likely to happen in Equestria, so maybe it's a non-issue. But then Vinyl jokes about maybe getting raped or mugged, and that's what destroyed this story. If that line (and the one about Neon slipping something in her drink) hadn't happened, this would have been fun. Instead, I could only think that Octavia is the worst person in the world for not heeding the danger and rescuing Vinyl. They quite honestly should break up, as they obviously have nothing in common and with Octavia's lack of concern for Vinyl, they shouldn't even be friends.

I'm sorry, this doesn't work at all.

Dear gods. This brought back some memories. I even drunk dialed myself and left some Fucking hilarious Notes on world domination using cupcake wrappers. True story. Ahh good times...save for the hangovers..... Would love to read one where Octavia has to pick her up and hears the police tell her what they did.

Ok from what I understand is that you and another person wrote this, I honestly think that's pretty impressive. Me and my friend share this he's in Korea and I'm in America, anyways to the story.

You two did really good it was well written, funny and not a waste of my time. I liked every part of it and hope to see more from you two, I also want to commemorate the way you girls responded to Reeve, it wasn't GET THE B**K OUT, it was please don't say that kind of stuff it doesn't help any.

Now,
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Till the next one

-R

heard lost narrator's reading of this and it makes me laugh everytime i hear it.

Also, i hope you don't mind, but i kinda of have this fic cannoned for the world one of my own fics has, if only because of Vinyl's line about how she couldn't be a mom and that not becoming a mom was her dying wish.

*Flops over and laughs.* This was so funny to read! Some drunks are so much fun! :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowlaugh: I can't breathe!

I'm betting the police visit went something like this...

"Vinyl!" a voice called.

"Yeah, that's my girl. We're in this one Octy!"

"There you are!"

"You know Octy you always look so cute when you're mad and right about now you look very very cute."

"Wait till we get home. Then I'll be absolutely adorable!"

Okay, I just listened to the youtube reading. Listening to Vynl's speaking when she's drunk, not to mention the background antics of the other ponies...had my laughing in my own room. My family must have thought I was insane.

:rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile::yay:

Wow this was hilarious :rainbowlaugh:. Great story. Now the only question is

“Damn-fucking-nation!” Vinyl screeched. “Octavia, listen, you need to pick us up, like now. Neon and Pinkie’s coltfriend are beating the crap out of each other and I dunno why. I’d call the cops, but we’re kinda trying to avoid them now so - No, Pinkie, I am not taking sides! What is wrong with you?!”

Who won? :trixieshiftright:

I saw the YouTube showing of this a few months back it was just as funny as this was too read. This was wonderful what a great way to start ones night. Such a good story.

TheLostNarrator bought me here, I can't believe I didn't find this sooner!

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