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Mariacheat-Brony


Hey there, Mariacheat-Brony here, Belgian Brony writer. Favorite Ponies : Vinyl Scratch & Applejack \OCTASCRATCH FOR THE WIN/

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It's been three months since Vinyl was forced to move out of Octavia's house.
The cellist couldn't handle the constant arguments that were filling their daily lives together.
Octavia's friends and family support her decision to get away from the DJ by offering all the help she needs.... even a bit too much....

Octavia still gets angry whenever Vinyl Scratch, or anything related to her (like her wub-powered dishwasher) is ever mentioned in a conversation. She wants her friends and family to stop pestering her about it for that part of her life is done.....
....
..... Or is it?



Just a silly idea I got while cycling back home two days ago.... What's the correlation between the theme of the story and cycling?
Honestly, I'm still searching... :applejackunsure:

Anyway, Second real PONY Fiction. and WITHOUT the AU tag THIS TIME!!!! :pinkiegasp:

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 42 )

Not much for Soarin'/Spitfire, but...
Great Tavi/Scratch as usual :raritywink:

That was awesome. I have nothing to complain about.

‘’OH YES! USE YOUR HORN MORE, YOU DIRTY LITTLE DJ!!’’ Octavia’s voice was heard in what couldn’t be interpreted as anything other than a sexually satisfied yell.

Lost it here. :rainbowlaugh:

Well done!

that was pretty awesome. i kinda want more, yet am satisfied with just a one shot. :twilightsmile:

3675081 I agree with you here, that was the point where I couldn't hold in myself upright.:rainbowlaugh:

TaviScratch needs for the day are satisfied, thank-you :heart:

Great little one shot! :) made me excited about octascratch again lol@wub powered dishwasher! I need one!! Merry Xmas my friend! Have a wonderful holiday :)

Heh heh, very nice. Very nice indeed.

for a minute there i thought spitfire was the one hitting on octavia XD


very cute story ! loved it x3

Merry Christmas you fabulous pony!

That bonus ending!:rainbowlaugh:

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Yes, at least someone was tricked :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Rather nice.

It was pretty good story. Nothing extraordinary, but simple and entertaining. The last part confused me a bit until I realized that they were in Spitfire's apartment. Why was Vinyl there anyway?

Oh, and Soarin'/ Spitfire? Have a like.

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Vinyĺ's living with Spitfire since she had to move out of Octavia's house... I forgot to write it more explicitly...

Yay! Very Popular box for more than a day!

Gah. Grats on 'Popular Box'. :rainbowwild:

I SHALL BE THERE ONE DAY. JUST YOU WAIT.

Now on to add this to 'Read-Later'.

‘’Are you sure you don’t want me to check what was that noise, Spitfire?’’ Soarin asked slowly as his marefriend searched through her nightstand drawer. ‘’What if it’s a burglar?’'

‘’It’s no burglar, Soarin,’’ Spitfire groaned before finding what she was looking for. ‘’Octavia’s probably visiting Vinyl!’'

‘’Oh, dang! They’re fighting?’’ Soaring asked with worry as he heard loud springs noises coming from outside the bedroom.

‘’No worries, Babe. Just use these!’’ the yellow pegasus-mare advised, while extending something to her lover.

‘’Earplugs?’’ Soarin cocked an eyebrow at what Spitfire gave him. “Why would I need…”

‘’OH YES! USE YOUR HORN MORE, YOU DIRTY LITTLE DJ!!’’ Octavia’s voice was heard in what couldn’t be interpreted as anything other than a sexually satisfied yell.

Best. Part. Ever.

God... I was so ready for clop somehow o.o

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Is Tavi´s mom oblivious to her daughter´ sexual preferences, or simply stubborn?

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She thinks that her daughter swings both ways, and tries to get her with a stallion, 'cause it's more normal... and that she wants grandfoals

3676310 I did not realize she laughed for a full minute

Wait. Rarijack and Pinkyra?! :pinkiegasp:

Comment posted by MoonlightShine deleted Dec 29th, 2013

>>MoonlightShine why did you delete your reply to me :pinkiesad2:

LOL awesome. I must admit I glanced ahead to make sure they get back together, and spoiled the ruse for myself. Fortunatly the most enjoyable part of this fic is Vinyl and Octavia's time together, not the surprise that they actually are together. Not knowing would have stressed me out anyway, and I wouldn't have been able to enjoy the story as much as I did.:pinkiehappy:

3698464 I thought that Octavia was implying that Lyra was with Bon-Bon. But I could be wrong. I've never even imagined Pinkie Pie with Lyra. That ought to be interesting. But with Lyra often being written as quirky and obsessed with the paranormal, or conspiracy theories, or humans, and Pinkie being canonically out of her mind, there wouldn't be much balance there. :P

3892444 no you're right, it's Bon-Bon I over-reacted at sweets maker. :twilightblush:

3893594 Easy to mix up an apprentice baker and a confectioner. I'm pretty sure that bakeries sometimes make candy, but I could be wrong. And now I want to see Pinkie Pie and Bon-Bon working together.

3895820 yeah that would be funny

This is a great story and I really enjoyed it.

It just makes so much sense really.

It took a lot of willpower, but Vinyl’s horn lit up in a grey aura that surrounded the cellist’s body.

I love you

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I appreciate the sentiment, but I'm not sure I understand why :derpytongue2:

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:twilightblush:Yeah I probably should have been more specific. I adore the idea of Vinyl's magic being grey. It's just so cute :rainbowkiss:

Melodia Forte is Vinyl's middle name, head cannon accepted, it's fitting really, while I don"5 know much Italian, it probably means loud music, how fitting for her wubs.

OH YES! USE YOUR HORN MORE, YOU DIRTY LITTLE DJ!!

epic nose bleed moment there.

YOU WROTE THIS AND THE GTVS??!?!?!?! I wish I'd known about your other work sooner holy crap that is the best OctoScratch story I've ever read!!!

Wow, that was great! I didn't really see that end part coming either! Well written, good characters, interesting ideas, and even playfully suggestive. I liked it a lot! :raritywink:

I suggest to let sink in details over time.
Makes it more subtle... doesn't break the flow so much... Or split it even harder, like on introducing a pony coming after the talks.

Breaking a conversation up like this however, feels a bit stiff to read.

To give a haircolor impression a gesture can help.
Example: The mare touched her pink locks... ;)

“Listen to me, Vinyl Melodia Forte Scratch, and listen to me carefully!”

That full name needs to be canon. Now. :rainbowlaugh:

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