Vinyl Wakes up on the last day of her stay in Manehatten, soon to leave for Ponyville. She bumps into Octavia on the way and they soon realize they are roommates. The story revolves around the two ponies and how they eventually become best friends, or maybe even more than that.
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Expert story, portrayed in a thoughtful manner, I hereby bestow upon this story five twilight smiles!
I hope you're up for that schedule. Just don't diminish quality for quantity. And well done so far.
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I agree. You may have trouble with that when the story starts to develop more depending on how long you are going to make it. If you can keep the quality good with a chapter a day, do it. If not give a couple days if you're unsure on a chapter. Very good story so far. Can't wait for more.
Really good chapter, I'm really enjoying how this one is starting. What I do not enjoy, however, is the french. The differences between my head translation and the given translation seems to suggest usage of some internet translation thing. At best it's kinda dated.
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Yeah, you're right, I did use a translator because I'm American and my french class was dropped.
Google translator has it's ups and downs.
Clever pun with the landlords name there, I like it. Can't wait for more!
Great story so far. And I did notice the titles.
Can't wait for more. Here are some small grammatical errors I caught while reading.
The unicorn pressed her upper bod close the the ground, lifting her flank in the air.
Body*
The unicorn lifted the land pony into the air, causing her to flail her arms and legs about.
Shouldn't it be EARTH pony??
“Getting in head of myself.
Ahead*
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I blame the late night typing.
Will fix when possible. thank you! :D
EDIT: aaaaand done. x3
Dude, Roofus is awesome!
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Fun fact: Roofus is actually modled after my land lord, who gave my family our apartment for two months free.
795047 Awesome! I wish my landlord was that awesome.
hey jonnny-bell this story of yours is really awesome and i cant wait to read the next chapter keep on weighting noman01
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Thank you so much for reading!
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It's comments like this that make me want to KEEP writing up the story.
you're all awesome.
(except that one down-voter. You sir/ma'am, can burn in a fire.
i give a good
i like it so far
This is a different angle on this couple so... I like so make more please! Unless you're busy then take your time.
dawwwwwwwww
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ah yes the ever so infamous G.T.
lol
Well done as a rewarded I shall gift you a Ditzy
Enjoy
Wow! I never expected this much positive feedback! You're all awesome, I really can't think of a way to thank you all. (Well, ok, I'm working on the next chapter as we...I..type..) Thanks everyone for reading, and I promise there will be more.
Looks very promising. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes, and Tavi and Vinyl end up friends with! (Insert both Octavia and Vinyl Scratch emoticons...)
I like this story!
I'm liking this story a lot. Just noticed a few things like the Carousel/Rarity's boutique naming.
ed at the references.
You give an original take on this ship which I like.
And I
I'm guessing you have watched epic wub time?
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Haha, as a matter of fact I have. and I use my favorite line from that too.
"Why do I even have this?" *Throw object in a fire*
I really like this story! Not much else to say.
awesome chapter johnny-bell i love this story and im looking forward to the next chapter
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That's what I thought.
Well I'm creeped out.
Here I am reading and listening to a random selection of music, you know. But as I'm reading the part where Vinyl sings One Trick Pony to herself, guess what song starts to play. Yeah. That's right. One. Trick. Pony.
I know the chances are pretty likely, it's a well know song but it still freaked me out.
Love the story so far by the way!
Awesome! I'm enjoying this fic quite a bit!
One thing, I noticed a little mistake. "She then go tin the tub once it was to her liking, and called for her roommate."
I avidly await the next update. Well, after I go to sleep that is.
I like how you connect things like this! And thus: Please please please don't stop this fic ever!
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well crap. even if I double check it errors still slip through.
Thanks for catching that! Fixed.
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haha, with my imagination, this story could go on for AGES.
But, knowing how I like long stories anyway....
We'll just see what happens, aye?
842727 Long slice of life story? Excuse me one moment.... OK now watch.
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You, have officially made my night awesome.
Thank you.
842766 You are welcome!
I like using Nostalgia Critic whenever I can!
842747 lol. Good find. Accurate too.
I'm keen to see this keep going. You are developing their relationship at a great pace and keeping it in with the tv series in a great way.
I love it so far!
one mistake though “Celestia wants me to play at the Grand Galloping Galla!”
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now it might be the fact that it's a little after midnight, and I can't see at the moment...
but where's the mistake in there?
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there is only supposed to be one l in gala
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Oh yes. Of course. Thank you and fixed.
Hey Johnny_Bell its noman01 for some reason i have made it a habit to comment on ever chapter well its probably because this story is
sooooo good well can't wait for the next chapter this one was great
Really good slice of life story along with nicely timed romance! Please continue!
i agree. it all pans out in good time instead of all right away.
“But I love that, and I love you.” D'aaaaawwwwww!!!
can't wait for the next chapter!
good chapter
Awesome
Longer chapters would be great too.
i imagined the whole dance and song routine in my mind while reading this. it was so heart warming and beautiful.
Vinyl trying to be fancy... I'm already laughing
Keep at it
Love the story
Great chapter! I really enjoyed the dance scene.