Applebloom and Sweetie Belle can see plain as day that their sisters like each other. They just won't admit it. Now the duo, with the help of a few of their big sisters' friends, take it upon themselves to bring their sisters closer than ever!
The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.
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Seems interesting…I wanna see how this turns out...
Rarijack is always welcome.
I'll see how this goes... But I have one question. Why did you humanize?
4153027 I'm kinda a humanized author
4153056

Ah, well that's fine, if you feel more comfortable with it. I just wanted to ask.
But the story is so far good, and I really enjoy Rarijack, hehe..
Human Rarijack? You've got me! This seems to be pretty interesting, I want to see how things are going to turn out
They're no strangers to love, you know the rules..
And so do iiiiiii!
This is shaping up to be interesting, only problem that could arise in my opinion is that it is going to be quite restricting writing only from Applebloom first person prospective...
4155997 actually, it'll be from both Applebloom and Sweetie Belles perspective. It will flip flop each chapter. :)
Who is the creator of the cover?
HM, interesting! I liked it. I know Applebloom is southern, but I didn't like all the "Ah"s. I know they meant "I", but still. They confused me a bit. Other then that, nice story!!!!!

4157207 http://tatinee.deviantart.com/art/Applejack-Rarity-442066232

4157317 thx


This was great.
My only advice would be to tone down the Southern accent a smidgen. It was distracting me a little from the story.

Keep it up.
ooooh, it´s ramping up! This will be interesting!
Nice.Looking forward to more.
Doesn't Applebloom remember what happened last time she tried to set up one of her siblings in a relationship?
This is a bit random but it just a cured to me........what does the humanized CMC do? Humans don't get cutie marks (well maybe in some universes but I'm thinking about regular humans).
4158741 well, they still look for their speical talents, but not to get a tramp stamp. so they're still looking for a career, just not, you know for a butt tattoo.
4158662 there's no love potions this time i swear!

4158776
works for me
4158776
Shame, butt tattoos are one of the few things in life that you can't regret.
4159170 true, true.
my thought at reading that last sentence literally was just:
sh
t... this is gonna be interesting
hmm very interesting
i smell really akward moments for rarity and applejack while their little sisters giggle in a bush, or under a cardboard box
IT SMELLS DELICOUS!!!
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muy bueno y espero su primer intento de cupido
WRITEEEEEEEEEEE MOREEEEEEEEE OR I WILL GO INSANE FROM CLIFFHANGERS

























































uuuuugh the wait is killing meeeeeeeee
I think she'd be "mad," rather.
But other than that, good chap.
4239065 oh man its a good thing you spotted that. Thank you!
There's your opportunity AJ, you can do it!
Nice chapter!
That's definitely one of the funniest things I've heard all week.
Why do I get the feeling that AB and Sweetie are gonna hook up?
Foreshadow?
Also, lesbian bank robbers reminds me of this music video:
Plot twist: Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle will end up together.
I be like:
[youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=l8AioTlq4dc]
4242731 shhhhhhs! ;)
I really love this set up the relationship fanfictions. They are often times hilarious, like this one. Now I wonder what Rarity and Applejack were talking about though.....
Aha loved this! Please update I absolutely love this story!
I finished reading it this morning and I could picture Applejack's face after Rarity's confession of her sexual orientation! I can't wait for this to go on


I've said it multiple times, GOD-DAMNIT SCOOTS!
Scootaloo, you're gonna get Rainbow Dash arrested if you start a relationship with her! And Rarity is seriously just about shovel the shit directly into a fan, which is pointed at another fan.
Poor girls, hope every things get better for them.
reminded me of when my little brother asked what gay meant, not something I thought I'd have to explain when he's not even in middle school
Love this story!
their endeavor has brought some unexpected "pleasures" to their lives I guess XD