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Think of this as the spirit successor to Mother's Day; stupid clop with a weird ending.
This was written for Incest is Wincest's threesome contest.
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I'll say it's weird. Still. Not a bad job on it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I CAN BARELY KEEP UP WITH THESE STORIES AND YOU JUST GIVE ME MORE.
you monster
2862870 I'm sorry I'm just so god damn productive
YES REGIDAR
YES!
WHERE'S MY YES GIF????
Seems legit.
2862895 Dammit, Fimfic, why do you toy with my emotions?
2862903 Because FiMFic is a playa.
You'll laugh, you'll cry, you'll get horny!
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Have I mentioned how much I love you? Because I really need to.
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Oh, it happens a lot more often than that!
2862977 I didn't feel like doing math, so I made some bullshit up
this is also how most corporations work
I really liked the original take on Applecest in the beginning, with Macintosh not really enjoying the relationship at all, because he's bored with it.
well that was different
2862984 who knows? this story coulda been great. but then I decided to write it, so it wasn't.
2863011 Shush! It was good. It wasn't really fappable, but that wasn't the point. It was a commentary on the entire idea. An interesting piece, but coming from you, I shouldn't have expected any less.
the ending killed the mood for me. o.o
Dafuq is this amazingness?!
2863174 mission accomplished
The only thing I can say now, is DAMN! Holy fuck!
2863262 is that a good "DAMN! Holy Fuck!"?
that ending
2863266 yeah! Man, that... was something. The end was fucked up, but i liked it!
2863307>>2863303 it was pretty hot, wasn't it?
2863319 It was really hot! I like this! Im thinkin about following you for this!
2863326 Do whatever your heart desires.
2863350 Really? Then... can we become friends? You sound pretty cool and all... so, yeah.
2863395 sure, we can be friends! I need more friends so I can pretend to be happy.
2863442 That sounds sad...
2863478 but it's not as sad when you pretend to be happy.
2863481 Your not happy? Why not? Maybe I can help!
I'd say what did I just read, but that is always a dumb thing to say. Creepy and funny at the same time.... (I feel dirty.)
2863695 excellent, my plan worked!
congratulations its 7 am and you have already made me say that's enough internet for today
If you believe in parallel universes this really happened.
There goes Regidar, writing more clop. This was good. You win, man. (If I chose.) (But I didn't.)
REVIEW
Reviewer: Lophane
The following review is as objective as possible but could contain some subjective influences. I'm British by birth, Kiwi by blood, and American by home, take from that what you will.
Once you’ve posted your story in the group A For Effort you’ve accepted to be reviewed. No review is made to humiliate the writer but to make him grow up and enhance his skills.
Name of story's: Isotropic Dividends
Grammar/Spelling: 9.5/10
I saw one word, frightenment, but I'm fairly sure that that was on purpose, and everyone gets what you're saying
I like the story, it has good pacing, though some might not like the interruptions.
The little tidbit about pegasus anatomy was interesting...
It's a nice little story that's fun to read
(Only three more till you're the top story contributor on the site)
Verdict:
Approved
Your story has been approved, it shall be removed from the 'under review' folder and put in the 'main' folder shortly.
Thank you for applying your story for review.
- Lophane
Damn it Regi. Now you know I'm going to riff this to pieces.
Fucken HOT!
2864168 my plan all along!
2864282 that's kinky
2864901 please do
2864965 this guy gets it!
All that's missing is a porn sound track from the 70's.
Oh, wait, I just so happen to have one right here...
2868869 I see you enjoyed it.
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It was most certainly but I didn't get over it, and I felt like that was borderline intentional.
But, hell, I've misunderstood things before. I am only a flawed, limited creature.
2868916 Whenever I write clop, I like to imagine I'm just flipping everyone off who decides to read it with the story itself.
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Oh, Regidar!
2869943 trufax right there
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I'm willing to believe it, sometimes.
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