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Suppose you found yourself in a strange body and on an unknown planet, with only a lonely dentist for company. What are you willing to do to get home? How hard would you fight? Does it matter if you're a princess or just a person?

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I like this! :rainbowlaugh: (<--- My face)
Please continue at your earliest possible convenience do it now or the puppy dies :pinkiecrazy:

In medias res. interesting. Long flashback time!

This has my interest, please continue this story!:twilightsmile:

Ah so it isn't exactly the standard Pony turns into human story... well I like her reaction to the situation, confused by trying to stay calm. Well I will have to keep an eye on this.

Oh by the way I reread Battleships this morning... you my friend have come a long way since then

Continue!

Prediction time: I'm already expecting a quick touch on WWII and humanity's qualities (good and bad) due to being in Honolulu, and, of course, the natrually TNaB U.S. Navy involvement.

Something about this is very familiar :ajbemused:

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Oh well! This story gets the Gyvon Seal of Approval (patent pending)

Refreshing and unique! Good job!

Dude. Dude. Earth. Duuudddeeee. Favorited. Dude.

:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile: That's is how much I like this story!

so crazy

Oh God This is Sure going To Be good Just Make sure your In a magic Proof Vest

curiouser and curiouser...:rainbowhuh:

more will be appreciated :pinkiehappy:

Grats on the feature.

Luna, did you lock poor Alice in the dungeon? :twilightoops:

This looks like a very good read. I'll be watching this.

Very nice, make sure that you fill it with interesting charicters or it'll fall flat after a few chapters but for now you have my attention, oh and congrats on the feauture

I like this chapter!
*slams laptop*
Another!

Interesting, it seems promising. I'll keep an eye on it.

New chapter pweeeease? :duck:

We need to see more of this story. It can be so good, and I have a feeling you won't disappoint.

For starters, we now Neeeeed to know what happened to Alice. Damn cliffhanger...

:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia: Is it another Troll for us or just a good kind of Celestia...
:rainbowhuh: Better Be Celestia- I'm sick of these trollstlias, mostelias, and stuff- It bothers me a whole lot.

BBBUUUTTT- I enjoy this story. :rainbowwild:

Nothing wrong with a sexy Celestia, nothing wrong at all.

GOD DAMN CLIFFHANGER

Over 1000 in under 24 hours!

Dafaddah

Hmmm. So Celestia and a random human changed bodies.....Ok, what the hell did Luna do to Celestia's body?

1429797
I was under the same impression.:raritywink:
Now, since you approve, this goes to my favs!

1431008
*Hands money over*
Go get yourself a new laptop. And don't smash it this time...:ajbemused:

A very intriguing story, may I make a few suggestions?

It might be an idea to describe the scene a bit more. The style seems a tad rushed. For example: Describing Luna's room in more detail.

Otherwise a brilliant story that I will be favouriting. If you ever want the services of a pre-reader I would be more than happy to lend my aid!

Cool idea and nicely written! :rainbowlaugh:

I'm glad I favourited this! Please continue!:twilightsmile:

oooooooh read the first chapter. This looks good. I arleady like how "earth" is going to be the representation of true chaos! I LOVE IT! lol

i was wondering when i'd find a Pony On Earth fic. nice to see an inverse to HiE

this looks intresting...
I'm not one to read fanfiction with Celestia because she's an all-powerful alicorn, and maybe the fact that I've got no idea how to write her, but this looks good.:raritystarry:

Interesting, but not to my taste. One thing, though. None of the US Military branches uses steel toed boots (anymore), so if those boots Celestia is lacing up are standard issue, that isn't right...

1433500 Your information conflicts with my information.

1433508

I was not aware they reinstated steel toes. I have been out since '07, so I'll take your word on it. Sorry to bother you.

Edit:
I just did a little digging, and, apparently, steel toes are still NOT standard issue. Navy personnel are required to wear them when on ships and Air Force personnel are required when on a flight line, but Standard Issue boots (black leather or tan suede) do not come with steel toe caps. There are also some career fields such as mechanics and construction that are also required, but that is due to safety issues. Base Commanders can also require them on all personnel, as they have the right (within reason) to make the written policies more strict.

Once again, standard issue boots are not steel toed.

'her expression grew sheepish. “About that...”'... *scrolls down

that's it!? You stop right there? Accursed cliffhangers!!!!
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I love this already. I'm former Navy myself (Machinist Mate 1st class, Nuclear Field), and like the idea of Celestia in blue berries (the new digital camo uniform)

1433305 There's a bunch. Try the Pony Fall series (Look for it in the groups page). In fact I'm going to be doing a similar thing (Twilight on a human space craft) after my current story is done.
1433500 1433508 I just got out in '09 and steel toe wasn't standard, but a lot of sailors still got them. Where did you get your information from?

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