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Golden Script

"Love is friendship set to music." -Joseph Campbell


"The worst thing a human can be is alone."

Time, the ever-flowing measure of action. It is not a physical thing that one can touch or feel, but an abstract thought of the difference between now, then, and later. It is the indefinite continued progress of existence. What happens when one has the ability to control time? He is deemed one of the most powerful beings on the planet, for he can stop you in your tracks without any effort at all.

I am this being.

I control Time.

This is a rewrite of the rewrite. The original Time and Time Again has been removed. I hope you all enjoy this version better.

The picture is credited to Shoshin005. I added the words myself with a simple editing tool. (why can't full Pixlr be free anymore?! :raritydespair:)

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Can't wait to see how things change, my friend.

Lets see whats new goldie, im just dying to know what goes on :pinkiehappy:

Liking it so far, not gonna lie. Good luck with the rewrite Goldie!

The teacher's name is 'Cheerilee', and Discord doesn't sew chaos, he sows it. (Those and a few other minor things were corrected in the GDoc, I believe.)

Other than those, looks good.

So do I. :twilightsmile: (meaning I myself have no clue. :twilightblush:)

Thanks, and I'll need all the luck I can get. :twilightblush:

Great! :pinkiehappy: One question, though: Yes to what? :rainbowhuh:

Thanks, didn't realize. Sorry. :twilightblush::ajsleepy:

Grazie! :pinkiehappy:

And much like Yoda, you speak. :derpytongue2:

5792133 Only Pinkie shall know what we mean by this, thou hast to speak with her.

*whispers are heard from beyond the fourth wall* I see.

You, my good sir/madam, are devilishly clever. :rainbowdetermined2:

5792152 *gives a gleeful glimmer as we wiggle with jovial praise.*

5792171 Thou seems to enjoy the memes? We have always wondered of their magic of reference.

Eh, I reference them when it seems appropriate. Like if there's an incredibly hammy and over the top comedy going around...

Or Gilgamesh stops by. :applejackunsure: (totes cereal)

5792133 Yeah, I do that from time to time without realising.
I didn't notice until after posting, but didn't delete it because it still said what I needed.

Not accepting crossovers


I see. You're a very archaic person! :pinkiehappy:

If you want, you can PM me your character's info and stuff. There will still be crossovers. (i.e. the Gilgamesh crossover from the first version will be kept, same with the Nemesis one. They are large plot drivers, one of which is required)

I'll still be accepting crossovers, just not as freely as before. Not everyone that asks will get a crossover. Sorry.

*hugs you back happily*

I like hugs. :heart:

What will changes....will the previous story be a spoiler or this will goes on a different road...

>still needs to read original

Slightly different, yes. The other story will contain a few spoilers, but nothing too big.

I'd recommend not reading TTo if you're going to read this.

5792251 Here we go again...different theme for different story but meh....it feel fit somehow....

Thanks! It does seem to fit, doesn't it?

I liked the concept of the last one til you brought in MPD, still read it nonetheless though. Favorited to see where you go with this version.

Well, that happened.

Let's see where you take us this time. :twilightsmile:

It doesn't matter, what matters our dear Displaced is back in action! Once crossovers are back on acceptable... Well, let's just say I am really hoping for a certain meeting.

5792504 And now I feel like listening to this for the rest of my life for no godam reason...

Well, that was a short wait for me at least. Onwards and upwads to the next update! Also, can't wait to see what changes between the first version, and this story.

I am welcomed. :rainbowderp: Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

Hey, if you want to read it, then read it! I've been told it's a good read, but I don't believe it. :applejackunsure: (probably the whole "writer is biased against their own work because they always see how to improve it" thing, probably)

Well, thanks. TaTA will also have DID. (Dissociative Identity Disorder) Sorry. What about it didn't you like? Maybe I can try and fix it this time! :raritystarry:

Oh, you fun-loving little commenters. You're in for a surprise!

(I was looking for an evil laugh and this is the best I could get. :applejackunsure:)

And that we will.

That it did. And I'm just as curious as all of you! :pinkiehappy:

Thanks, and it might be a while until his universe is open like that. Sorry. I plan to have the plot play out the entire way before letting non-plot building characters in.


Good! I don't like keeping people waiting, and I hate waiting, myself.



It is? :twilightoops: Cool! :pinkiehappy:

Edit: only in the non-mature features, but still featured.

So, is our crossover still mostly the same? Gilgamesh still hasn't forgotten his promise, and he will follow through with it as soon as he can.

Praise Sheogorath, it's back! And you to Golden. If I say that I missed you, will you believe me?
Of course you would because Geoff says so! Oh, and tell Geoff that Carlos is still expecting his $600 back.

Damn, impressive. This reads like you took the original and went over it with a professional editor, ironing out all the kinks. It really shows how much you've learned since the original. It's nothing really concrete I can point out, just a general improvement in how it flows, fits together and feels.

That it is, though there will have to be a few changes that I'll need your help implementing. We can go in and do the edits whenever you want, but there's not very many and they should be fairly easy to fix.

That it is and that I am. I enjoy it, too.
Goff tells me he payed Carly back, but he doesn't exactly have the best track-record for telling the truth, does he? I'll try to get the truth out of him. Sorry.


Don't tell Carlos I called him Carly, I know how much he hates me for it.

Um... thank you. Seriously, I don't know how to respond to this. I'm not a professional by a long shot, but all I did was go over it a couple of times. There's even a few mistakes, if a friend of mine is accurate--and I'm pretty sure he is.

Anyway, thanks! I really enjoy writing for me and all of you, and when someone tells me my writing's good it makes my heart swell with pride and joy.

Thank you.

5796420 you might want to talk to TGM as well. Remember, Nemesis is related to why Gilgamesh beats up Discord.

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