• Member Since 30th Jan, 2013
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Golden Script


"Love is friendship set to music." -Joseph Campbell

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Hi, my name's Golden Script. I'm a standard Pony: a job, a marefriend, a life. I had it all, when it came to satisfaction and happiness.... This is my story.


Looking for cover ideas. photos that need minor edits are acceptable.

Romance tag because there will be romantic elements in the story—just like there are romantic aspects to life.

Sex tag because this is meant to be a realistic account of a living, breathing being. Much like romance, sex is a part of life, and it'll be portrayed here (though in a subdued manner. Nothing overt).

More tags may be added later if the story takes me to a point where I think another one is necessary or if someone comments or messages me about a tag they feel applies.

This description will be changed when something regarding the story changes. (i.e. new tags, later plot developments, featured, etc.) Please stay tuned and check in when you can to see if something has happened, if you can.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 23 )

Hmmm.

I like it.

I always loved Script and Carrot Top (Golden Harvest.)s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/23/15/f2/2315f21eb0a9eadf23dccf22c0cae8aa.jpg

A story about their son could be interesting, depending on where this goes.

I think a nice cover would be a series of Family pics,

Him as a baby, him and his sister,

Then a family pic,

Then him and his Girlfriend.

Also, whose wedding was that?

Derpy and the Doctor? Maybe?

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I discovered the ship was real when I googled Golden Script. :twilightsheepish:

The family photo idea is something I'll definitely look into (maybe even hire a real artist to draw!)

And...

A story about their son could be interesting,

Son? :duck: Is Golden Script their son? :ajsmug:

7847896 ...I suppose there really isn't anything really saying that he is a he. But nothing saying she is a she either.

Was that intentional?

7847938
That it was--and it's mostly because of what Golden realizes later in life.

Still no gender specifics?

What are you playing at?

Also that not so subtle mix up.

Why would you say "Chri-" instead of the name?

Why not simply edit it out?

What are you up to?

Two chapters in and I only have more questions!

7848468
The "Chri-" thing was a play on Christ. Because, growing up in the Midwest, whenever the words "birth" and "of" are strung together, "Christ" is usually the word that comes next. :applejackunsure:

Although, it could be something else... :trollestia:

7848468
Also, yeah. No gender, yet. I probably won't confirm anything, but there will be a chapter coming up soon that addresses it.

7848482 ....kay....:twilightsheepish:

Alright. I normally like stories about male characters, nothing against others just seem to identify with them more. But perhaps leaving androgynous would be good, serve me right to not be so close minded.

7848604
If you want you can read Golden as male. Just know that it's not specified anywhere. :twilightsmile:

7848661 Are you saying that to trick me? Like I'll be reading and all the sudden....WHOOOOOAAAAAA!!!!

Trying to teach me life lessons, sham on you.

7848671
Eeyup. The life lesson is to never trust those in power, as I have power over my story and your perception of the world I'm showing you. :eeyup::rainbowderp::coolphoto:

7848890 Curses!

Still I like it!

Is it fair to say 'he' now?

7857494 The use of thrust.

Okay, granted I am rather naive to the anatomy of sensual aspects of eroticism.

Answer me a this:

Will it be revealed? Is there a gender to Goldie or is it meant to and will continue to be androgynous?

7857518
There is a specific gender, and I think the next chapter will address that. It's important to that chapter, but what gold has between the legs is irrelevant to the story, so gold leaves it out as much as possible.

In truth, the reason it's so androgynous so far is because I'm still deciding whether to make Golden a boy or a girl. Honestly, I'd like it both ways, but we all know that's not how anatomy works... sadly...

7857559 I suppose it doesn't. Still, to me, it's another level of Immersion.

Personally, I vote male, one I am one and relate better, but I will enjoy regardless.

7857644
Thanks for the feedback. I've been leaning towards male since the beginning. I think this next chapter will be the deciding one. I'll start writing it sometime tonight.

Ah and now we know. And I must admit, a clever way to do it.

Dammit Written! I expected better from you!!

I hope this isn't the end of their marriage.

Well done!

7858585
That we do... shame it had to come about like this.

And you do know Gold has another sister--one that's almost a decade younger. I'm not completely sure what will happen to their family, but it's definitely not the end...

for now.... :trollestia:

7858612 I didn't forget, I was gonna not mention it, but then I realized that it was never mentioned that the third sibling was a full or half.

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